50m large dragon? I know he rarely uses it but that seems a bit over the top, although the rest on its own is I wouldn't have a problem with. Couldn't you have all that stuff without the megamorph?
However, i do really like the fact he is battling the beastial side of his mutation.
Ultimately its Unknowable's decision but just wanted to give my thoughts/suggestion is all.
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I'm going to get a post up tonight hopefully.
As a conversation starter, who would each of you like your character to come up against from the X-Men?
As a conversation starter, who would each of you like your character to come up against from the X-Men?
By time the singing had ended a small crowd had gathered, people giving money to the girl for her talents. Damien scoured the street and was unable to see Isabelle so decided he would just wait inside the hall for her. He dropped from the buildings roof and made his way across the street, dropping his camouflage as he did so. At 6'8" to his head and about another foot ontop of that from his mantis like claws, he towered above the huddled group. His alien appearance was an obvious shock for most humans, but even a large proportion of mutants were shocked by how horrific his look was. Rather than stopping to talk to the group, he went to move through into the mercenary hall, but was stopped by the vocalist.
"Hello there," she said in soft voice.
He turned to the group, each of them had a bright red aura surrounding their bodies. Damien scanned them all over briefly not recognising any beyond this encounter. He nodded and responded so that his voice entered the mind of all those in the group.
"Greetings."
His thick accent carried across his nervousness beneath a bravado of sterness.
"Hello there," she said in soft voice.
He turned to the group, each of them had a bright red aura surrounding their bodies. Damien scanned them all over briefly not recognising any beyond this encounter. He nodded and responded so that his voice entered the mind of all those in the group.
"Greetings."
His thick accent carried across his nervousness beneath a bravado of sterness.
The sound of three birds singing in the trees was soothing, their soft songs touching Damien right in his heart. He often found himself wandering through the forests on the outskirt of the built up part of the island during his downtime. He was accepted here, this island was home to many mutants, a fair portion which had visual mutations. Many still resembled humans in some capacity, but fewer looked like all their humanity had been lost. These were the ones Damien had grown closest too, but even so, they couldn't provide the feeling of acceptance the wild gave him. Something about being surrounded by nature made him feel like he was home. He put it down to the animalistic nature of his own mutation but he was always one for the outdoors as a child.
"Damien..."
The mutant turned to see Isabelle behind him, her long hair cut short from the last time they had spoke.
"How are you feeling?"
She questioned as he turned to look at the branch the three birds had been sat on, the feathery creatures flown away, scared by Isabelles presence. Damien lowered his head to the floor, using his telepathy to respond.
"I am alright Isabelle. What can I do for you?"
The strong Welsh twang to his voice could still be heard by Isabelle as he communicated to her.
"I just wanted to get away from everything for a bit."
Isabelle moved closer to him and placed her hand on his arm. She spoke softly to him, knowing that he was having a tough time with the recent news that his mother and father were lost at sea.
"They'll be ok...they were always the toughest of everyones parents..."
Her hand took hold of one of his fingers.
"Come on Damien...we need to get to the mercenary hall..."
He stood silent, his mind not saying a word to her.
"Ok...you know where i'll be...see you there soon."
Her hand let go and she disappeared towards the urban part of the island.
Damien craned his head back and looked up at the sky, spotting a flock of birds being harassed by a flying mutant. He flew rings around them causing them to dive out of way and break up. Something so simple ate away Damien, he had a respect for nature and its creatures, that was even before his mutation. The gift he had been given just reaffirmed that nature works in mysterious ways and it has a plan for everyone and everything. The right to life extended beyond just sentient creatures. As the flock and flying mutant disappeared from sight Damien bent his knees before springing high into the air.
I had better meet with Isabelle, she will only get upset.
Damien continued to leap with each step onto the floor, until his feet landed atop the first building he came across. Using his increased speed he propelled himself across the roof onto the next and continued to do so until he reached the building opposite the mercernaries hall. He enacted his camouflage and approached the ledge to look at those below. The street wasn't overly populated, a few groups walked together, several were stood outside a shop while one attempted to busk for money using her singing voice. A man approached and dropped coins into her hat before stopping to watch her sing. Damien sat himself down onto the ledge and decided to wait, his camouflage keeping him from view.
