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> Is it just me, or do they all look the same but just with different hair colors? O_o You are correct, I used the Dragon Age: Inquisition character generator to create them. I find most of the faces and hair to be fugly. I did mean to give Hawke and The Warden different scars and lipstick but forgot. > Can you please break all of that up more? As it stands it's nearly unreadable. You are going to have to read as is, when I put more than one space between paragraphs the software reduces it back to one.
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I have made by changes to my previously posted characters, since I can't edit my previous posts when I post my third character I will also repost my two previous characters. I am not at home at the moment, so I can't post them yet.
VitaVitaAR said @Revens Exile: Since her appearance is not filled I will not be looking the bio over. When it is complete, I will.

I have an image of all three of my characters, I have to upload them to the internet before I can put them in the CS. I will upload and put into the CS after I finish writing my third character.

Second Character of Three:
Name: Marian Hawke
Title: The Champion of Kirkwall, Viscount of Kirkwall (formerly)
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Appearance: DA2
Canon, AU, or OC?: Canon
Universe of Origin: Dragon Age
Personality: Marian resents mages a lot of the time, due to her father and sister being mages they were forced to move around a lot to prevent them from being caught but she still loved them with all her heart. Marian veiws mages who turn to Blood Magic as weak who would do anything and use even the flimsiest of excuses to justify murder to achieve a goal. When it comes to her family and friends Marian will stop at nothing, such as the time she killed the Qunari's Arishok. She killed the Arishok a man she greatly respected even though she disagreed with some of his methods to save Isabella the woman she loved.
Abilities: Dual Weapon expert, Archery expert, master lockpicker
Weapon: Dual Volcanic Aurum daggers, Gilt Breach Longbow, & Murder Knife (not used in combat)
Equipment: Mantle of the Champion armor set (ignore the weapons on the back)
Backstory: During the Blight Marian, her mother Leandra, her sister Bethany, and her brother Carver are all fleeing Lothering before the Darkspawn can overrun their town. On the way out of town they encounter Aveline and her husband. During their final push out of the wilderness they encounter an Ogre, Carver is killed. The survivors are being overrun by Darkspawn, they had no hope of survival until Flemmeth shows up in the form of a dragon and saves them. Aveline's husband has been stricken with the Darkspawn disease known as the Taint; he was killed as an act of mercy. The Hawke family & Aveline eventually arrive in Kirkwall as lowly refugees with nothing but what they carry.

In Kirkwall they are refused entrance their only chance is Gamlen, Marian's uncle. His plan was to sell Marian & Bethany into indentured servitude for one year, Marian at least had a choice, smugglers or mercenaries.

After a year of indentured servitude, Bethany is afraid of being caught by the Templars since she is an apostate. Marian hears of Bartrand a Dwarf who is looking to explore an old and abandoned Dwarven Thaig, Marian hopes to get hired on to the expedition as hirelings to use the money to bribe corrupt Templars, but they are refused. As they leave Varric, Bartrand's brother tells them they are looking for partner to help fund the expedition. Marian saves up enough money and fulfilling a promise to Flemmeth. After fulfilling the promise to Flemeth and adding Merril an Elven mage to her list of companions she encounters Thrask and helps him with several apostates and eventually deals with a band of Qunari criminals. Marian also needed a map of the Deep Roads to help them find the Thaig. They turn to Anders an apostate mage who was once a member of the Grey Wardens serving under Elissa who may have maps they need. After completing a job for him he turns over the maps and joins Marian on her adventures. After acquiring everything they need Marian takes Bethany, Anders, and Varric into Deep Roads. During the expedition they are betrayed by Bartrand. They find another way out of the Deep Roads but Bethany has contracted the Taint, Marian was devastated at the thought of losing her sister. Anders suggests finding Stroud a Grey Warden who could potentially save Bethany's life but it would make her a Grey Warden and she would be forced to leave.

Three years later Marian is wealthy and Qunari are maintaining a very big prescence in the city, there is also a serial killer on the loose. The Qunari's Arishok asks for Marian's help in dealing with an Elven fanatic who has stolen a poisonous gas formula. Shortly after Marian begins an investigation into the serial killer but fails to find him. A Templar by the name of Varnell has taken a Qunari delegation hostage under the orders of the Chantry's Grand Cleric. Marian refuses to side with the hostage takers. Eventually Leandra comes to the attention of the serial killer and Hawke races to save her mother's life but ultimately fails and Leandra dies in Marian's arms. The Chantry's Grand Cleric continues her mission to fuck things up with the Qunari by killing a human willingly converted to their religion and framing Marian, the plot fails and the Grand Cleric is murdered by the Qunari.

The Arishok eventually grows sick of Kirkwall's dysfunction and decides to deal with it himself by attacking the city. During the attack on the city Marian has to fight her way to Viscount's Keep to put a stop to the Arishok's machinations along the way Marian encounters a group of Grey Warden's caught in the middle, Bethany is with them. Once at Viscount's Keep you are forced to decide to turn over Isabella a friend met three years earlier while as a refugee or duel the Arishok for her safety because Isabella stole from the Qunari. Marian is named Champion of Kirkwall for saving the city and driving the Qunari out.

