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3 yrs ago
Current Might be offline for awhile today, got a new book to read
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When your bored you write, when there is nothing to write read, when there is nothing to read look harder
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Same stuff different day
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Time for the weekend!
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Finally home!!!
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Alright I see what you mean, I will make sure to edit it and make it better.

Though as to going more desrciptive of when she learned something important, I was trying to be a bit vague on that as I figured the most important part of her history would be when our character's met and their small history they would have together. That is what I was going to focus most of my time on coming up with.

For the descriptiveness and everything though I will get on it now to make it better.
Worked on my character's history a bit, but a little unsure of it. What do you think?
Alright, I think I got everything done.
Ah alright, I will make sure to watch out for thing's like that. Let me go through my new post and edit to fix them.
Whoops sorry, Yeah I will start being more careful from now on. When I get really excited about a post I go a little fast when I don't mean to. Just trying to make sure I don't lose my thought.

Just so I know, what is wrong with it? Run on sentences? punctuation?
Harley smiled hearing she could come in. Looking behind Ivy to see the sprinkler's were in fact on, Harley didn't let it show that she was a bit worried about her makeup. With nowhere else really to go, she couldn't be too choosy. Ivy seemed like she was being nice to her, though the warning Ivy gave her before she moved made her nod in agreement. "I can understand that Red, Mr. J doesn't even know I am here." she said hoping that was the case as she hadn't told him anything other then she was leaving. Harley even only packed a small bag, which she must have lost when the goon attacked her. So it was probably sitting in some alley being torn apart by bums.

Harley neared Ivy heels clinking on the ground the closer she got the more she saw how the sprinkler's were looking like it was just pouring down rain inside. With plant's as big as Ivy had they would need a lot of rain. "T..Thanks Red." she said her face was showing how hard it was for her to actually say thank you. "I have had to sleep out in alley's before, when Mr. J would decide I wasn't good enough for a bed that day. I will make do with something. This place is better then an alley." she said looking around as she entered mainly at her feet.

Ivy may be nice now, though Harley really didn't want to step on one of her plant's. She had a dangerous feeling the nice would vanish as fast as it had come if that happened. "So how does it feel to be a free woman now Red?" she asked curiously turning already feeling her hair falling slightly and makeup was running down her face. The more she stayed under the sprinklers, the worse it got. Harley thought this would only be for a short time, maybe she could meet another villain who wouldn't abuse her.

"You know Red, I was never one for the outdoors. But some of your plant's are actually really pretty." she said leaning over and looking at a flower before it opened up and hissed at her. Harley jumped back slightly, "or not, I won't touch anything." Everything seemed like it hadn't even changed except for the plants. Harley could tell Ivy was skeptical about everything that was going on. She had tried to help Harley once before and had ended up being betrayed by Harley instead. Harley wouldn't make that mistake twice.

Looking back at Ivy, as Harley felt her stomach tighten. "You eaten yet Ivy?" she asked almost finding it weird to use her real name but she couldn't call her Red forever. Though it was a good nickname for her, "Cause I am famished, any pizza places around here who deliver to this place?" she asked and started to laugh again. No pizza place ever really delivered, usually Harley would send out a henchman too fetch one though now she didn't have any. "My treat." she said twirling her bat. Harley never did like to pay for things.
Alright, sounds good to me.
Just curious, do the characters have to match up specifically with the shows and everything or can they start to be different.

Like Harley might be nice and stop being her freaky self around Ivy but go back to it when other people are around?
I actually kept going back and re reading Adley's skills so I could have Aphrodite's be the same but she would be better where your character lacks and your character could be better where Aphrodite lacked. Best couple ever haha.

Thanks though, I love how your character is coming together as well and I will try and work on her history today though I may not have time as Football is on and i have to work on my car.
Alright I figured that would be the case, that way Harley and Ivy got to talk a bit at least before thrown into conflict right away.
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