"Damien..."
The mutant turned to see Isabelle behind him, her long hair cut short from the last time they had spoke.
"How are you feeling?"
She questioned as he turned to look at the branch the three birds had been sat on, the feathery creatures flown away, scared by Isabelles presence. Damien lowered his head to the floor, using his telepathy to respond.
"I am alright Isabelle. What can I do for you?"
The strong Welsh twang to his voice could still be heard by Isabelle as he communicated to her.
"I just wanted to get away from everything for a bit."
Isabelle moved closer to him and placed her hand on his arm. She spoke softly to him, knowing that he was having a tough time with the recent news that his mother and father were lost at sea.
"They'll be ok...they were always the toughest of everyones parents..."
Her hand took hold of one of his fingers.
"Come on Damien...we need to get to the mercenary hall..."
He stood silent, his mind not saying a word to her.
"Ok...you know where i'll be...see you there soon."
Her hand let go and she disappeared towards the urban part of the island.
Damien craned his head back and looked up at the sky, spotting a flock of birds being harassed by a flying mutant. He flew rings around them causing them to dive out of way and break up. Something so simple ate away Damien, he had a respect for nature and its creatures, that was even before his mutation. The gift he had been given just reaffirmed that nature works in mysterious ways and it has a plan for everyone and everything. The right to life extended beyond just sentient creatures. As the flock and flying mutant disappeared from sight Damien bent his knees before springing high into the air.
I had better meet with Isabelle, she will only get upset.
Damien continued to leap with each step onto the floor, until his feet landed atop the first building he came across. Using his increased speed he propelled himself across the roof onto the next and continued to do so until he reached the building opposite the mercernaries hall. He enacted his camouflage and approached the ledge to look at those below. The street wasn't overly populated, a few groups walked together, several were stood outside a shop while one attempted to busk for money using her singing voice. A man approached and dropped coins into her hat before stopping to watch her sing. Damien sat himself down onto the ledge and decided to wait, his camouflage keeping him from view.
Unsure if ill be able to IC post till tomorrow, might not get home till late tonight.
Is there any particular number of characters you were expecting before we get started?
Name: Damien Jones
Alias: Apex
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Height: 6'8"
History: For the first fourteen years of his life, things were normal for Damien. He was a normal teenager going to school, playing sports and spending times chasing after girls he could never hope to seduce. Several days after his fifteenth birthday Damien began to change, hearing voices clear as day when he was on his own. It didn't take him long to realise that it was his parents who to his shock were in a completely different part of the house. As the days passed he got more used to it and was able to block out the excess noise. However, during a moment when his father was telling him off, he turned to walk away and thinking every expletive under sun. His father grabbed hold of him and smacked his backside raw. After the event Damien realised he must have reversed what had been happening to him.
The weeks went by and Damien, although worried about the way mutants were being sought out within the UK, decided to confide in his closest friend. Isabelle was his own age and the two first spoke at a heavy metal concert even though they had been in the same class in school since they were kids. She was truly the best friend he had, more like a sister than anything else. With her help he soon mastered his telepathic abilities and was able to freely communicate and listen to whoever he wanted in his vicinity.
By time six months had passed things started to become very difficult. His skin began to harden and his body shape was beginning to change at a rapid rate. He tried to hide it as best he could but it wasn't long before the changes became clear from beneath baggy clothes and hoods. One night he snuck to Isabelles house and showed her what was happening. Appendages were beginning to form over his shoulders and the shape of his eyes was drastically different. She broke down and threw her arms around him before giving him a kiss on the cheek. She told him of a sanctuary on the island of Genosha where people were free to live as they pleased, mutants and humans alike. As he moved to say goodbye he felt his throat beginning to change and the words soon became gutteral growls. Using his telepathy he spoke to Isabelle but was soon stunned silent as she raised her hand, crafting a ball of electricity in it. She confessed that she had been afraid to admit to him of her own mutant powers and together they agreed that Genosha was the best bet. They both left heartfelt notes to their parents with explanations of why they were going with promises of letters.
