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Current Sail on a sweet silver mist

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Player; DK
Age; 23
Sex; Male
Occupation; Air Force
Location; Alnilam
Race; Rakshasa

Dead men tell no tales
So listen to this story from a whale
She sailed the silver river
But only found a purple butler
There was a grey parrot, and the crane both agree
That the turtle should search for the one manatee
Now you see your monster
Or maybe your insanity
The pirate needs more ales

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This looks pretty interesting, possibly more advanced than I would like, but I'll try to come up with an idea that should fit accordingly.
Jack kept working through the turmoil and quakes of the ship. The left thruster was almost working again. Although working would be a loose term for the status of the thruster. The crew was working hard and doing well to keep things barely functional, but the impacts and resulting explosions were not helpful at all. Then he heard a confusing message from the captain.

"Everyone launch escape pods! I repeat! Board launch pods!" "All crew! Stay aboard. We're kicking them out."

Jack wasn't sure what was going on, but after pausing for a moment he realized what the captain might be trying to do. He noticed the rest of the crew was a little confused, so he fixed that real quick. "What are you all standing around for!? You heard him, get back to work. If this ship doesn't look brand new before the meat heads eject all of the escape pods we'll eject you as a diversion." Everyone began to scurry and work harder than ever before he could even finish his statement. They all knew he was to gentle to do anything near that nature, but his words expressed the direness of the situation.

A minute later the left thruster was back online. Propulsion was still at only about 1/3 of full capability, but Sera should still be able to outmaneuver them, she was a pretty great pilo... Jack had gone to a terminal to restore power to the thruster, where he also noticed a new problem. "HAAJAABRAGABRAG. SERA YOU BURNT OUT HALF THE RETRO THRUSTERS, AGAIN!!" Jack restored the thruster power and split up his crew, before running down the ship to the retro thrusters. This should be an easier fix, but hopefully none of them ran into the Espers.
Also at the start of this, I don't believe there was a set power level, basically just make a character you've wanted to use relative to the setting and then develop them. If you don't like the group your with, go down a different hall and meet up with another group. Echo will be happy to guide you to wherever you need to go. Multiple stories can be going on at once in this as well.
@Dynamo Frokane I did mean Soul Edge, I'll change that sorry. Gibraltar is a tiny country off of the tip of Spain. It creates the Strait of Gibraltar with Africa, connecting the Mediteranean to the Atlantic. It's actually a British oversees territory too.
Here's my CS. Tell me how it looks. I'm open to making changes.

Echo was quite excited at hearing the thing respond to him. He bounced a little in his joy. He would be able to communicate with it, and evidently without connection anymore. "So, I do have quite a few questions about you now, and the opportunity to easily speak is to much to pass up. How clear do my thoughts need to be for you to hear them? Like could I still have private thoughts? If I thought of an image would you be able to see it as well? It is nice to know you don't actually steal the memories as well. Since it seems you just have to learn to survive, can you learn of your own volition or do you have to obtain it from someone else? Also can you link me to others? How deeply can you search one's mind? I'm sorry if this is a lot of questions, but you are the first person I can really talk to."

It seemed the knight asked about a Bright Road, and it seemed this Mindskitter knew all of these endless halls. He beckoned for Amheurst and Echo to follow him and to bring Gish along with them. He wasn't sure why Gish had to go with them. She had her own free will, in fact so did he. It would seem intresting to follow the Mindskitter, but he wasn't keen on being ordered around. He had wandered a path called the Bright Road before as well. It didn't actually seem that bright, but it was lit by some strange lamps. He was quite intrigued by them and their numbers.

The Mindskitter began to wander off towards where he thought the Bright Road was. He was probably right, but then he stopped to pick up some old tapestry. It seemed to turn out to be a mistake because a strange boy with antlers and bunny ears popped up with a sword in rather frantic panic. Fortunately it didn't attack the Mindskitter, but Echo was beginning to wonder how this creature has survived for any amount of time with seemingly endless knowledge, but so curious and thoughtless at the same time. Randomly reaching out to strangers minds and moving things without care. It was certainly reckless, but perhaps luck is better than skill any day.

As the jackalope boy ran off and apparently knocked himself out on a rock, another visitor came to the group. This campfire, was becoming a rather bustling spot in these halls. Echo didn't really notice before how many halls actually connected to this room. It was like a hub or epicenter. She was a rather pretty girl, but he was pretty deformed and barely looked human himself. He wasn't sure how the white armor came to be stuck to him or how his skin turned grey. He was pretty sure he was human though. Something in him told him he was human. Anyways this Ruby Red claimed to be a mage and wore a large pointy hat. She certainly did look odd. Like someone he met before who called herself a witch, but that person was old, very old, in fact she looked older than possible, but this girl was quite the opposite. She seemed rather friendly, but her smile held some sort of secret. He began to write in the ground again for her. Hi Rose, I'm Echo.
Jack felt the ship lurch forward and immediately began to curse under his breath. Ships didn't lurch naturally and it always meant a headache for him. Soon after, the A.I. began to go off announcing engine failure. Jack had already been running to the engine rooms, and with the A.I. going off he picked up the pace a little more.

He was yelling at some of the other engineers that had been on duty asking for a status of the engines and what they could do for power. As soon as he knew a bit of the situation, he began barking orders to divert power to the working systems. It seemed the main thrusters were beyond a quick repair, but there was still power, for now.

They had diverted power to shields, but the onslaught was still continuing. "Stop getting shot!" He shouted into a commlink to the bridge. Not a moment after he finished a different kind of impact hit the ship. "I wonder if that pilot knows to dodge the projectiles," He grumbled to himself. He figured that may have been a boarding crew since it seemed the main fire stopped. With the ship in barely stable conditions and the shields holding fine, he moved on to help the crew repair the far left thruster. It seemed to take the least amount of damage and may be able to work in the next several minutes. He kept a few other crews keeping the other systems like RADAR and LADAR functioning as well. If they were being borded Sukaina would have to take care of it primarily with her crew.
I just read the OP again and I'm not very familiar with fae in general, but I actually thought it was rather well written and organized. Falk is supposed to be the most powerful so most of what anyone else does would be technically more of a side story. The list of Fae with their courts was especially helpful to denote that they were supposed to have certain characteristics based on where they are from and certain Fae are more akin to certain courts. This RP got a lot of feedback the first time around, but not many followed through with it. I ended up stopping RP altogether for a bit, so I was part of the problem, but the OP seems pretty good in my opinion.
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