PhantomSekai

Conduits For Unification

Hey arch, I'm glad you came to the decision to change it without having to argue with me (see aeron's or whatever that RP'ers name was to see how that works out lol.)

Gravity manipulation is a very bad miss-wording that I've overlooked within the list of powers. The only demonstration of gravity manipulation was with The Beast from infamous 2, who I'm pretty sure we've established was more of an "op" character than anything else that was written to be much stronger and godlike, so he doesn't fit in to well. That's probably my biggest problem with the infamous universe in general, the antagonists of each game are actually pretty lack luster or just poorly designed and don't fit in with the universe they've established. I mean, *spoilers* Kessler/future cole got time travel (which is dumb when we considered that other than his powers from partnering with nix or kuo due to the machine are all electrical so blegh bad writing imo.) The Beast was just basically second to god so again, another poorly designed character, and then augustine was just boring. *End Spoilers* So yeah, ignore gravity.

We also established that telekinesis within infamous isn't actual telekinesis but instead a conduit manipulating their matter of choice without directly touching it. Like the ice soldiers making spikes of ice, then hurling them at you by just waving their hands. So telekinesis is just poorly explained within that list.

After that, most of the other "non-matter" powers within that list have been explained to either just be sub-powers of existing powers, non-explained powers like mirror, or non-canon (see any blood festival dlc powers from infamous 2).

So sorry, but you'll have to keep it strictly to matter based powers. As for everyone else, I'll take a look at CS's and starting making notes of what to edit later tonight (about 5:45 PM when I'm posting this for me)

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Sorry to see you go but your character unfortunately just doesn't work, and if you're not willing to change it then yes this isn't for you lol.

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I definitely do like the uniqueness that comes with something unexplored like gasoline. Would be interesting to see it combined with the cloth powers as well. Anyways, I think the premise is interesting and I want to see how you develop it

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I thought your "suit" was just armored that your character can create on the fly out of steal. This suit is instead a weapon developed by the DUP that they would never actually create and give to a conduit.

Would you give something that possibly hates you and has the means to kill you with powers alone, the ability to kill you even better and more efficiently? Short answer, no. This suit doesn't fit into the lore or setting in anyway whatsoever.

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If you want to do a mech suit with weapons and all that shit, go to an RP that actually has that. I'm not allowing that here though, and that's final. That stuff doesn't have a place within this setting, so please don't try and force it in.

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It's like you don't know anything about the Infamous universe. They were never going to weaponize the conduits. *Spoilers from here on* Augustine intended Curden Cay to be a way to protect the conduits. In the outside world, the conduits were being lynched and hunted by regular people, and Augustine herself "captured" a conduit she was with when her powers were awakened to convince the government she was on their side. They created the DUP to round up Conduits, and Curden Cay was going to be a way to protect them in a sick and twisted way.

So yeah, they wouldn't give her a suit. And even if they did, they wouldn't let her keep it after the conduits were freed, especially because the threat of one being mentally unstable after being tortured and going on a rampage in vengeance and hate induced state of anger is a legitimate possibility, so giving her a suit would be stupid.

So once again, the suit is stupid and I'm not allowing it. Being able to manipulate multiple types of weapons is also ridiculous. I'm not getting into this.

Either you redesign the character, or you're just flat out rejected. This is not a topic for debate.

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Alright, gonna have to address a lot that's wrong with this whole entire CS Aeron if you intend to actually stay.

1. Chemical/Carbon Manipulation. Being able to manipulate many elements? That's a no. One material per conduit, no debate there. If you want to manipulate carbon, that is unfortunately to broad of an element since carbon is pretty much i everything. Gonna have to narrow that down greatly. It's just to broad and ridiculous to allow.

2. battlesuit. No, just no. Not only is it just as ridiculous as the "carbon" manipulation, it's just kind of dumb. There is no reason whatsoever for her to need a suit. She was never put into combat or given the materials to ever make one, so she wouldn't have the suit before she was set free, and in freedom she wouldn't need a combat suit. This is just, for lack of a better term, stupid.

This isn't OP, well it kind of is, but that's not the point. This isn't OP, this just does not fit into the setting whatsoever. As opposed to everyone else who just need small edits from what I've seen, this needs a 100% overhaul. If you don't want to do that, then consider yourself rejected outright.

As for you arch, I stated in the first post, that this will be based on CS applications. I'll choose a max of five characters submitted to be accepted at a later date. So if you want to join, put a CS up and wait to be accepted.

Peace Keepers

Just to let you guys know, there isn't going to be a posting order at all for this round of posts for a simple reason. I just can't write anything at the moment (writer's block is fun) so I'm not gonna make you guys wait to post because i couldn't post.

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again still waiting to see more cs's before I start make big edit suggestions. I skimmed it and it looks fine, I'll take an indepth look later and give a better analysis.

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add them then I'll pass judgements once we get more completed cs's. So far we only have a few so until we hit 5 I won't be making any hard "you have to edit this" requests (other than the whole matter vs energy thing we already did lol)