As the years passed by the mutation took full hold of Damien and his human appearance disappeared behind a terrifying alien like appearance. He was however accepted into Genosha like everyone else, soon settling well with the other mutants who had severe visual mutations. Eventually after their twenty first birthdays, each was given the option to choose or be given an alias. Isabelle chose the name Arc which was apt given her almost Zeus like ability to throw bolts of electricity. Damien however was never good with naming things and was thus given the name Apex by one of the science officers. His natural abilities and adaptations had made him a dangerous predator and the scientist had spotted that.
Isabelle and Damien are still close, she opted for a role within the Genosha science division while Damien took a place within the military division.
Personality: With the loss of his vocal chords his personality is only ever transmitted across through his telepathic thoughts. Before his transformation he was often blunt and straight to the point and if his voice still remained, this would still be the case for the most part. Although he has softened to others as he has gotten older and shows greater empathy than he ever did before his mutation.
Abilities:
◾Increased Natural Ability
- [Strength, Agility, Reflexes and Speed far surpass any humans capability]
- [Rapid reaction times and able to leap great distances]
◾Feeding Tendrils
- [Able to latch onto food and other things to pull into his mouth]
- [Saliva is potent and can cause full body paralysis for up to four hours if it enters the body, whether ingested or through a wound]
- [Provides an extra-sensory ability to his own vision that causes all living creatures within thirty metres to glow no matter lighting levels, camouflage or other visual impairing device or situation. Works through a maximum of one thick concrete wall, any more and it is blocked]
◾Claws
- [Claws of a density and strength similar to hardened steel]
- [Mantis like claws reach over each of his shoulders with claws on each of his hands and his feet]
◾Prehensile Tail
- [A long tail stretching behind him features a scythe like adaptation of the same consistency as his claws]
◾Armour Plating
- [Large bone plates with a density and strength similar to hardened steel]
- [Run down the length of his back down to the tip of his tail, across the length of his mantis claws and across his quadriceps]
- [Exposed flesh is tough enough to resist stabbing attacks from bladed weapons]
◾Regeneration
- [Minor Cuts and scrapes heal within a minute]
- [Deep cuts and wounds such as bullet impacts take several hours]
- [Dismembered limbs regrow in just over one full day]
◾Instinctive Camouflage
- [Same visibility level as Predator camouflage]
- [Works at his own will]
◾Hive Mind
- [A psychic bubble emanates from him and is roughly thirty metres in diameter]
- [Telepathic powers beyond his own are unable to breach or work within the bubble, often appearing as nothing but a black hole]
- [As an extension of his mind, he can communicate telepathically with anyone in the bubble, whether one person or one hundred]
Appearance:
Theme:
Alias: Apex
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Height: 6'8"
History: For the first fourteen years of his life, things were normal for Damien. He was a normal teenager going to school, playing sports and spending times chasing after girls he could never hope to seduce. Several days after his fifteenth birthday Damien began to change, hearing voices clear as day when he was on his own. It didn't take him long to realise that it was his parents who to his shock were in a completely different part of the house. As the days passed he got more used to it and was able to block out the excess noise. However, during a moment when his father was telling him off, he turned to walk away and thinking every expletive under sun. His father grabbed hold of him and smacked his backside raw. After the event Damien realised he must have reversed what had been happening to him.
The weeks went by and Damien, although worried about the way mutants were being sought out within the UK, decided to confide in his closest friend. Isabelle was his own age and the two first spoke at a heavy metal concert even though they had been in the same class in school since they were kids. She was truly the best friend he had, more like a sister than anything else. With her help he soon mastered his telepathic abilities and was able to freely communicate and listen to whoever he wanted in his vicinity.
By time six months had passed things started to become very difficult. His skin began to harden and his body shape was beginning to change at a rapid rate. He tried to hide it as best he could but it wasn't long before the changes became clear from beneath baggy clothes and hoods. One night he snuck to Isabelles house and showed her what was happening. Appendages were beginning to form over his shoulders and the shape of his eyes was drastically different. She broke down and threw her arms around him before giving him a kiss on the cheek. She told him of a sanctuary on the island of Genosha where people were free to live as they pleased, mutants and humans alike. As he moved to say goodbye he felt his throat beginning to change and the words soon became gutteral growls. Using his telepathy he spoke to Isabelle but was soon stunned silent as she raised her hand, crafting a ball of electricity in it. She confessed that she had been afraid to admit to him of her own mutant powers and together they agreed that Genosha was the best bet. They both left heartfelt notes to their parents with explanations of why they were going with promises of letters.
