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I love your ideas! How do you feel about the idea for medieval, kidnapper and princess?
Just been working. I'll post again, just been pretty exhausted.
The Skull watched over his people as they gathered for the sacrifice that would determine the weather and the crop that would come in. Since everyone wasn't able to come, those marked with blood represented villages and or towns spread across the island. The marked ones, kind of like lords that would come from royalty in more advanced social empires. The marked ones weren't only lords, but they were also elite warriors for the Blood God. Warriors found worthy to be granted eternal happiness. Their armor composed of their parents and their sanity of their flesh.
Before the ceremony began, the Skull allowed them all to kiss the tusk of boar, the dagger that would be used to severe the body parts of the young naked female that lay before them. The woman had her legs forced apart as the Skull spoke to her. He whispered only words she could hear, whilst the marked ones and the other Mayoak's remained quiet. He grabbed her hands and tied them together, then raised them above her head and pulled them back far enough for them to dislocate. She wasn't allowed to scream in pain because it was disrespectful to her god.
Her tears spilled from her face as her skin was twisted until her hands were fastened to the device she was spread out upon. The Skull, smiling as he did so, licked the girls face tasting her tears. He turned to the crowd of Mayaok's and stepped behind the girl. He grabbed her hair and forced it forward.
"I am proud to be sacrificed for the BLOOD GOD!" She screamed as in one swift movement, The Skull ripped her head from her shoulders with the help of his blade. Her blood spewed from every artery in her neck in quick bursts. The Skull watched intently as he read the signs that the Blood God gave him. Her heart stopped as she ran out of blood. The Skull pressed his tongue against her chest as he ran over her bloodied breasts and down to her stomach. He raised his head with a smile of pure terror.
"The Blood God is pleased with us! He will supply us with water for our crops! A storm of plenty will become," The Skull announced, "my beloved family... we will feast heavenly in the future to come. Wait..." The Skull turned quickly to the body that was shaking. The skin holding the lifeless body ripped apart as the girl jumped to her feet. Her arms dangling at her side by tendons. It grabbed the Skull and lifted him into the air.
"What! A black cloud! What does this mean?! How will it pass over us... a storm of fire," The Skull cried out as the girl held him up his hands holding hers, "we have been hidden for years! We will be ready for it!" The girl released the Skull as her body fell to the floor. The Skull clutched his throat gently as he felt the girls grasp.
"Marked Ones! Get to your homes! Something vile is coming our way," The Skull choked as he looked at the body laying on the floor.
Before the ceremony began, the Skull allowed them all to kiss the tusk of boar, the dagger that would be used to severe the body parts of the young naked female that lay before them. The woman had her legs forced apart as the Skull spoke to her. He whispered only words she could hear, whilst the marked ones and the other Mayoak's remained quiet. He grabbed her hands and tied them together, then raised them above her head and pulled them back far enough for them to dislocate. She wasn't allowed to scream in pain because it was disrespectful to her god.
Her tears spilled from her face as her skin was twisted until her hands were fastened to the device she was spread out upon. The Skull, smiling as he did so, licked the girls face tasting her tears. He turned to the crowd of Mayaok's and stepped behind the girl. He grabbed her hair and forced it forward.
"I am proud to be sacrificed for the BLOOD GOD!" She screamed as in one swift movement, The Skull ripped her head from her shoulders with the help of his blade. Her blood spewed from every artery in her neck in quick bursts. The Skull watched intently as he read the signs that the Blood God gave him. Her heart stopped as she ran out of blood. The Skull pressed his tongue against her chest as he ran over her bloodied breasts and down to her stomach. He raised his head with a smile of pure terror.
"The Blood God is pleased with us! He will supply us with water for our crops! A storm of plenty will become," The Skull announced, "my beloved family... we will feast heavenly in the future to come. Wait..." The Skull turned quickly to the body that was shaking. The skin holding the lifeless body ripped apart as the girl jumped to her feet. Her arms dangling at her side by tendons. It grabbed the Skull and lifted him into the air.
"What! A black cloud! What does this mean?! How will it pass over us... a storm of fire," The Skull cried out as the girl held him up his hands holding hers, "we have been hidden for years! We will be ready for it!" The girl released the Skull as her body fell to the floor. The Skull clutched his throat gently as he felt the girls grasp.
