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i wish dragons were real. Who's with me?
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and I juste realized I spelled the website as 'sight'. Brilliant just brilliant.............
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I am on this sight way too damn much.......................
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Hey to anyone who sees I have been having massive headaches so my time will be off and on. Please just bare with me to all my rp buddies.
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Hello to anybody reading this! I love to create stories really almost anything. I will role-play for most movies. I role-play in CASUAL, if you are a free roleplayer and would like some help to write more sophisticated I am very good at that. However, I am mainly casual so please do not expect me to be cool with two sentences that do not contain detail at the very least.
Also, I have a few characters I would like sketched, pm me for details.
LASTLY, PLEASE DO NOT DISAPPEAR I FIND IT INCREDIBLY RUDE!! If you lost interest or cannot be on for an extended period just give me a heads up and I will do the same for you.
A little bit about me I sing, write, and play a variety of sports. Most of the time I act like a guy but I am a girl. It seems to me most people think I am a guy due to my name, someone told me I should probably put my gender on my profile and I can concede to that point. However, I do not give out any other information. I'm just that type of person even in real life so please don't take it personally. (unlike some people)
Also, I have a few characters I would like sketched, pm me for details.
LASTLY, PLEASE DO NOT DISAPPEAR I FIND IT INCREDIBLY RUDE!! If you lost interest or cannot be on for an extended period just give me a heads up and I will do the same for you.
A little bit about me I sing, write, and play a variety of sports. Most of the time I act like a guy but I am a girl. It seems to me most people think I am a guy due to my name, someone told me I should probably put my gender on my profile and I can concede to that point. However, I do not give out any other information. I'm just that type of person even in real life so please don't take it personally. (unlike some people)
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this is actually cool i think
Ok respond when you are ready i am taking a shower and making ice cream.
I wrote a intro for my character
Nia hides in the dark, New York city was busy even at night. However, for the city that never sleeps it did seem to run on a lot of caffeine....
From her perch on a church gargoyle she could see plenty of the city. The part she was in swarmed with criminals and gang members. All of them were dangerous, but not for her. Using her cat like purple eyes the young vampire peered into the dark using all her sense to track and find the man she would hunt tonight. As much as Nia was vampire she did have morals. No innocent would be harmed by her. All the people she killed were rapists, drug addicts, abusers or bandits. Right now she could hear a man cornering a young woman in an alley.
Time to act.
Making no sound Nia kept her back to the building away from the moonlight as to not alert anyone of her presence. She crept until she was right above the woman. Dropping down she swiftly knocked her out and leapt towards the man fangs an teeth bared. Covering his mouth so he wouldn't scream she bit into his neck savoring the taste of his life force, heavily saturated with alcohol. Cringing at the taste of bad beer she wiped her mouth and slashed the mans throat and wrists to make it look like it had gone wrong. Dumping him in the garbage she turned and gently sat the young woman up and patted her cheek to wake her.
The young woman opened her eyes blearily. "What.. what happened?"
Nia smiled tersely and spoke gently. "A man attacked you, its alright. Go to that cafe across the street, the man who is there is named Tanner. Tell him Nia sent you and you need a ride home."
The lady nodded and thanked her before hurryingly crossing the street and heading into the diner. Once she saw the young woman inside Nia sighed. She didn't have much more need to feed but to be safe then sorry she would hunt once more tonight.
From her perch on a church gargoyle she could see plenty of the city. The part she was in swarmed with criminals and gang members. All of them were dangerous, but not for her. Using her cat like purple eyes the young vampire peered into the dark using all her sense to track and find the man she would hunt tonight. As much as Nia was vampire she did have morals. No innocent would be harmed by her. All the people she killed were rapists, drug addicts, abusers or bandits. Right now she could hear a man cornering a young woman in an alley.
Time to act.
Making no sound Nia kept her back to the building away from the moonlight as to not alert anyone of her presence. She crept until she was right above the woman. Dropping down she swiftly knocked her out and leapt towards the man fangs an teeth bared. Covering his mouth so he wouldn't scream she bit into his neck savoring the taste of his life force, heavily saturated with alcohol. Cringing at the taste of bad beer she wiped her mouth and slashed the mans throat and wrists to make it look like it had gone wrong. Dumping him in the garbage she turned and gently sat the young woman up and patted her cheek to wake her.
