In case you were wondering, yes, I drew my profile image. Do you like it? I think it has a depressing sort of beauty.
Disclaimer: I can sometimes be a little too honest, and my standards might be too high. People don't like that. But let it stand on record that I also view myself with the same light. I would not criticize others if I am not willing to take criticism myself. Be mature. Don't hold stupid grudges. If you've come here to scope me out, to find some shameful detail or quench some personal spite because my honesty upset you in some way, -- I'm sorry but there is nothing here for your desperate attempt at self-validation. I will settle the pettiness with an apology. Sorry. Happy?
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Our society lives in the grave of another. One that was much larger, much more capable, and infinitely more knowledgeable. Their great metal ruins stretch as far as the blackened horizon allows, and after a passing millenia, we are still astounded by what we find and rediscover deep in the tombs below. We might even consider them as 'Gods', and it is suggested they proclaimed themselves such a profaned title. But being as they were 'Gods', their mistakes were also one beyond magnitude. Even longer ago, it is said the world shattered from their failure and neglect. Not as a whole. But into pieces. Hell spilled forth from the gaping wound and it consumed all live across the globe. Our ancestors had little chance against the horrors that manifested in the eldritch storms, and every civilization was buried underneath the ashen snowfall. But yet, somehow we survived.
Today, we owe that fact to the 'Apothos System', and the tireless servants to the Grand Architect. The system itself keeps us cleansed from 'Sin', while the Architect and their kin work to protect us. Powered by the Infinity Spire and reconstructed by the Alchemists from the shells of old structures of civilization past, the sprawling city, 'Reclaimed Terra', is the last haven in this desolate land of metal and ashe.
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Accessing_Databanks Extra Lore - Purely for Fun (Trigger Warning: Lots of Exposition).
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Recently, after an off-prediction meteor shower, there have been dozens of rumors regarding strange sightings beyond the city walls. Please ignore all claims of these 'Invisible Children'. You are safe. However, since then, there have been individuals suddenly becoming capable of bizarre abilities. We are unsure if these are related. Regardless, due to the involvement of such invidual(s) in the breach and collapse of District 26, any unaccounted 'Witch' (Warlock for males) and all accomplice parties are henceforth placed under martial arrest. To prevent other accidents, any account of a person with abnormal quirks and mysticism or faulty I.T. should be notified to a local Magistrate immediately.
Do not be afraid. Go about your day regularly. A new branch of authority has been created in response to this newly recognized threat. These 'Witch Hunters' are the result of a protection project known as 'Melas'. They might appear threatening, but entrust to them as you do the Apothos System. As your saviors.
Sprawling City - Reclaimed Terra:
Because of the dangers and intrinsic failings of living on a 'dying world', great defensive measures are enforced in Reclaimed Terra. Citizens of the mega-city are mandated to possess a 'Identity Trace', an implant that allows the Apothos system to suppress a defective gene in humanity, known as 'Sin', along with also being a convenient method of semi-permanently storing credentials and individual data. Upon death, this involves injecting a special serum throughout the deceased that rapidly deteriorates their corpse before the defective gene has the time to activate. Witnesses to this process says it is akin to a seeing a body 'fade into fleeting black pedals'. Due to the horrifying effects of death without a functional I.T., any attempt to steal or tamper with these implants is against the legal statutes and will be met with heavy armed action from the Ferrus Magistratum. But the dangers do not come only from within. Outside, in the maw-like ruins of 'Ancient Terra', lies another scope of threat entirely. Numerous checkpoints literally wall off the city with itself, dividing collective community 'Districts' between stretches of towering mile-thick barricades, known as 'Rings'. This extra layering allows for closure and quarantine in case of great emergency, such as floods, outbreaks, and defensive breaches. As an extension of public safety protocol, Magistrates and automated defenses are authorized to 'shoot on sight' any, and all lifeforms, that the 'Apothos System' does not detect to possess an I.T. No questions asked.
Ruling Structure - It is said those closest to the Grand Architect are the 'Savants', who, for their loyalty and expertise, are granted powerful of gifts akin to miracles. There are Seven in total. Each one is responsible and governs a particular collection of districts.
Places of Interest:
The Infinity Spire - This towering black structure, glimmering from the immense energy provided by an ancient energy source, is what powers everything in Reclaimed Terra. Without it, the city would cease to function. Because of its important and sacred nature, its grounds have been made a forbidden place, kept secure for miles around by an army. From afar, some say the glowing coolant lines and energy discharging panels form some sort of runic message or some sort of code etched across.
Encompasses the largest district: District 1
The Apothos Network - Consisting of a massive communications and relaying tower connected to the Infinity Spire, that connects to all electrical systems across the Sprawling City. The Apothos System uses this network to keep regulation of all traffic and automated control over the entire ‘defined quadrant’ of the Sprawling City.
