Ploxerdon

Fate/Stay Night: Grail of Chaos (RP idea)

@Rex
Now the other thing is, will we allow videogame/anime characters as servants if balanced well enough?
Having Madara with Susanoo as Noble Phantasm is a obvious no, but there could be a few interesting servants.

Naruto: King of the Dusk

@Jay Kalton

This post is too long to not be in a hider tbh

If the GM didn't accept anymore characters, the Join Status shouldn't be apply :P
And if it ends up being full, I'll just use this character for another Naruto roleplay I think.
Thanks for the criticism, I don't see you as a bitch for doing this at all.
When writing this, I wasn't too sure on some things either to be honest, so discussing a few points might indeed be a good idea.

For the quote... haha, I kinda forgot that was a song by Hatsune Miku, I actually did think of it myself. It was meant in both a its my time to shine type of thinking, which could later change into a you will be my bitches (Madara style) later on if the curse of hatred gets it grip on her.
I'm not sure yet if She knows she is an Uchiha or not for story reasons. Having to hide it could be an interesting aspect, but not knowing it herself could also be interesting, so I still had to decide between those two. I think not knowing it would be the best option, so I think I will go with that for this character.

Konoha is indeed where the Uchiha decides, but this is indeed an alternative universe (I think?) but I think the Uchiha clan being slaughtered is still a keypoint. Some mistakes in writing this character were due to me seeking an excuse for her to be still alive at this point, and not be killed by Itachi/whoever did it in this universe.

As for those nicknames.. Akashiya Bloodmoon does sound kinda... edgy or something, thought the bloodmoon was kinda hinting at the konoha slaughter and the red of the sharingan. The other 2 were just shortcuts of her name.

As for her age.. Maybe it would be better to make her like 21, so that we could change the later plotpoint (her learning everything about ninjas in 2 years so she can be a genin for this story) to something more logical, being that she has been studying since 16 to become a genin.

As for her mother's name... yeah, I can see your point, but Yuri Uchiha just sounds weird.. Kiyomi Uchiha could work perhaps?

As for her length.. being 21, this could work now :P

Tbh I haven't ever watched Tokyo Ghoul, so I have no idea what you are talking about... XD

As for the Land of Iron thing, I know that the entire military is based on samurai, but did they ever state that its the only place samurai reside? I mean, for her past to work, Akashiya had to be grown up with samurai, and Kiyomi can't just go to Land of Iron or something, so theres still a plothole were we need to find a proper solution.

As for the Uchiha slaughter thing... Her not knowing she is an Uchiha would be the right solution I think?

For the quickly trusting thing.. Yeah I see the problem, thus why its a fun element for her. She is pure, and she has yet to experience the feeling of betrayal.

Well, she has some friends in a local village owned by samurai I would think. I agree that her going to the Land of Iron alone isn't likely, thus why I thought it was a good idea to have some kind of village owned by samurai.

And yeah, the village thing.. its exactly why I thought having a samurai village close to Konoha (which got slaughtered anyway) was a good idea.

As for the taking her in part... good point. A possibility is that she met some of the samurai in Konoha that recognized her or something?

As for the kekkei genkai point... good point.. I have no answer for that to be honest.

For the sharingan part, her eyes basically become sharingans without any of the tomoe's visible. Its a light version of the sharingan. Perhaps I could rewrite that part, maybe she was training outside of the village with some samurai, when they suddenly got attacked. Akashiya sees this, and becomes afraid that she would die too, thus this early version of sharingan triggering.

As for the jutsu scaring them.. yeah, thats why they want her to gtfo to konoha lol, they are afraid they can't contain her power.
Lets change it so they basically kidnapped her, and forced her to join Konoha, even if she doesn't want to?

As for the hand signs thing... Maybe this jutsu with her basic sharingan doesn't require handsigns? Almost none of the sharingan jutsu require handsigns anyway.

As for her mary sue vibes in school... changing her to be 21 years old so she actually has been to school for a while would make it more logical, no?

As for the attacked part.. yeah, thats exactly why I thought of it being a small samurai village near konoha..

And indeed.. her future will be bad, thats for sure...

As for the Taijutsu part... good point... Hmm.. she is skilled in it, but has only been training it since she is in Konoha, so she is still learning it? That would make sense?

As for the sharingan thing.. its basically a no tomoe clear red sharingan that showed, its a weak version of the sharingan. The true sharingan has yet to awaken.

As for the illusion part... yes, she could act like it would be shoved up their ass, or for example, she could make it look like she is about to cut their throat, while she is actually stabbing them in the stomach or something.

The reason I considered it to be such a high rank is that its actually a really, really weak version of Tsukuyomi. She changes reality by making you believe the sword is at x place, while it is at another. the strain to the eyes is to make up for not requiring any form of handsigns.