The young woman opened her eyes blearily. "What.. what happened?"
Nia smiled tersely and spoke gently. "A man attacked you, its alright. Go to that cafe across the street, the man who is there is named Tanner. Tell him Nia sent you and you need a ride home."
The lady nodded and thanked her before hurryingly crossing the street and heading into the diner. Once she saw the young woman inside Nia sighed. She didn't have much more need to feed but to be safe then sorry she would hunt once more tonight.
Name: Nia Wolfe
Image:
Age: 100
Species: Amethyst Vampire
Originated from the Scandinavian regions these vampires are known to resist most common vampire weaknesses. Their greatest amongst them can control curtained elements. The most common element controlled is Air however their are many who start out with one of the others. Their greatest weakness is iron, and they dislike cities, preferring to be in a more natural setting.
A physical trait easily identifiable is their purple eyes. They come in dark almost black color to a light pastel purple. Another distinguishing trait is instead of fingernails they have small claws, the female have a bit more petite claws than the males but they also possess poison breath that can knock out a human. The effect is to a lesser degree to their own kind, if close enough to breath on them and purposely release their poison it can weaken them.
As an Ameythist Vampire there are two ways to turn; the first is for two vampires (usually male and female but sometimes gay) to carve a life-sized baby from clay and perform a special blood ritual, the second is for a vampire to bite a human on the neck. These vampires require a human blood diet however, most of them prey on criminals or the terminally ill. They can consume human food and it will pass through their body but the amount of nutrients is slim.
google.com/search?q=archer+with+a+wolf..
She has dark auburn hair and purple eyes. Everything else is correct including the wolf dog who will come in later.
Goals/Faction: Loner Vampire
Backstory: Nia was a vampire born of the blood ritual in China however her two parents were killed when she was 9. Left on the streets as a young child she stole and survived in the mountains before being found and taken in by Shoalin monk. Taught martial arts from a young age she soon saw Ta Lee as a father figure and he treated her as such despite her heritage.
Due to training, injuries and fights she eventually gained scars over every inch of skin. Due to her increased speed and strength she was separated from other children. Ta Lee taught her many different weapons including ones more Japanese. Her separation made her increasingly lonely and she pinned for her own kind. The teasing and mocking she received from the other children for her strange foreign looks was heartbreaking.
Ta lee kept secret her true diet and even encouraged it. He told her that “To rid the world of evil men is a service, my dear, not a crime.” Eventually, another Amethyst vampire passed through upon seeing her he befriended her and even showed her a few tricks to hone her skills. His name was Pierce. Ta Lee, grateful for this stranger gifted him with a small token. He explained that since he held that other shaolin temples to know he meant no harm. Pierce offered to stay and teach Nia for a few months before he moved on.
A few days later a messenger from another temple informed them it had been destroyed and that the army was only two days behind him. Immediately, Ta lee ordered the others to prepare. When the battle came the monks defeated the army but so many died within days of mortal wounds and disease. Before he died he branded her with the marks of her style on her forearms. Dragon,Tiger and also the Wolf. Telling her that the wolf was what the masters originally wanted as the symbol of her first style. To the monks the first brandings are representations of what their first fighting style and remind them of their duty to protect.
Powers/Skills: Normal Amethyst Vampire abilities along with her Chinese training.
Equipment/Weapons;
Climbing gloves (Spiked gloves made for climbing trees or walls)
Two Katana blades
Variety of poisons
Four hidden knives each 3-4 inches long on her person.
A recurve bow and arrows.
Small dried herbs tied in a pouch on her belt that contains a small first aid kit.
Shanzi (three bladed fan)
Theme song: none
Image:
Age: 100
Species: Amethyst Vampire
Originated from the Scandinavian regions these vampires are known to resist most common vampire weaknesses. Their greatest amongst them can control curtained elements. The most common element controlled is Air however their are many who start out with one of the others. Their greatest weakness is iron, and they dislike cities, preferring to be in a more natural setting.
A physical trait easily identifiable is their purple eyes. They come in dark almost black color to a light pastel purple. Another distinguishing trait is instead of fingernails they have small claws, the female have a bit more petite claws than the males but they also possess poison breath that can knock out a human. The effect is to a lesser degree to their own kind, if close enough to breath on them and purposely release their poison it can weaken them.
