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Then, the smell of burnt food made the two boys turned their attention to the bacons in the pan.

"...Ah."

... ...

The twins sat down in the living room, the breakfast filled up the small coffee table in the middle (still edible, just slightly burnt).


What is this bullshit? Everyone knows bacon is best crispy!
@Nosuchthing Actually, I thought about it and her power isn't really that worse than the replicators (Especially since she only changes power once a week). Just run the powers by me and she is accepted.


Woot woot.

And to everyone in general, specifically @Fernstone and @Mr Allen J, do we have specific ideas for Alice, Max and Cindy's relationship? Coworkers? Frequent partners? History with other metahumans?

And my IC post will be done by tomorrow.
Right, here is my kiddie. I've found a randomiser that can share tickets, so it can help me flex my creative muscles with regards to the powers a little. I will also be adding to the power list as the RP continues, but right now I need a break from writing characters, and to start work on my IC post :D.



Ok, not sure if I've just missed it or something, but is there an Academy in Baybridge? I'm thinking it would make sense if it's a large conurbation of metahumans, but just checking :D
I will hopefully finish my Academy student sometime tomorrow, but I am at work early tomorrow. So I bid thee all good night!

XD


Ok, I tried just scrapping the personality entirely and rewriting it, maybe that helped :D.

Also, I am planning to create an academy kid as well :)
@NosuchthingI'm reading "genuinely a good man" and "enjoys killing and torturing certain kinds of people" over and over again in your sheet. The repetitiveness sounds like someone talking to themselves and trying to rationalize murder. I don't think that's how you're gonna convince the reader that Matthew means well.

I'm also expecting him to commit suicide since he has a power too.


He is trying to rationalise murder...

I know someone who is actually quite a nice bloke, very polite, very intelligent, kind of guy that you wouldn't mind having a few drinks with or having around for dinner. He just happens to think that all non-white British are scum and should be deported.

Matthew is simply the same thing but with delusions.

And as to him having a power, he's obsessed, stands to reason that someone whose purpose it is to punish metahumans would be immune to metahumans. At least in his mind.

@Nosuchthing Matthew's sheet is... weird, to say the least. I can't get a good grasp on his character because it feels like the serial killer aspects are tacked on tbh. You keep mentioning how he's such a great person - that just so happens to kill people. I know what you're going for, but it could be phrased much better.


I'll see what I can do :)

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OK, I've tweaked him a little, trying to make him sound less like a serial killer and more like a vigilante who exclusively targets criminal metahumans, albeit with far more lethal force than is perhaps necessary. Let me know what you think @Mr Allen J


Edit: fixed... I think XD
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