Outer Ring(s) - From a general view, life is daunting and thousands are born, destined to live and die in the musky metallic infrastructures of the 'Outer Ring'. This area is the largest of the Sprawling City, which has been slowly carved out and re-purposed over the hundreds of years by the inhabitants. From metallic shanty towns, to bustling trading ports, all can be found here in this over-crowded metropolitan dump. Encompasses District(s): 15 - 27 Inner Ring(s) - Buying 'higher-access' into the inner rings grants big improvements to the quality of living, such as more advanced luxuries and priority in public services. The rich tend to stay to themselves, but those who interact and do business with the 'lesser' populous are referred to as 'Lord '. These influential figures often are the chairmen or financial backers of huge businesses and exchange companies. Encompasses District(s): 2 - 5
Circuit Tidal Stabilizers (CTS) - Placed at numerous key locations above and below the surface level, these derelict structures help divert power from the Infinity Spire throughout the Sprawling City. Also known as 'Storm Barriers' due to their dual purpose of erecting powerful shields during 'Tidal' classed disasters, such as great eldritch storms, debris showers, or ashen blizzards. Because of their frequent heavy magni-electrical discharge, in order to cool down, they require constant upkeep and repair.
The Workshop - This massive industrial plant is where all the major machinery, such as Hollow Angels and Class-D catalysts, are created, maintained, and stored. These ancient garages is also the home of the 'Alchemy Foundry'. Here, potential Alchemists are elected from the populous to undergo specialized engineering training, and made compatible with bio-machinery through a program known as ‘Redaction’. Encompasses District(s): 8 - 11
The Ferrus Magistratum - Where the are eyes, there must be hands to act. While the Headquarters and supportive units are located in District 14 respectively, the Magistratum hold a plethora of standings and checkpoints across all secure districts. The standard Magistrates are armed with state-of-the-art weaponry, consisting of catalyst-powered rifles and external rigging, while higher ranking officers are issued advanced power armor and robotic combat interfaces known as ‘Shells’. Greater threats, such as Behemoths and the occasional Leviathan, are handled by Hollow Angels, huge mechanized war-machines recovered from the depths of Ancient Terra.
Custodia et Sanitarium - An entire ward in the Central Junction dedicated to medical science research and rediscovery. The facility also functions as a detainment and rehabilitation center and has a branch dedicated to psychological investigation. This institution would head many medical breakthroughs, such as organ stem-growth, 'Memory Templating', and flawless body reconstruction. The most common and understood, however, is the ‘Identity Trace’. Later on, the specialized anti-magic unit ‘Melas’ will be founded and connected here. Encompasses District(s): 12
The Black Database - Rumored to be housed deep within the ‘heart’ of the Spawling City, and protected by a secretive order. All knowledge and information is directed from every districts and saved in this ancient mainframe. It is said that even forgotten knowledge, such as memories lost in death, can be restored by the Savant governing the sector. Encompasses District(s): Unknown
Beyond the Wall:
Eclipse Zone - Outside the secure 'defined quadrants', are the boundless ruins of Ancient Terra. It is said we are the descendants of this once-powerful civilization, spared from utter extinction from the victory of heroes past. Because of the gigantic size of each level, only levels up to 4 have been explored and mapped after these many centuries. Special Lifts and drop-points have been carefully left behind for new and returning Divers.
This zone earns its ominous name from how quickly communication waves meet heavy interference beyond, and of the sheer 'light-eclipsing' darkness that welcomes those brave, or foolish, enough to leave the safety of the city. Because of the huge risk of danger, any 'relics' and 'artifacts' found below are very valuable and go for ludicrous prices on the market. Even bits and pieces of damage hardware can fetch respectable commissions in exchanges. Brave adventurous types, or desperate madmen, wishing to strike it rich, eagerly sign themselves to become 'Divers' for the Magistratum. They will be allowed free access in and out of the city, some equipment, and priority protection from the Magistrate. But they will also be taxed for a (large) portion of their findings, in return. Unsanctioned 'Divers', individuals who somehow get out of the city without needing to go through a checkpoint, whether through fake access codes, secret pathways, etc, and avoid the 'cargo levy' entirely, are met with brutal martial force.
What will drive you to take this risk?
Ocean of Ashe - Since the cataclysmic event known as the 'Eternal Eclipse', the sky, and by extension, the Sun itself, has been blocked out by this thick layer of debris, dust, and grime. The world has since gone sterile and all plant-life requiring its energy has ceased to exist. Because of this, the weather is almost always freezing with blizzards of ashen snow. Only the occasional Continental Storm or Debris Shower, the sizes of which, threaten to tear apart the world (again), offer any level of variety. Oh, and say hello to fungus rations every day of your life. Some come in different flavors. Fun!