"Marked Ones! Get to your homes! Something vile is coming our way," The Skull choked as he looked at the body laying on the floor.
I'll work on a post for tomorrow.
Nation Name: Mayaok
Population: 5,000,000
Year it was founded: 0
Flag: (I need to make one)
Where is it on the map?: The dark blue island by itself
Capitol: Maya Temple
Capitol location in country: It is located in a labyrinth of cave tunnels that only the Mayaok's know somewhere near the center of the Island.
Society: Their houses are all decorated differently. Bones and Flesh to Wood and Stone. Their clothing is skin or fur from any form of animal, and soldiers wear armor for their formal and informal clothing.
Military: Strength in military ranges from 50,000 to 80,000 approximately.
Government: Theocracy
- People of Importance:
The Skull: A skinny muscular man who performs Torturous Acts in the name of the Blood God. He is also the leader of everyone, the only one who has been touched by the Blood God's Incarnation and lived. The Skull is a very talented acrobat and one of the only marksmen in the nation.
More can be introduced later. I really just based this off of Mayan Society. Just solely around the sacrificer and the sacrificed.
Economic: Blood, Bones, and other fleshy parts. Blood is sacred to the Blood God. To the Mayaoks, if you spill your blood, you are rich. In a later life, if they consume the flesh and use the bones of a family member, they are looked at by the Blood God with eternal happiness.
-Tariff:
Religions: The Blood God, is who they worship mercilessly. A deity and unknown god to many. The power of the Blood God is almost limitless, but only the truly insane can speak for him.
Technology: Their weapons are made out of bones of animals and humans or anything else that falls prey to them.
Domestic Issues: None
Issues Abroad: Secrecy. The Blood God demands their civilization to be secret and if anyone finds them, they shall be slain.
World Influence: 1 for they have been hidden for years!
-Relations with Neighbors: None
Major Cities: Mayao
Landscape: Dense Forest and Rocky Mountains
History: The Blood God rose above all and created his own breed of human. Poor souls tortured by internal damnation and desire to feast on human flesh and blood. They were first born out of the flesh of the Great White Stag and from it ten were born. Five men and Five women, ten inherited the land after massacre of local natives. The Blood God took over the form of a boar and gored one of the men. He survived after slaying the boar and placing it's skull over his head. The Blood God now lives inside him, The Skull... The leader of Forever.
Strengths: The Mayaok are very dedicated in their training. It isn't just for fighting but to keep their bodies healthy and acrobatic. They are talented free-runners and ambushers.
Weaknesses: Their weapons are made of bone and stone so they have to rely on blunt force trauma or the fleshy parts of armored opponents.
Summary: I suck at making these kind of sheets, so It's really shitty. Just wanted to claim that blue island. I'll be back in a few hours to fix it though. Still working on a Flag as well.
Population: 5,000,000
Year it was founded: 0
Flag: (I need to make one)
Where is it on the map?: The dark blue island by itself
Capitol: Maya Temple
Capitol location in country: It is located in a labyrinth of cave tunnels that only the Mayaok's know somewhere near the center of the Island.
Society: Their houses are all decorated differently. Bones and Flesh to Wood and Stone. Their clothing is skin or fur from any form of animal, and soldiers wear armor for their formal and informal clothing.
Military: Strength in military ranges from 50,000 to 80,000 approximately.
Government: Theocracy
- People of Importance:
The Skull: A skinny muscular man who performs Torturous Acts in the name of the Blood God. He is also the leader of everyone, the only one who has been touched by the Blood God's Incarnation and lived. The Skull is a very talented acrobat and one of the only marksmen in the nation.
More can be introduced later. I really just based this off of Mayan Society. Just solely around the sacrificer and the sacrificed.
Economic: Blood, Bones, and other fleshy parts. Blood is sacred to the Blood God. To the Mayaoks, if you spill your blood, you are rich. In a later life, if they consume the flesh and use the bones of a family member, they are looked at by the Blood God with eternal happiness.
-Tariff:
Religions: The Blood God, is who they worship mercilessly. A deity and unknown god to many. The power of the Blood God is almost limitless, but only the truly insane can speak for him.
