Nyctophilia
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STATUS: If it isn't broken, take it apart and fix it anyway. 8 yrs ago
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If it isn't broken, take it apart and fix it anyway.
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Nyctophilia: A preference for the night or darkness.
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@Nyctophilia I have several problems with your CS. One- the appearance. It needs to be a bit more detailed. 'Tall for age'? Can I know how tall he is, please? Also, why in the world is he in Gryffindor? Looking at his personality, I can easily deduce that he belongs in Ravenclaw. Unless there is a facet of his personality that you are forgetting- something that tells me that he's brave, daring, or is chivalrous. Also, I would like an RP sample from you. You are a new person to this website- I have absolutely no idea of deducing whether or not your writing is adequate. And can you not put everything in hiders? It is very tedious for me to click through each and every one of them.
EDIT: Sorry for not clarifying that you needed to give me a roleplay sample.
It's literally "one-liners", so I'm not quite sure how I could give you an adequate RP sample, unless you just want a paragraph.
Hi, I'm Nyctophilia! I'm looking forward to becoming an active member of the community, and I hope we can be friends. :)
I really enjoy Pokemon and Harry Potter role plays, so it would be really nice if i was notified of any new ones that come up.
Cheers,
-Nycto
I really enjoy Pokemon and Harry Potter role plays, so it would be really nice if i was notified of any new ones that come up.
Cheers,
-Nycto
Name:
Phoenix Woods
Age:
11
Gender:
Male
Additional Appearance Information:
At 5' 1", Phoenix is certainly taller than the usual 11 year old you can find. Behind the brown hair and black glasses, green eyes shine bright with intelligence and awareness. A sharp nose and thin lips are the only other features of his simple face. His body is slightly lanky, and is hardly noticeable under thick clothes.
House:
Ravenclaw
Wand:
-Hawthorne Wood
-Unicorn Hair
-14 and 1/2"
-Unyielding Flexibility
Blood Type:
Half-Blood
-Muggle Mother
Personality:
Phoenix is normally quiet and independent, more comfortable tinkering with his various inventions rather than with people.
He is highly intelligent, but hardly ever shares much with others. He is also a perfectionist, and constantly self doubts himself to the point where it it crippling.
History:
Phoenix was born into a slightly rich family of four. His brother, Alexander, is homeschooled. His mother is a muggle that had fallen in love with his father, and even more when he warned her that he was a wizard. They conceived Phoenix on April 3rd, two years after their marriage. Growing up, Phoenix was slightly spoiled and well taken care of. He has an affinity for Charms, and looks forward to the class.
Pet:
Cyrus (Barn Owl)
RP Example:
Tugging at the uncomfortably-tight tie around his neck, Phoenix observes himself in the old, dusty mirror. With a sigh, he retrieves a rag from under the sink and wipes off a streak of dust, just enough so that he can see. The tie is still refusing to straighten, and he only has a few minutes before he has to join his family in the living room.
"Weddings are too much work for what it is worth..." he mutters to himself.
Phoenix Woods
Age:
11
Gender:
Male
Additional Appearance Information:
At 5' 1", Phoenix is certainly taller than the usual 11 year old you can find. Behind the brown hair and black glasses, green eyes shine bright with intelligence and awareness. A sharp nose and thin lips are the only other features of his simple face. His body is slightly lanky, and is hardly noticeable under thick clothes.
House:
Ravenclaw
Wand:
-Hawthorne Wood
-Unicorn Hair
-14 and 1/2"
-Unyielding Flexibility
Blood Type:
Half-Blood
-Muggle Mother
Personality:
Phoenix is normally quiet and independent, more comfortable tinkering with his various inventions rather than with people.
He is highly intelligent, but hardly ever shares much with others. He is also a perfectionist, and constantly self doubts himself to the point where it it crippling.
History:
Phoenix was born into a slightly rich family of four. His brother, Alexander, is homeschooled. His mother is a muggle that had fallen in love with his father, and even more when he warned her that he was a wizard. They conceived Phoenix on April 3rd, two years after their marriage. Growing up, Phoenix was slightly spoiled and well taken care of. He has an affinity for Charms, and looks forward to the class.
Pet:
Cyrus (Barn Owl)
RP Example:
Tugging at the uncomfortably-tight tie around his neck, Phoenix observes himself in the old, dusty mirror. With a sigh, he retrieves a rag from under the sink and wipes off a streak of dust, just enough so that he can see. The tie is still refusing to straighten, and he only has a few minutes before he has to join his family in the living room.
"Weddings are too much work for what it is worth..." he mutters to himself.
This looks really interesting. I'll certainly get a character up later.
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