Of Beasts and Monsters
While we hid behind the comfort of our walls, the fauna of this world have been forced to evolve in many strange and exotic ways to survive in this harsh apocalyptic landscape. Some are simple and brutish, their threat lying in hardy strength or overwhelming numbers alone. Others are more cunning, attacking with poison and ambushing unsuspecting prey from camoflage. Some are a mixture of both, savage creatures, such as the Wyvern, who employ a deadly corrosive breath, or the Syrgian, whose fur conducts intense static charges. The greatest of these creatures are the Behemoths and Leviathans, ancient, mountain-sized beasts whose sheer scale defies any reason or logic. Killing them have proven impossible, and only through great battle will one be detered from wandering into trampling the Sprawling City. Regardless, big or small, all pose a threat to even the most experienced Divers.
Recently, there are rumors of things even the beasts are afraid of.
The Forgeborn
These things are essentially ancient machines that survived the Eclipse. Many have gone dormant, having falling into energy-conservation mode long ago. Still, this does not mean finding one will guarantee worthy loot. The presence of the beasts and the passage of time has left many of them rendered to nothing more than scrap. Not to mention the countless divers who have meticulously stripped the halls decades and decades before. Some have different protocols though, and still function. Such as the 'Sweepers', who mindlessly attempt to clean the endless rusted halls despite their own physical deterioration, or the great 'Builders', who continue to perform maintenance services as they have done for countless of centuries. They may be passive, but interrupt them in any way, and they will call upon the 'War-Forged'. These variants were built for, as the name suggests, pure combat. Do not let their decomposed state fool you. They will ruthlessly attack any intruders on their patrol paths, armed with deadly arcane blasters, and are capable of staving off most projectiles with ease due to possessing a personal arc-shield. Even then, attempting to crack their thick plating is a great endeavor on its own. But if a crew manages to take one of these down, and not damage the components too much. The battle is well worth the reward.
Though we are the children of those who created them, they do not view us in the same light as our distant ancestors. To them, we are incomparable. Nothing more than filth to be cleansed.
OP Afterword:
Hello! And welcome to my little thread! I hope that the flavor text I added above helped immerse you into this magi-science superblended setting of mine. You might know me, you might not. I would like first to say that I am a person of high standards. That means I can be rather critical, but I have an incredible soft spot for displays of hard work and passion. That doesn't mean write a lot, or use fancy phrasing. Quality over quantity. And before attempting to join, I encourage being responsible enough to post status updates to the thread. If you happen to get busy for a period of time, or simply lose interest, let us know. I do not want to leave others hanging because one person decided to be a wanker. I usually wait a week before debating on kicking an inactive person out.
I will not be accepting more than 6 people, as I very much dislike the clutter and disconnect between characters commonly found in larger parties. I have learned from my mistakes.
As it stands, this story will be focused on a small team of 'Unsanctioned Divers' individuals who make an illegal living off of going into the lower levels of Ancient Terra, known as the 'Eclipse Zone'. More information above, if you skipped it. They can be new or old, with a surprisingly large age range. A key event will revolve around a particular discovery they make one day, and how it will place them at the center of a world-changing event. I will present a larger over-arcing plot, but feel free to share ideas. If it fits with the core themes and doesn't conflict with anything I already have, I'll gladly consider it. Also, there will be mature themes. 18+ only.
Fantasy elements show up as the story progresses, as you can imagine. This is a Fantasy, Sci-Fi fusion, after all.
There are also different types of Divers, divided into 'Specialists'. They are as follows; Artificer/Collector, Technician, Cipher, and Crasher, but I won't go into much more detail until we hit the OOC phase. (If we do.) There is already a lot of information here as it stands. If there is still confusion, feel free to ask questions.
Local Myths of the Outer Rings -
On the first day of every week, it is said an eerie static can be heard over a unique frequency level. A voice can barely be made during the interval. Any attempts to record the voice ends with garbled data.
During certain storms, it is said mysterious figures can be seen standing outside the wall. For some reason, the Apothos System cannot detect them, nor do any officers attempt to attack or investigate them. They have since taken the name 'Invisible Children'.
During the biannual Solstices, when the ever-present sky storms are at their weakest point, a faint structure can be seen glimmering in the Ocean of Ashe. It is a wonder what it may be. Some speculate that, due to its unique shape, that it might be a castle of some sort. But since no one can show any conclusive proof, most ignore it as nothing more than a large chunk of floating debris in the atmosphere. Like the countless others.
A massive tower can be faintly seen at the tip of the horizon during a regulator discharge or electrical storm. It appears to extend to the very cloudy ocean above. Rumors say that a guardian protects it from any intruders, deterring the unworthy from the paradise leading above.