Fate/Stay Night: Grail of Chaos (RP idea)

@Ploxerdon

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The character sheet is kind of confusing I'll admit. I'm going to fix that, but you do have a good point. having everyone create two character sheets. one for Mages and one for Servants. this way it's like a roulette where it's random. However, the only issue is if everyone is on board with the idea.

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from what I've read about the Fate series and from what I've watched. The servants/heroic spirits can come from any time period and if memory serves me right, Archer from Fate/stay night is actually Shirō Emiya from one of the possible future worlds. so I'm thinking maybe yes and maybe no on anime characters or even video game characters like ezio auditore and kratos. part of me wants to allow it, but only if people are on board with the idea.

@Rex

I think everyone should be fine with having the mages and their servants be randomized, as it makes everything more interesting.

I believe they can indeed come from any time period, including future worlds yes.
Anime and game characters as servants would be fun and would add more variety, but some would need to be either nerfed or in some cases buffed to make the playing field even.

~Gakuen Kill: Academy of Assassins~

@ChaoticFox
I decided to pm you about turning this in a collab post, as we indeed were spamming the thread a little bit :P

Fate/Stay Night: Grail of Chaos (RP idea)

Mention me once the ooc is sup.
Couple things:
Magic abilities: 9(Max is two) 9? max two? fix this :P
Are you able to make 1 mage and 1 servant, or how does that work?
A great way to handle is to have everyone make a servant and master, then randomly assigning them to eachother.

What are the limits on the servants/heroic spirits? From what age? Do they have to be real/from actual fiction, or are custom heroes allowed? Anime characters allowed or not?

just a few things to consider, you do have my interest.

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@ChaoticFox
Fair enough.
Then the only problem is Sergei's broken memory, he probably forgot about lunch at this point tbh.

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@TheWindel
They kinda got distracted so yeah... maybe the doctor could tell her that its lunchtime or something?
Unless the doctor just injected her lunch.

The Flower of Eden | Fate-Stay Night-esque RP

@Hinsek@RainDash
Oh, I didn't know that about his myth.
Well, we could follow the nasuverse version of his ability (didn't know he even existed there tbh) and make him immune to all damage besides divine damage until he gets hit in his heel, permanently disabling his noble phantasm?

I'll keep the shield-wielding in mind during writing.
As for the summoning process... Maybe she assassinated somebody who was about to summon a servant, and she continued the summoning out of curiosity, just to see what happens?
It could work imo.

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@ChaoticFox

Sergei Dragunov

Sergei rapidly picked up his katana, as he put it back under his jacket.
He tried to observe what Maven was doing, still having issues breathing from the little fight.
Sergei saw Maven grab some kind of injector from some pouch, but he was unable to read what was written on it due to his poor eyesight.
He quietly observed the steps Maven was making, so he could perhaps assist if such a situation were to happen again.
He noticed that Maven had trouble standing back up, and was considering out to help her up, as he is partly to blame for what happened, but he decided not to, as that might ruin her selfrespect.

Sergei noticed that Maven's look in her eyes looked to be sad.
As soon as Maven picked up the gun, he gripped his claw from under his sleeve, but he soon noticed that she dropped the mag, realizing its a sign of peace.

As Sergei was about to introduce himself and apologize what happened, a doctor interrupted him.
As soon as the doctor shouted at Sergei, he drew his katana from under his hoodie, and he was ready to kill the doctor right there, right here.
"Whats with that attitude, immediately thinking of me as an enemy?!" He shouted at the doctor.
As soon as the doctor mentioned the name Prophet, Sergei had a flashback. He saw how got rescued from the burning house.
"This again... Why now?" He thought to himself, as his vision started to blur.

"Damnit... Who are those Phrophets?!" He shouted, this time at the wall, before he started to hyperventilate.
He started to remember details from his accident, how he got burned, how he saw all the other people died...

Sergei fell down on his knees, as he started shouting "Make it stop! Make it stop!", still hyperventilating.
He kept seeing images of his former friends being burned alive.

The Flower of Eden | Fate-Stay Night-esque RP

@RainDash
For Achilles Noble Phantasm..
Maybe it would be a better idea to change it up a bit:
He still receives damage on his entire body, but they can't actually damage it?
I don't believe they strictly mention it in the myths, but lets just keep it at that?
He can't be damaged anywhere besides the back of his feet maybe?
His spear and shield are ordinary weapons, so I think it should be fine.

Lancer from the anime wielded 2 spears, I think wielding a spear and a shield at once should be fine?

As for my master, Kasumi, maybe I should change my wording.
She can cast magic, she just doesn't out of choice as she hates magic.
I think this would allow her to be a master?

As for the Ivory Flower thing, I actually meant The Flower of Eden. She wants to use the power to erase magic from the world.

She is a bit like Kiritsugu from the anime, I meant for her to be some form of magekiller. Her ideal is different though, she is against the use of magic, so she would rather not use it (walking on walls etc is magic but still).