@HylianRose Oke followed your lesson of English, and indeed I found the mistakes that you had pointed out :)
I do hope I have them all now xD
I do hope I have them all now xD
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@HylianRose changed the CS :)
Hope she's alright now ^-^
Hope she's alright now ^-^
@HylianRose Changed my CS, hopefully most mistakes are gone now ^.^ If not... Just say so :)
@HylianRose Thanks! :) I shall try to do my best and search for the small mistakes I made, although it would probably be once I have a computer instead of a mobile xD Created my CS with my mobile aswell so... xD
And I appreciate that you are willing to aid me with my grammar!! :D
And I appreciate that you are willing to aid me with my grammar!! :D
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Forum: 1x1 Interest Checks
Interested :)
Shoot me a PM if you want to do it with me ;)
Shoot me a PM if you want to do it with me ;)
When will we start?! :D
I can't wait to begin! :D
I can't wait to begin! :D
Appearance:
Age: 25
Name: Dabriah Sauagius
Gender: Female
Height/Weight: 1,62 meters tall, 58 kilo.
Skills:
- Ninjitsu Expert.
- Freerunner.
- Keen eye.
- Lockpicker.
Personality:
Dabriah is a girl, that mostly trusts her own and with her complex mind most would say she would only allow those in her life that are useful to her. Although she seems sweet, she is mostly harsh and says what she thinks. Because of that, she would hurt most people and yet even most of them appreciate it.
Dabriah is a woman that sees most aspects of a person, her surroundings and the world that surrounds her.
For her keen eyes and her mind that works 24/7, she would be seen as a weirdo.
Background:
Debriah comes from a wealthy family, and yet she didn't wanted to be part of it. Her father mostly cared about his own wealth and the money he would achieve through this, as her mother used to spend most of her time with another man.
Debriah found out about this on the age of 9, and confronted her mother with the evidence that she had gathered, her mother was shocked and with mere minutes they had struck a deal. Her mother would give a certain amount of money each month to her and in return Debriah wouldn't tell her father.
From this moment, Debriah's mind began to see more and more things that were odd, like the way her father gained his money. As she confronted the man about his actions and his connections to the underworld, she even struck a deal with him. Debriah would be allowed to do anything she wanted, and could knock on his door for everything she needed. In return she would turn a blind eye towards her father and his work, she would even work for him on certain cases that needed a keen eye.
As Debriah grew older, she moved out and began working as a consultant for the police, although her observant mind was useful to them and the fact that she didn't asked for money, she still couldn't find a person that truly interested her, or that she would call a "friend".
Family/Relationships: (Open for now)
~ I hope she's accepted :) Otherways I will change the things that need to be changed ;) and please... don't look to much to my grammar... English isn't my main languedge so sometimes I can misspell things or a sentence would't completely add up... :'( ~
~~ Edited most mistakes that I have found :) If there are more within my CS, please adress me to them :) Or point them out ^.^ ~~
~~ Edited again: Found more mistakes that you had pointed out! :) Hope I have them all now xD ~~
Age: 25
Name: Dabriah Sauagius
Gender: Female
Height/Weight: 1,62 meters tall, 58 kilo.
Skills:
- Ninjitsu Expert.
- Freerunner.
- Keen eye.
- Lockpicker.
Personality:
Dabriah is a girl, that mostly trusts her own and with her complex mind most would say she would only allow those in her life that are useful to her. Although she seems sweet, she is mostly harsh and says what she thinks. Because of that, she would hurt most people and yet even most of them appreciate it.
Dabriah is a woman that sees most aspects of a person, her surroundings and the world that surrounds her.
For her keen eyes and her mind that works 24/7, she would be seen as a weirdo.
Background:
Debriah comes from a wealthy family, and yet she didn't wanted to be part of it. Her father mostly cared about his own wealth and the money he would achieve through this, as her mother used to spend most of her time with another man.
Debriah found out about this on the age of 9, and confronted her mother with the evidence that she had gathered, her mother was shocked and with mere minutes they had struck a deal. Her mother would give a certain amount of money each month to her and in return Debriah wouldn't tell her father.
From this moment, Debriah's mind began to see more and more things that were odd, like the way her father gained his money. As she confronted the man about his actions and his connections to the underworld, she even struck a deal with him. Debriah would be allowed to do anything she wanted, and could knock on his door for everything she needed. In return she would turn a blind eye towards her father and his work, she would even work for him on certain cases that needed a keen eye.
As Debriah grew older, she moved out and began working as a consultant for the police, although her observant mind was useful to them and the fact that she didn't asked for money, she still couldn't find a person that truly interested her, or that she would call a "friend".
Family/Relationships: (Open for now)
~ I hope she's accepted :) Otherways I will change the things that need to be changed ;) and please... don't look to much to my grammar... English isn't my main languedge so sometimes I can misspell things or a sentence would't completely add up... :'( ~
~~ Edited most mistakes that I have found :) If there are more within my CS, please adress me to them :) Or point them out ^.^ ~~
~~ Edited again: Found more mistakes that you had pointed out! :) Hope I have them all now xD ~~
Interested!! :F
Already know what I'll create ^-^
Already know what I'll create ^-^
Interested :)
Interested :)
Gonne keep an eye on this one ^-^
Gonne keep an eye on this one ^-^
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