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Of course, not in the next post. Toku doesn't even know Jael wants to accompany him yet. A few posts down the line.
So, I imagine it's pretty likely that Jael's overlooked something. That being, do you think it's that likely that the Avatar is normally allowed to have companions on his journey? If they're supposed to remain neutral, forsaking attachment and worldly possessions, that seems fairly unlikely.

So I imagine that Toku will have to strenuously insist that Jael be allowed to come along. Do you think so? It seems like something worth working in at some point.
They had a little back and forth, Toku and the official. Jael was only half listening. Toku seemed to think it was a joke. As if a Fire Nation official would waste his time on something so frivalous. Jael didn't feel the need to tell Toku about the Fire Sage's official document that he'd seen. Toku's doubts would vanish before long either way, and then any pretense of his former life would disappear. Let him enjoy the last few minutes of the first part of his life.

Toku turned to Jael. "It could be fun, I guess. It's not everyday I'm wrongly mistaken for the Avatar. And we'd get to go to the palace! So what do you say?" Do we come with this guy or what?"

"Yes, we're going." Jael managed to say. He moved out the door and started walking towards the capital, with a pace that was faster than it needed to be. He really wasn't in the mood to talk to Toku right now, so he figured he'd distance himself.

As he walked, various permutations of the same thoughts he had before kept coming to mind. His subconscious seemed to feel the need to remind him every two seconds that, yes, Toku was indeed the Avatar. Finally Jael put his hands to his head and just gave a big internal shout that echoed through his mind. Enough.

His thoughts cleared a bit, enough for Jael to focus more on the particulars. Toku was the Avatar. What would this mean for their relationship? Jael had taken plenty of joy in teasing Toku in the past, all in good fun; would Toku resent that now that he was the most powerful person in the world? Would he demand more respect, get a big head? It was hard to say. He didn't seem like the sort, but you'd never know what fame would do to a person.

Wait, would he even get to see Toku anymore? If Toku was the Avatar now, that meant he'd have to go off to learn the four elements. And after that he'd spend a large part of his life going from place to place, seeking to keep the balance. If he didn't ditch the job first.

Tch, even if Toku was going away, could Jael seriously just let him go on his own? Someone so irresponsible wasn't fit to be Avatar; he'd need someone to straighten him out. Yeah, that's right; Toku has his role to play, and Jael would make sure he'd play it. He'd be supportive, and be sure to gently nudge his friend down the right path. In a way, that made his role just as important as Toku's, didn't it?

Right now he had to plan. Toku would need to go to a firebending master first. The Fire Sages were good teachers, but also busy running the country. So they'd probably send him to another another firebending master, in another place.

Jael would need to pack. If he recalled his lessons well enough, the Avatar wasn't allowed to have many worldly possessions while mastering the elements. But the teacher had said nothing about whether his companions could have possessions. He'd need to pack some clothes, his favorite books, some money, maybe some food just in case.

Toku didn't have very many possessions to pack in the first place. Even if he did, his being the Avatar would ensure that he was taken care of. Heh, imagine that. People going out of their way to provide for Toku. Toku was going to have privileges for once. Wonder how he'd react to that.

Jael was sort of uncomfortable leaving his home and way of life behind. He was comfortable here, happy. Who knew what sort of hardships he'd have to endure at the Avatar's side. But it was necessary. A person who couldn't spot an opportunity when he saw one was a fool, and this was a once in the lifetime chance. Jael would be able to be at the Avatar's side as he shaped history. Perhaps he could shape some history himself...

Jael continued his planning as he walked, and before long the Fire Nation Capital Palace reared up before them. They climbed the long path of steps leading up to the palace walls, then the soldiers on patrol at the gate opened the doors for them. They moved past the guards and the various important people moving about outside the palace, and came directly to the entrance.

Soon they were inside, and were given a clear view of the beautiful marble and stone craftsmanship of the palace. The walls were all yellows and reds, royal colors of a most elegant variety. Patterns of dragons embroidered the walls, and vast columns were in place every several yards. The floor was pristine, and a straight red path ran from the entrance of the palace forward.

"Follow me," the official said, taking the red path. They went down a long hallway, and then entered a room with a pair of ornate doors. It was the room that bordered the Fire Sage's chamber. The official knocked twice on the door to the chamber.

"Wise Fire Sages, I have brought you the Avatar."

"Very good," An old but strong voice spoke from inside. "Send him in." The doors to the chamber opened. Jael took a few steps to the side of the outside chamber. This was clearly a very personal meeting, so he'd wait outside while his friend realized his destiny.
So can I transition to the palace with my post, or did you want our characters to talk on the way or something?

Also, what level of firebending would you say Toku is at?
It was a good opening post. By that same token, I hope you don't mind the slight control I used. If it's not ok I'll be glad to change it.

Also, feel free to make longer or shorter posts as the story requires; I've no problem with that.
The room was empty save for Jael and the government official. Toku had not yet arrived.

What was this feeling?

Jael's head was swimming; so disoriented that he had to lean against the wall for balance. He tried to steady himself, but he could still feel his hands shaking. A few trails of sweat ran down his neck; remnants of the race that he'd just ran, but could've happened a thousand years ago for how much had changed since then. His eyes darted around the room, before finally settling on the cause of this unease; the official.

He'd said Toku was The Avatar. The Avatar! Jael's first response had been disbelief. Sure, Toku was a decent firebender and all, but seriously? They thought that the Avatar was a guy who stole for and sometimes pawed through the garbage for his dinner? The guy who'd sooner cause disorder than keep the peace. And forget balance.

Jael figured it was a joke, and he told the man as much. "Very funny, you have me in tears, now seriously: what is this about?" But the official looking man maintained that his story was true. They even pulled an official looking document from their coat, branded with the seal of the Fire Sages. That was when Jael felt like the rug had been pulled up from under him.

As the reality of the situation began to sink in, Jael tried to cling to the reality that he used to know. Toku was his friend. One of his best friends, even. And even if Toku would never amounted to much, Jael was fine with him the way he was. Even in the future, once Jael was a government official and Toku was a lowly street sweeper, he'd still try to visit his friend from time to time...

Until this happened. Now everything he knew was in shambles. His friend being the Avatar; what even were the odds? This was like being struck by lightning. This was like being struck by lightning twice in a row. This was like-

While Jael was still considering the improbability of it all, Toku walked into The Loft.

"So, I'm guessing you're pretty happy with yourself?" Toku said to Jael. He couldn't respond to that. Toku had no idea what he was feeling right now. All Jael could do was keep staring at the official.

Toku soon noticed the man himself. "Uhm...who is this, buddy? One of your dad's friends or something? He sure looks stiff enough."

Jael still said nothing. He felt words form in his mouth, but he couldn't think of how to coherently put them together. What could be said?

"I have come bearing a message from the Fire Sages," the official said. Toku's eyes widened.

"Why?" Jael heard Toku say.

Jael saw the official open his mouth, and suddenly decided that he himself would be the one to tell Toku the news. It was better to hear it from a friend's mouth.

"Because Toku, You're the Avatar."
I know. It was inconsiderate of me. I just...I kept trying to get the post done, regardless of setbacks. It took me a while to realize it couldn't happen.
I am very sorry for my negligence. I will give no excuses. You are well within your rights to be angry. However, I do not believe that I will be able to post again anytime soon.
I am very sorry for my negligence. I will give no excuses. You are well within your rights to be angry. However, I do not believe that I will be able to post again anytime soon.
Not desiring to continue such a fruitless discussion, Umi continued to bandage herself, disinfecting some of her arm wounds first with a wet cloth.
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