Hm. No wonder I got confused. You kept saying 'bad guys' this entire time when refering to them, when they actually weren't supposed to be yet. Haha, okay. Got'cha.
Will be working on a more appropriate character soon. Might take some time though, again. It really isn't easy doing all these concepts. Somehow I'll make it though.
Yeah, thats why I was kinda iffy about finishing it. I wanted to try to do something a little abnormal to the setting, something that is 'old' enough to harken back to when magic was a thing. Serve a bit of narrative contrast, you know? And I might've misunderstood the 'hunting' bit. Thought they just wanted cold killers, but now realize they need more stealthy peeps. Anyway, its my own fault. I just do wild things when I get the pen doodling . No hard feelings.
Okay, well I can give it a go again if you'll allow me. Need to think of another design now though...
How many characters does that make it? And here I thought it was gonna be a nicely packed, small roleplay. Jeez, things will be pretty crazy the first few days, weeks even. Good luck, GM.
@Ghost Queen And I agree, winning or losing is not important to a narrative. It's about how the characters develop and come to a greater understanding of something, the 'combat' simply being the method. A fun one at that, I'll admit.
I think my statement is taken out of context. Directly after, I said I was open to the fact; meaning I'm accepting of the criticism. It was more a self depravating joke than anything. I was speaking from the perspective of someone happening on my distasteful actions on this thread. As meta shaming myself. Sorry if it upset you.
Like I said, I dont care about cliches or unoriginal work. Such a thing doesnt exist. It is the amount of effort put in that I care about.
Let's be honest here. I'm a toxic flamer elitist. I am fairly open to the fact. Though only because I put my heart in the things I care a lot about. And that was actually me who suggested heavy regulation across all levels, and they suggested otherwise, but whatever. The debate, at least on my end, is that a normal society wouldn't allow mentally unstable people to walk freely in public space, especially public icons, because the Mygis is such a heavily regulated public? (I'm still not sure.) sport. It was not over whether there were rules or not. That much is self-implied. As being dangerous is very different than being threatening. I used sports professionals as an example, since they are similar, people held in high regard and are idols of children and the like. Perhaps it was done poorly on my part. It was all speculation on both our parts anyway. Babyraging aside. XD
I look forward to seeing all the approved characters in action.
@snake153 My character doesn't even know how she got her supernatural powers, and she was approved, so at birth seems like it wouldn't be out of the question. I'm fairly sure Tablet Powers, everyone is born with them, just like how they are connected to the Enlil Network from birth. Unless there is a process or something that I'm unaware of... Realizing them might take some people more time than others however, seeing the varied origin stories from what I've seen of the approved sheets.
You guys really went ham with mature discussion overnight. I'm so proud. I'm a little concerned about the lore implications about some characters, but that is ultimately up to the GM to moderate and consider. Might even lead to some level of collaboration. Overall, everyone did a very good job. :^D
And personally, I don't mind body gore. So long as it is done tastefully. There is a difference between a nice little shock factor and disturbing amounts of excessiveness.
Yeah, sorry about that. I can be a major stickler about certain things. Anyway, here is my contribution to the 'lack of overly fluffy dogo pictures' charity drive. I hope its fluffiness will help your ailing soul and guide you to a better place. Not my dog either.
Hello, there really isn't much to see here. :^D
In case you were wondering, yes, I drew my profile image. Do you like it? I think it has a depressing sort of beauty.
[b]Disclaimer:[/b] I can sometimes be a little too honest, and my standards might be too high. People don't like that. But let it stand on record that I also view myself with the same light. I would not criticize others if I am not willing to take criticism myself. Be mature. Don't hold stupid grudges. If you've come here to scope me out, to find some shameful detail or quench some personal spite because my honesty upset you in some way, -- I'm sorry but there is nothing here for your desperate attempt at self-validation. I will settle the pettiness with an apology. Sorry. Happy?
I can't do anything more than that.
<div style="white-space:pre-wrap;">Hello, there really isn't much to see here. :^D<br><br>In case you were wondering, yes, I drew my profile image. Do you like it? I think it has a depressing sort of beauty. <br><br><span class="bb-b">Disclaimer:</span> I can sometimes be a little too honest, and my standards might be too high. People don't like that. But let it stand on record that I also view myself with the same light. I would not criticize others if I am not willing to take criticism myself. Be mature. Don't hold stupid grudges. If you've come here to scope me out, to find some shameful detail or quench some personal spite because my honesty upset you in some way, -- I'm sorry but there is nothing here for your desperate attempt at self-validation. I will settle the pettiness with an apology. Sorry. Happy? <br><br>I can't do anything more than that. </div>