A year later Marian is attacked by a Dwarven gang known as the Carta, they are deranged and looking for her blood so they can free their master one of the very first Darkspawn, Corypheus a Tavinter Magister who broke into the Golden City the seat of the Maker and creators of the Blights that nearly wiped out all life on Thedas. Marian and her friends killed Corypheus.

Two years after the Qunari leave, Marian meets Tallis an Elf who converted to the Qunari's religion. She is looking for something and Marian agrees to help. They eventually kill an Orlesian noble who was working with rogue Qunari. Before they part ways Marian and Tallis kiss intimately, Isabella doesn't care.

Three years after the Qunari leave, Meredith the Knight Commander of the Templars is ruling the city, the tensions between mages and Templars are starting to boil. Due to the tensions and mistreatment of mages several mages escaped. All but three mages were recaptured, Marian is asked to find the last three, one was just a man looking to live a little since being locked up in the circle since he was six the other two turned into murderers and Marian was forced to put them down. When Marian returned to tell Meredieth of the resolution Marian berated her for her heavy handed rule and blamed all the murders on her. Mages are sneaking out sometimes for days at a time, Marian is sent to investigate, her investigation uncovers that mages & Templars are working together to oust Meredith and put a Templar that is less confrontational in charge. The group had kidnapped Bethany to use as leverage against Marian. When Marian confronted the group Thrask tried to contain the situation but was killed by his second Grace an apostate mage who wanted revenge for a fellow apostate Marian killed during her time as a refugee.

The Divine Justinia V sends Sister Nightingale to assess the situaion in Kirkwall and to determine if an Exalted March is needed or not. Marian goes to meet with the Sister and is met with hostility an extremely aggressive rogue mages whose goals are to abolish the Circles. Sister Nightingale arrives in time to slay the reinforcements. Marian recognizes Sister Nightingale as none other than Leliana a Chantry Sister from Lothering. Marian assures Leliana that an Exalted March isn't needed, Leliana departs leaving a warning, war is coming and Kirkwall is no longer safe.

Anders had become a fanatical terrorist, destroys the Chantry. All hell broke loose in the city, Marian was forced to chose between siding with the mages or the Templars and how to handle Anders. Marian wanted to rip his head off and shove it up his ass but his death would have served no one and the Spirit of Justice that Anders corrupted into the Demon of Vengeance may have escaped so she chose to let him live so he would be forced to clean up the mess he created.

Marian's support meant little in the end she was forced to kill Orsino the leader of the mages and Meredith who was driven absolutely mad by the Red Lyrium sword she possessed. Marian's support for the Templar led her to become the Viscount of Kirkwall. The Kirkwall Rebellion was concluded but the Mage-Templar War had only just begun throwing all of Thedas into turmoil for years to come.

Eventually the Templars of Kirkwall started to use Red Lyrium, they grew paranoid Marian was forced to step down as Viscount. She turned to Stroud the man who saved Bethany's life from the Taint to help her investigate.

Marian & Stroud eventually became concerned about the corruption in the Grey Warden ranks, and went into hiding. Varric contacted Marian so she could help Evelyn Trevelyan of The Inquisition deal with Corypheus since Marian had previously fought and killed Corypheus before. Marian introduced Evelyn to Stroud. Together they put an end to Corypheus' plot to take over the Grey Wardens at the cost of Stroud's life. Marian traveled to Weisshaupt to brief the Grey Wardens of what had transpired.

Faction: Factionless
First character of three:

