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I don't know how to text fight. I am looking for someone to teach me
They remade Star Wars. Remakes can further the life of a franchise if done well. Many times they don't work but sometimes they are good enough to add to the franchise legacy. I think in this case, they did well enough to not damage the franchise but added a new and fairly well done take.
Well, I don't know. I don't think the writing is crisp and as witty as it could be. I think the original was better written. Using female leads doesn't bother me, they do a good job with the script and there is a chemistry between the four leads.
Thank you. I am taking a break from reading/ critiquing movie scripts and treatments. I come here as a release.
Alive? Perhaps. On occasion I find myself treading through mist haunted woods. Standing amid snow covered peaks staring at new worlds. When I rouse myself from deepest of slumbers, I hear the din of battle call to me. I seek solace among the warriors. Life is fleeting, slumber eternal.
Does some cat named Rilla show up here from time to time? If he does, let him know I'm looking for him.
OK. Sorry gang. With the winter storm bearing down on us, I had to make sure my mother and father in law made their medical appointments, and had the basic necessities. I will be back to posting after I get back this afternoon.
Scenario 1: City Street- A typical city street, 40-feet wide and 200 feet long from stop sign to stop sign. Ruined storefronts on either side, there is debris on the sidewalks and wrecked cars on the street. Fighters start at either end. Day- 10 AM, slightly cloudy and cool.

The fast movers roared over the ruined city. Dark, delta shaped forms cutting through the air. The sonic booms of their engines echoing across the battered and blasted landscape. Silence covered the ruins as the last of the cluster munition explosions died down. Minutes later a solitary helicopter came, low and fast, toward a rubble free area. The crew scanning the horizon and their equipment for any hostiles. Racing forward in the ever present dust, which seemed to choke the life out of everything.

Keshkaril had been a cluster fuck from the jump. HUMINT had portrayed the city free of civilians. Only war hungry bastards left. No one knew that the captured citizens were to be human shields. The collateral damage was horrendous. Only once the damage assessments came did the truth come out. The city suffered one hellacious hammering. It had been a decapitating attack, one designed to kill the leaders in one overwhelming move. The roads leading out of the city littered with bodies strewn about like so much debris and trash. The mud movers called it death row highway. They hammered the fleeing civilians, dropping their ordinance on them. Killing them where they stood. The human cost was high. So high that the echelons beyond reality deemed it best to drop in operators to hunt down and take out the sick fucks. Hiding down among the civilians, the terrorists felt they were untouchable. They would find out otherwise. The operators sent after them were to be swift, silent and above all, deadly.

The pilot looked back, shouting to JT, 'We're coming in fast, so far so good.”

JT nodded once then glanced out the open door. The gunner scanning the rubble and rooftops for any activity. The business end of his mini-gun swaying. They were two minutes out, and no matter how many insertions he did, JT always felt queasy. That was a good thing as it kept him alive, better to be queasy than cocky. Checking his weapons then his gear carefully. JT felt a shake, looking up into the black lenses of the jumpmaster, who shouted, "Hey bud! Get ready!"

Nodding JT concentrated as the craft slowed and began to hover. With a loud click the side door popped then slid open, hearing her yell, "GO! GO! GO!" JT formed some ectoplasm into a gray-white ball and tossed it towards the winch. Once it caught, he swung out and dropped out of the helicopter. The sudden jolt caused him to grunt as the line slipped a little. Gripping the thick, translucent material, he rappelled down the line, touching boots to earth. As he did, the Blackhawk whipped around and lit a fire as it roared out of the city.

The boom and rattle from the acceleration caused the ground to vibrate. As it did JT was moving, the HK416 ready as he vacated the LZ seeking cover. Finding a still standing brick wall he hunkered down and checked his time. Marking it. He tapped the earbud. The chatter flooded him, when a single voice cut through, "Bolo what's your status? Over."

Peering over the wall again JT chinned the mic, "Six this is Bolo, I am reading you five by five. Over."

"Roger that Bolo. You have some reported soft targets a klick south of the LZ. Over."

Scanning south, he could see what looked like a wide expanse of rubble. Licking his lips he nodded, "Roger six- soft targets south, one klick. I'll service the target. Over. Out."

Standing JT cracked his neck and began making his way towards the reported movement. Covering the kilometer, he came to a small rise. Laying flat, he stretched out and scanned the area with the binoculars. Seeing nothing he continued his search, soon finding himself on a rubble-filled street.
No worries. The idea is simple. Your powers, coupled with CQC are highly adaptable. Let me fire up my lappy and I will start a scenario.

@DJAtomika Ok, the setting has been established. This is a war-torn cityscape. When did your character get into the city? Why? Did your character survive the alpha strike to the city or witness it from afar? Is your character a terrorist? Describe the ruins as your character sees them as you make your way to the street.
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