As an Ameythist Vampire there are two ways to turn; the first is for two vampires (usually male and female but sometimes gay) to carve a life-sized baby from clay and perform a special blood ritual, the second is for a vampire to bite a human on the neck. These vampires require a human blood diet however, most of them prey on criminals or the terminally ill. They can consume human food and it will pass through their body but the amount of nutrients is slim.
google.com/search?q=archer+with+a+wolf..
She has dark auburn hair and purple eyes. Everything else is correct including the wolf dog who will come in later.
Goals/Faction: Loner Vampire
Backstory: Nia was a vampire born of the blood ritual in China however her two parents were killed when she was 9. Left on the streets as a young child she stole and survived in the mountains before being found and taken in by Shoalin monk. Taught martial arts from a young age she soon saw Ta Lee as a father figure and he treated her as such despite her heritage.
Due to training, injuries and fights she eventually gained scars over every inch of skin. Due to her increased speed and strength she was separated from other children. Ta Lee taught her many different weapons including ones more Japanese. Her separation made her increasingly lonely and she pinned for her own kind. The teasing and mocking she received from the other children for her strange foreign looks was heartbreaking.
Ta lee kept secret her true diet and even encouraged it. He told her that “To rid the world of evil men is a service, my dear, not a crime.” Eventually, another Amethyst vampire passed through upon seeing her he befriended her and even showed her a few tricks to hone her skills. His name was Pierce. Ta Lee, grateful for this stranger gifted him with a small token. He explained that since he held that other shaolin temples to know he meant no harm. Pierce offered to stay and teach Nia for a few months before he moved on.
A few days later a messenger from another temple informed them it had been destroyed and that the army was only two days behind him. Immediately, Ta lee ordered the others to prepare. When the battle came the monks defeated the army but so many died within days of mortal wounds and disease. Before he died he branded her with the marks of her style on her forearms. Dragon,Tiger and also the Wolf. Telling her that the wolf was what the masters originally wanted as the symbol of her first style. To the monks the first brandings are representations of what their first fighting style and remind them of their duty to protect.
Powers/Skills: Normal Amethyst Vampire abilities along with her Chinese training.
Equipment/Weapons;
Climbing gloves (Spiked gloves made for climbing trees or walls)
Two Katana blades
Variety of poisons
Four hidden knives each 3-4 inches long on her person.
A recurve bow and arrows.
Small dried herbs tied in a pouch on her belt that contains a small first aid kit.
Shanzi (three bladed fan)
Theme song: none
Im gone for five minutes and its gets all third-rike-up-in-here-meow!
Edit: not complaining, but theres quite a few female characters in this game... Rome has got the pick of the litter up in here, assuming he likes hlaf dead super strong fifth element gun toting bitches:) ...ment that as a compliment btw
Hey we are vampires not dead ;P Who is Rome?
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Updated
Also I will most likely keep on tweaking the grammar and how the sentences are laid out. It is unlikely I will change a key meaning but if I do I will notify either you or The Grey Dust.
@RedNightHunter
Here is a link to your app, so people can read it: http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/92419-the-world-of-blood-compact-accepting-apps-in-oc/char#post-3428308
The changes are much better. I noticed you said the females of your vampires can get pregnant. In that case, I have to classify your vampires as half-vampires. They are clearly not fully dependent on blood, and they are technically still alive enough to procreate naturally. Therefore, they are not going to have as powerful abilities as other vampire bloodlines, sorry. I'll allow that Nia has developed some resistance to their Iron weakness, but overall Amethyst vampires do not heal very well. Also, because they can reproduce, I think they should be long-lived, but not truly 'immortal.'
As far as their behavior goes, they seem to me to be quite feral, almost werewolf-like, in the way they roam and have territories. Perhaps you should completely switch them to a class of werewolf instead of vampire, since werewolves can procreate naturally as well. Up to you if you think that is too drastic a change.
The foul-breath ability that the female amethyst vampires have is probably not going to be as useful as you think. There are some vampires that do not need to breathe. Foul-breah power would certainly work on living things though.
Oh oops I the pregnant paragraph was for a different species thanks for pointing that out. Either they find a child or bite a person several times on the neck and wrists. They cannot actually get pregnant.
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