Name: Elissa Cousland The Hero of Ferelden
Titles: Lady of Highever (formerly), Champion of Redcliffe, The Hero of Ferelden, Queen of Ferelden, Warden-Commander of Ferelden
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Appearance: DA:O
Canon, AU, or OC?: Canon
Universe of Origin: Dragon Age
Personality: Elissa will go to great lengths to ensure the survival of someone, like with those cursed to be werewolves she sought out a way to break the curse over killing them. Connor she could have easily killed him for all the harm he caused or allowed his mother to sacrifice herself to save him, but she sought help to ensure the survival of both. She also seeks out power, she prefers Leliana or the pirate Isabella over Alistair but when it became known that Alistair could become the next king she sought to become his Queen, she did eventually fall in love with after seeing the lengths he was willing to go for his subjects. When Amaranthine was given to the Grey Wardens Elissa made sure to upgrade their base Vigil's Keep to its fullest potential, when the City of Amaranthine came under attack she raced to defend it while defending the city word reached that Vigil's Keep was under attack as well, it pained her greatly to not rush back and help her friends but many innocents would have killed or severely wounded not to mention they would have lost everything. She put her faith in her friends and the dwarf who upgraded the Keep, and prayed to Andraste that they would be spared, her faith was rewarded. After Fiona was able to remove the Taint from herself by unknown means thus curing her of the Calling, she began a mission to ensure she and no Warden would ever have to give up their life because of it, even if it was the last thing she did.
Abilities: Dual Weapon expert, Archery expert, master lockpicker
Weapon: Dual Volcanic Aurum swords, Ancestral Heartwood Crossbow, & Murder Knife (not used in combat)
Equipment: Aurum Volcanic armor, boots, gloves, & helmet
Backstory: While her brother Fergus & father was preparing to aid King Cailan just waiting for Howe and his men. They were also entertaining Grey Warden Duncan who was looking for a recruit in the fight against the Blight. During the night Howe's men attacked. Elissa and her Mabari war hound fought her way to her mother's side, eventually they find Fergus' wife and son murdered and they then make their way to the pantry where they find her father who is mortally wounded. Duncan eventually fights his way into the pantry as well. To ensure the survival of Elissa her father allows Duncan to recruit his daughter. Elissa's mother refused to leave her dying husband; she did not survive the night. Elissa and Duncan travelled to Ostagar where she and other recruits go through the Joining ritual. Elissa was the sole survivor of the ritual; she is joined by Alistair a fellow Grey Warden. They were tasked with fighting their way to the top of Tower of Ishal to light a signal fire to call in the cavalry. Almost as soon as the signal fire was lit they were overrun by Darkspawn, they only survived thanks to Flemmeth. Elissa is joined by Flemmeth's daughter Morrigan. On their way out of the wilderness they stop in Lothering for supplies and news, they also are joined by Leliana & Sten. Elissa and her companions have many tasks they must do to stop the Blight. Their first stop was Brecilian Forest, to use the Grey Warden treaties to recruit the Dalish Elves, before they could do that they had to resolve the werewolf curse. Elissa cured the werewolves of their blight allowing them to return back to human form. With the Dalish Elves successfully recruited Elissa turned her attention towards the Circle of Magi Tower to recruit the mages as per the Grey Warden treaties. The Tower was overrun by demons and abominations, Elissa is given a choice, to enact Rite of Annulment and recruit the Templars to defeat the Blight or to resolve the issues with the mages without killing them all which will result in the mages being recruited. Elissa could not stand by and just authorize the murder of those who were innocent because of a few bad ones. She was joined on her quest by Circle mage Wynne. Elissa travels to Orzammar to recruit the Dwarves, to get the Dwarves assistance she must first settle their civil war. Elissa chose to side with Bhelen over Harrowmont. To get Bhelen in power Elissa had to deal with the criminal gang and find a missing Paragon.

Once all the members of the treaties had pledged their support Elissa turned her attention towards uniting the humans against the Blight by dealing with Loghain, the first step was to obtain the aid of The Arl of Redcliffe, but he was in a magically induced coma. Before Elissa could enter the Arl's castle she had to save the village of Redcliffe from the hordes of the Undead that stormed the village every night coming from the castle. Once inside the castle Elissa and her companions were forced to deal with Connor who had become possessed by a Desire Demon. Elissa enlisted the help of Circle mages so that no one would be sacrificed. After saving Connor the only way to save the Arl was to obtain a pinch of ash from the Urn of Sacred Ashes. Once the Arl recovers he calls for the Landsmeet.

Before the Landsmeet can happen, Elissa was forced to deal with Howe who had kidnapped the Queen. After successfully rescuing the Queen, Elissa & Alistair are captured, they escaped on their own. Once free it is revealed there is unrest in the Elven Alienage in Denerim. The Elves are being sold into slavery by sold into slavery. At the Landsmeet Loghain lost, Alistair dueled Loghain and won, Alistair was named the next King and Elissa was to be his wife.

With everything lined up to take down the Archdemon, Elissa returns to Redcliffe to find it overrun by Darkspawn. To permanently stop the Archdemon a Grey Warden must sacrifice their life, Riordan a previously imprisoned Warden will volunteer to do it but he ultimately fails. Morrigan gives Elissa the opportunity to save Alistair & her, by allowing Alistair to impregnate Morrigan it would then result in the Archdemon's soul entering the fetus instead of a Grey Warden. Elissa left Alistair behind to defend the city just in case Elissa failed to kill the Archdemon. Elissa didn't fail and the Blight was ended.

Elissa was then promoted to Warden-Commander of Ferelden, as commander she was responsible for killing the sentient Darkspawn known as the Architect and all of his disciples, she also was recruited by Jerrick Dace to find his brother and ultimately destroying a Dwarven Thaig to end the threat of The Harvester, she would also go on a Witch Hunt looking for Morrigan, ultimately allowing Morrigan to step through the Eluvian without stabbing her.

Dog, Elissa's Mabari war hound eventually dies of old age. His legacy would live on through all the pups he fathered in the Denerim kennels in an effort to replenish their numbers.

At some point after Morrigan left Elissa went on a quest to find a cure for the Calling faced by all Grey Wardens.

Faction: Factionless
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