As the years passed by the mutation took full hold of Damien and his human appearance disappeared behind a terrifying alien like appearance. He was however accepted into Genosha like everyone else, soon settling well with the other mutants who had severe visual mutations. Eventually after their twenty first birthdays, each was given the option to choose or be given an alias. Isabelle chose the name Arc which was apt given her almost Zeus like ability to throw bolts of electricity. Damien however was never good with naming things and was thus given the name Apex by one of the science officers. His natural abilities and adaptations had made him a dangerous predator and the scientist had spotted that.
Isabelle and Damien are still close, she opted for a role within the Genosha science division while Damien took a place within the military division.
Personality: With the loss of his vocal chords his personality is only ever transmitted across through his telepathic thoughts. Before his transformation he was often blunt and straight to the point and if his voice still remained, this would still be the case for the most part. Although he has softened to others as he has gotten older and shows greater empathy than he ever did before his mutation.
Abilities:
◾Increased Natural Ability
- [Strength, Agility, Reflexes and Speed far surpass any humans capability]
- [Rapid reaction times and able to leap great distances]
◾Feeding Tendrils
- [Able to latch onto food and other things to pull into his mouth]
- [Saliva is potent and can cause full body paralysis for up to four hours if it enters the body, whether ingested or through a wound]
- [Provides an extra-sensory ability to his own vision that causes all living creatures within thirty metres to glow no matter lighting levels, camouflage or other visual impairing device or situation. Works through a maximum of one thick concrete wall, any more and it is blocked]
◾Claws
- [Claws of a density and strength similar to hardened steel]
- [Mantis like claws reach over each of his shoulders with claws on each of his hands and his feet]
◾Prehensile Tail
- [A long tail stretching behind him features a scythe like adaptation of the same consistency as his claws]
◾Armour Plating
- [Large bone plates with a density and strength similar to hardened steel]
- [Run down the length of his back down to the tip of his tail, across the length of his mantis claws and across his quadriceps]
- [Exposed flesh is tough enough to resist stabbing attacks from bladed weapons]
◾Regeneration
- [Minor Cuts and scrapes heal within a minute]
- [Deep cuts and wounds such as bullet impacts take several hours]
- [Dismembered limbs regrow in just over one full day]
◾Instinctive Camouflage
- [Same visibility level as Predator camouflage]
- [Works at his own will]
◾Hive Mind
- [A psychic bubble emanates from him and is roughly thirty metres in diameter]
- [Telepathic powers beyond his own are unable to breach or work within the bubble, often appearing as nothing but a black hole]
- [As an extension of his mind, he can communicate telepathically with anyone in the bubble, whether one person or one hundred]
Appearance:
Theme:
Sorry poor wording on my part, I literally meant just telepathy. Telekinesis and every other type of psychic power is ok, just me rushing and not proof reading is all. Apologies again.
TheUnknowable said
I'm not sure about the Adamantium, as it's only source is from asteroids. You would have to metabolize adamantium, which would mean eating insane numbers of asteroids. Plus, it makes you a bit OP.The rest is fine, though.
Haha just got back from shopping and after reading it again it is rather rediciulous lol. I'll make changes to it now.
Name: Damien Jones
Alias: Apex
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Height: 6'8"
History: For the first fourteen years of his life, things were normal for Damien. He was a normal teenager going to school, playing sports and spending times chasing after girls he could never hope to seduce. Several days after his fifteenth birthday Damien began to change, hearing voices clear as day when he was on his own. It didn't take him long to realise that it was his parents who to his shock were in a completely different part of the house. As the days passed he got more used to it and was able to block out the excess noise. However, during a moment when his father was telling him off, he turned to walk away and thinking every expletive under sun. His father grabbed hold of him and smacked his backside raw. After the event Damien realised he must have reversed what had been happening to him.