Technology: Their weapons are made out of bones of animals and humans or anything else that falls prey to them.
Domestic Issues: None
Issues Abroad: Secrecy. The Blood God demands their civilization to be secret and if anyone finds them, they shall be slain.
World Influence: 1 for they have been hidden for years!
-Relations with Neighbors: None
Major Cities: Mayao
Landscape: Dense Forest and Rocky Mountains
History: The Blood God rose above all and created his own breed of human. Poor souls tortured by internal damnation and desire to feast on human flesh and blood. They were first born out of the flesh of the Great White Stag and from it ten were born. Five men and Five women, ten inherited the land after massacre of local natives. The Blood God took over the form of a boar and gored one of the men. He survived after slaying the boar and placing it's skull over his head. The Blood God now lives inside him, The Skull... The leader of Forever.
Strengths: The Mayaok are very dedicated in their training. It isn't just for fighting but to keep their bodies healthy and acrobatic. They are talented free-runners and ambushers.
Weaknesses: Their weapons are made of bone and stone so they have to rely on blunt force trauma or the fleshy parts of armored opponents.
Summary: I suck at making these kind of sheets, so It's really shitty. Just wanted to claim that blue island. I'll be back in a few hours to fix it though. Still working on a Flag as well.
Edited!
This sounds awesome, but I apologize that my RP skill and dialogue doesn't match that of which you require.
TheFoxLord said
i wouldnt say they live in the coldest areas of the world(the entire world is ice) but the only place they would be able to hunt whales near the equator where the ice is thin enough to brake through.
Well... I guess I suck at nation building. :(
CorinTraven said
Smiter, overall I think your app has potentials, however there are a few issues.1. Your military over-populates your population by 3,000,000. I think that is more than likely a typo mistake though. Generally, we're going to want to keep it to less than 1% of the population in the military. I've not a clue what you mean by '75' in melee.2. I feel like you dwelt on individual people, which is fine, but society as a whole, I've no clue of their norms and what not.3. Strengths and Weaknesses refers to the country itself, not the people. By that I mean, where it excels, such as 'Powerful army', 'warlike mentality', and weaknesses such as 'backwardness' 'inferior technology' 'isolation'. Other than that, I think you're going in the right direction, so if we can get in touch and clear some of that up, I'll be happy to accept you.
Damn it. I'll need to fix that on Monday. I knew I should have proof read it!
Nation name: Fyrsvid (Fierce-Vi- duh)
Race/Races: I know someone is thinking it so i am taking it, "Abominable Snowmen" but in this RP they can talk and are friendly.
Population: 1500
Key Leaders: Gurkan (Gurk-An) the Leader, Blyun (Bly-Un) the Trader, and Cxan (Can) the Diplomat.
Location: Okok
resources: Seal, Polar Bear, and Killer Whale.
Imports: Wood and Tools
Exports: Seal Meat, Killer Whale Oil, and Polar Bear Fur
Other: Well since they are Yeti's the cold doesn't effect them as much, but if it does get cold enough they can still die. They don't hunt whales so to speak, normally they lure them on the ice with a seal or something and then kill it, just so you know how they get the oil.
History: The abominable snowmen have been around forever. They live only in the coldest area's of the world so they don't have many visitors.
Culture: They are primitive but they aren't. They eat as vikings, large families gathered at massive tables.
(I'll fix whatever)
Race/Races: I know someone is thinking it so i am taking it, "Abominable Snowmen" but in this RP they can talk and are friendly.
Population: 1500
Key Leaders: Gurkan (Gurk-An) the Leader, Blyun (Bly-Un) the Trader, and Cxan (Can) the Diplomat.
Location: Okok
resources: Seal, Polar Bear, and Killer Whale.
Imports: Wood and Tools
Exports: Seal Meat, Killer Whale Oil, and Polar Bear Fur
Other: Well since they are Yeti's the cold doesn't effect them as much, but if it does get cold enough they can still die. They don't hunt whales so to speak, normally they lure them on the ice with a seal or something and then kill it, just so you know how they get the oil.
History: The abominable snowmen have been around forever. They live only in the coldest area's of the world so they don't have many visitors.
Culture: They are primitive but they aren't. They eat as vikings, large families gathered at massive tables.
(I'll fix whatever)
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