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Flamelord said
I'm not sure Mokou counts as an innocent person :p Besides, it's just in your head anyway, and is supposed to fade once you look away from Ghost Rider. So unless he was actually stabbed, he'll be fine.


Doesn't mean it doesn't hurt like hell though :P
Revans Exile said
I'm leaving this for the same reason I don't do advanced, whole lot of posts are made and a whole lot of nothing is getting done. I read through five posts (all of which had the exact same opening paragraph with varying descriptors) and not a damn thing was done except for people to post exposition after exposition after exposition.


You know, you could always try to start something yourself. Like, say, have your two characters start to walk off in some direction; it's likely that at least some characters will follow you.

(Meanwhile, nobody cares about poor Felt collapsing to the ground due to sort-of-technically being stabbed with his own sword. D:.)
Okay, sure, they were in a patchwork world where physics were probably not the most stable force in the 'world', but even according to those standards this was still insane. As if that was not enough, the rest of the world around them quickly followed rearranging itself, parts and pieces changing shape seemingly at random. In combination with the giant thunderstorms and everything slowly fading to grey, there was little other description for the events than 'apocalypse'.
It reminded Felt of what happaned to Eden, only a lot worse. At least parts of Eden had survived. In this case, it looked like everything was getting destroyed. In the last second before the world shattered, the young alchemist wondered if this was what it felt like for the people on the lost continents.

...Except for that, an unknown amount of time later, everything was back to normal. Well, sort of, at least; where previously the group was in some kind of bizarre city, they now found themselves in a green valley. Similiarly, the patchwork sky had made place for a clean blue one, snow-topped mountains completing the panorama. If nothing else, the place looked a lot more inviting than the previous location -- although the mission involving a legendary dragon didn't sound quite as appealing.
In absence of any immediate threat, Felt decided to take one of his own potions in an attempt to ward of the ever-increasing headache all of this interdimensional mucking about was giving him. Sure, it might not be designed for common pains like that, but a placebo efect goes a long way. With this problem taken care of, the young alchemist tried to listen in on the conversation, seeing if there was anything he could do to help. Although he hadn't ever actually met one, one of the tomes in the Eden Library did say something about dragons being weak to ice. Or was that resistant? The more he tried to remember it, the more it seemed to slip away. Well, I guess that's karmic justice for dozing off in class... . Well, one way or another, it wouldn't hurt to create a few Ice Bombs in preparation. Maybe he should hand a few out to some of the others too? On the other hand, he had no idea who he could trust. Whitney and Kaguya seemed nice enough -- or at the least too oblivious to be dangerous --, but the rest ranged from unknown to radiating 'Do not trust me, I'm obviously an evil overlord'. And then there was this skeleton on some kind o-
Felt's thoughts were cut short when sddenly his stomach felt like it was cut upen. In fact, this was exactly what it felt like; although the young swordsman didn't realize this, the pain exactly mirrored the injury he had brought to Mokou earlier that 'day'. Clutching his abdomen in pain, Felt grunted as he sank to the ground. Although the searing pain started to fade quickly after breaking eye contact with the skeleton, the impact on his body was still there, leaving Felt shaking on the ground, his breathing obviously jagged.
JonxlatheLion said
Yes.


Welp, at least supernovae tend to kill people pretty much instantly. So technically they never felt pain. Loophole abuse, go XD!
Eviledd1984 said
I was thinking of having Joker talk to Ghost Rider and Connor to do something perhaps follow behind someone.


Go for it, I guess. Just note that with a character like the Joker, who has ndoubtly tortured a crapton of people, there will be consequences if their eyes meet >=D.
Question about Johnny Blaze: Would certain semi-magical swords created through Alchemy count as a heavenly weapon?
JonxlatheLion said
And how do you mean meaningless numbers? I can edit the post a little but I don't see how it could help... :/

EDIT: Yeah i'm looking at it now.... to turn it into two paragraphs would make it inappropriate structure wise. It's all the same basic subject.


A simple fix would be to add a few spaces/indentation just before each new power (note: that's spaces, not line breaks), assuming that this forum allows for that in the first place.
- Look at a random thick book to see what I mean. Most of them will have lines where the 'speaker' changes from one character to another offset a bit to the right, this allowing the reader to instantly notice when this shift happens. It really helps to stop the book to change into a giant wall of text.
- Alternatively, you can add dashes in front of each new power, or bold the name of each power/ability.

As for what I mean with meaningless numbers:
<snip> "Johnny Blaze is one of the strongest and most powerful beings on the planet, while the Ghost Rider, is for all intents and purposes described as boundless in power to the extent where the Ghost Rider was able to defeat Dr. Strange in battle (>This part>) [16]; << the Ghost Rider is one of the most powerful beings in the Universe.<snip>


These bracketed numbers pop up in several places around the post. Am I right to assume you copied the whole deal off of a wiki somewhere?
Same here. Some characters have had the option of talking to each other, but even that stops being an option after a while.

EDIT: Ahem. This post was meant to agree with the posts about the challenges starting now.

EDIT 2:
Lost Cause said
Um... just a quick pointer; it's considered a definite no-no to force effects like that on characters. Especially when said effect is 'put the character in constant pain forever'.


Also, this. Very much this. Which group did Johnny Blaze appear in anyway? (By the way, could you do me a favour and edit the formatting of your CS post a bit? The Wall of text is really hard to read, and what were once footnotes are showing as now meaningless numbers.)
Merk.. I'm sorry about not posting lately, guys. Real Life sort of got in the way >_<
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Inb4 Whitney tries to throw a Poké Ball at Felt XD.
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