The weeks went by and Damien, although worried about the way mutants were being sought out within the UK, decided to confide in his closest friend. Isabelle was his own age and the two first spoke at a heavy metal concert even though they had been in the same class in school since they were kids. She was truly the best friend he had, more like a sister than anything else. With her help he soon mastered his telepathic abilities and was able to freely communicate and listen to whoever he wanted in his vicinity.
By time six months had passed things started to become very difficult. His skin began to harden and his body shape was beginning to change at a rapid rate. He tried to hide it as best he could but it wasn't long before the changes became clear from beneath baggy clothes and hoods. One night he snuck to Isabelles house and showed her what was happening. Appendages were beginning to form over his shoulders and the shape of his eyes was drastically different. She broke down and threw her arms around him before giving him a kiss on the cheek. She told him of a sanctuary on the island of Genosha where people were free to live as they pleased, mutants and humans alike. As he moved to say goodbye he felt his throat beginning to change and the words soon became gutteral growls. Using his telepathy he spoke to Isabelle but was soon stunned silent as she raised her hand, crafting a ball of electricity in it. She confessed that she had been afraid to admit to him of her own mutant powers and together they agreed that Genosha was the best bet. They both left heartfelt notes to their parents with explanations of why they were going with promises of letters.
As the years passed by the mutation took full hold of Damien and his human appearance disappeared behind a terrifying alien like appearance. He was however accepted into Genosha like everyone else, soon settling well with the other mutants who had severe visual mutations. Eventually after their twenty first birthdays, each was given the option to choose or be given an alias. Isabelle chose the name Arc which was apt given her almost Zeus like ability to throw bolts of electricity. Damien however was never good with naming things and was thus given the name Apex by one of the science officers. His natural abilities and adaptations had made him a dangerous predator and the scientist had spotted that.
Isabelle and Damien are still close, she opted for a role within the Genosha science division while Damien took a place within the military division.
Personality: With the loss of his vocal chords his personality is only ever transmitted across through his telepathic thoughts. Before his transformation he was often blunt and straight to the point and if his voice still remained, this would still be the case for the most part. Although he has softened to others as he has gotten older and shows greater empathy than he ever did before his mutation.
Abilities:
◾Increased Natural Ability
- [Strength, Agility, Reflexes and Speed far surpass any humans capability]
- [Rapid reaction times and able to leap great distances]
◾Feeding Tendrils
- [Able to latch onto food and other things to pull into his mouth]
- [Saliva is potent and can cause full body paralysis for up to four hours if it enters the body, whether ingested or through a wound]
- [Provides an extra-sensory ability to his own vision that causes all living creatures within thirty metres to glow no matter lighting levels, camouflage or other visual impairing device or situation. Works through a maximum of one thick concrete wall, any more and it is blocked]
◾Claws
- [Claws of a density and strength similar to hardened steel]
- [Mantis like claws reach over each of his shoulders with claws on each of his hands and his feet]
◾Prehensile Tail
- [A long tail stretching behind him features a scythe like adaptation of the same consistency as his claws]
◾Armour Plating
- [Large bone plates with a density and strength similar to hardened steel]
- [Run down the length of his back down to the tip of his tail, across the length of his mantis claws and across his quadriceps]
- [Exposed flesh is tough enough to resist stabbing attacks from bladed weapons]
◾Regeneration
- [Minor Cuts and scrapes heal within a minute]
- [Deep cuts and wounds such as bullet impacts take several hours]
- [Dismembered limbs regrow in just over one full day]
◾Instinctive Camouflage
- [Same visibility level as Predator camouflage]
- [Works at his own will]
◾Hive Mind
- [A psychic bubble emanates from him and is roughly thirty metres in diameter]
- [Telepathic powers beyond his own are unable to breach or work within the bubble, often appearing as nothing but a black hole]
- [As an extension of his mind, he can communicate telepathically with anyone in the bubble, whether one person or one hundred]
Appearance:
Theme:
Alias: Apex
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Height: 6'8"
History: For the first fourteen years of his life, things were normal for Damien. He was a normal teenager going to school, playing sports and spending times chasing after girls he could never hope to seduce. Several days after his fifteenth birthday Damien began to change, hearing voices clear as day when he was on his own. It didn't take him long to realise that it was his parents who to his shock were in a completely different part of the house. As the days passed he got more used to it and was able to block out the excess noise. However, during a moment when his father was telling him off, he turned to walk away and thinking every expletive under sun. His father grabbed hold of him and smacked his backside raw. After the event Damien realised he must have reversed what had been happening to him.
