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After giving it some thought following some helpful feedback by @Retired, I've decided to rescind my previous two (well, three) concepts and stick with one end-all, be-all pitch. Presenting...



It's as close to Adam West as we can get in this. I approve.
@Retired It was there before. Guess you just missed it.


Well then. I am blind.


There is now a little less than 27 hours remaining until the submission deadline. If anyone here feels like they need more time, say so and I'll decide if an extension is necessary.
I have managed to finish my sheets before the deadline.


All looks good. Did you just change the name to Symbrock, or was that there before and I missed it?
Just got home, will catch up on all new revisions once I eat. But @Morden Man the unexpected secondary app looks very good.
Gave it a think over. What's that thing Uncle Ben's been known to say?

"Fuck it."

Did anyone say Spider-Verse?



You know, I think we've really been missing the presence of a Spider-character in this game so far. I appreciate the bravery it must have taken to submit such a unique app.

In all seriousness, I really like that you've chosen to make this an older, experienced Peter who - mostly - has his shit together. I can see this providing a lot of interesting dynamics.

@Retired

Round 3 then.


All look really good. I love the steampunk world. Don't have any other thoughts or concerns. Just solid all the way around.
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That's a good question. I would prefer he have the ability to revert back into his normal form for the sake of being able to "blend in" to other realities. But I honestly feel comfortable having that vetoed and him being stuck as "Doc Green" since that is more in line with the comics.


The former definitely helps with balance and would be my preference, personally.

Fuck the comics. Who here even likes comics, amirite?
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Does Bruce have the ability to revert to his human body or is he permanently in this smaller Hulk form?
Enter the Hero, stage right:



Strong concept. Is the serum still pumping through his veins, diminished or not? Without the suit, does he still possess his Goblin abilities?
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I think a world that truly, utterly utilized a One Universe approach where the characters had to be drastically different and changed by one another's existence would be interesting. Imagine if Kal-El's rocket landed to Earth at a time when HYDRA was still functioning, or if Thor's hammer were found by Barry Allen instead of Donald Blake. Or if Spider-Man were created by a spider who was an avatar of The Red, making him less of an enhanced human and more of a monster in the vein of Swamp Thing. A world full of fun stuff like that, where the dynamics are completely shifted for everyone.

Another possibility is a DC or Marvel future where the grandchildren of each hero inherit the mantles, like a giant legacy Earth in the vein of MC2. There's a ton of rife potential there if you set it far enough ahead for most of the heroes to be dead or out of action.

Another idea I had is a DC Universe where each hero is a supernatural creature. So Superman would be a horrible monstrosity from space, Batman would be a vampire, Wonder Woman would be an undead Themyiscarian witch, The Flash would be an interdimensional demon, and so on...

None of them are wildly original ideas, but I like simple concept alterations as much as I like massive universe shattering ideas.


You may enjoy one or two worlds that I have planned, then.
We have now passed the halfway point with three days remaining until the end of the deadline, as it currently stands. While everyone still has plenty of time to finish, adjust, and submit concepts, this is just a friendly reminder for those who have incomplete sheets or have shown interest in applying.

@Inkarnate Your Polaris app still needs a completed character background section.

@ComradeMaxx@GreenGrenade The two of you have expressed your interest previously in the OOC, are you still intending to apply?
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