The weeks went by and Damien, although worried about the way mutants were being sought out within the UK, decided to confide in his closest friend. Isabelle was his own age and the two first spoke at a heavy metal concert even though they had been in the same class in school since they were kids. She was truly the best friend he had, more like a sister than anything else. With her help he soon mastered his telepathic abilities and was able to freely communicate and listen to whoever he wanted in his vicinity.
By time six months had passed things started to become very difficult. His skin began to harden and his body shape was beginning to change at a rapid rate. He tried to hide it as best he could but it wasn't long before the changes became clear from beneath baggy clothes and hoods. One night he snuck to Isabelles house and showed her what was happening. Appendages were beginning to form over his shoulders and the shape of his eyes was drastically different. She broke down and threw her arms around him before giving him a kiss on the cheek. She told him of a sanctuary on the island of Genosha where people were free to live as they pleased, mutants and humans alike. As he moved to say goodbye he felt his throat beginning to change and the words soon became gutteral growls. Using his telepathy he spoke to Isabelle but was soon stunned silent as she raised her hand, crafting a ball of electricity in it. She confessed that she had been afraid to admit to him of her own mutant powers and together they agreed that Genosha was the best bet. They both left heartfelt notes to their parents with explanations of why they were going with promises of letters.
As the years passed by the mutation took full hold of Damien and his human appearance disappeared behind a terrifying alien like appearance. He was however accepted into Genosha like everyone else, soon settling well with the other mutants who had severe visual mutations. Eventually after their twenty first birthdays, each was given the option to choose or be given an alias. Isabelle chose the name Arc which was apt given her almost Zeus like ability to throw bolts of electricity. Damien however was never good with naming things and was thus given the name Apex by one of the science officers. His natural abilities and adaptations had made him a dangerous predator and the scientist had spotted that.
Isabelle and Damien are still close, she opted for a role within the Genosha science division while Damien took a place within the military division.
Personality: With the loss of his vocal chords his personality is only ever transmitted across through his telepathic thoughts. Before his transformation he was often blunt and straight to the point and if his voice still remained, this would still be the case for the most part. Although he has softened to others as he has gotten older and shows greater empathy than he ever did before his mutation.
Abilities:
◾Increased Natural Ability
- [Strength, Agility, Reflexes and Speed far surpass any humans capability]
- [Rapid reaction times and able to leap great distances]
◾Feeding Tendrils
- [Able to latch onto food and other things to pull into his mouth]
- [Saliva is potent and can cause full body paralysis for up to four hours if it enters the body, whether ingested or through a wound]
- [Provides an extra-sensory ability to his own vision that causes all living creatures within thirty metres to glow no matter lighting levels, camouflage or other visual impairing device or situation. Works through a maximum of one thick concrete wall, any more and it is blocked]
◾Claws
- [Claws of a density and strength similar to hardened steel]
- [Mantis like claws reach over each of his shoulders with claws on each of his hands and his feet]
◾Prehensile Tail
- [A long tail stretching behind him features a scythe like adaptation of the same consistency as his claws]
◾Armour Plating
- [Large bone plates with a density and strength similar to hardened steel]
- [Run down the length of his back down to the tip of his tail, across the length of his mantis claws and across his quadriceps]
- [Exposed flesh is tough enough to resist stabbing attacks from bladed weapons]
◾Regeneration
- [Minor Cuts and scrapes heal within a minute]
- [Deep cuts and wounds such as bullet impacts take several hours]
- [Dismembered limbs regrow in just over one full day]
◾Instinctive Camouflage
- [Same visibility level as Predator camouflage]
- [Works at his own will]
◾Hive Mind
- [A psychic bubble emanates from him and is roughly thirty metres in diameter]
- [Telepathic powers beyond his own are unable to breach or work within the bubble, often appearing as nothing but a black hole]
- [As an extension of his mind, he can communicate telepathically with anyone in the bubble, whether one person or one hundred]
Appearance:
Theme:
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