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Sorry dude, didn't even notice that myself till now. Also ooo sheet, things getting tense over here with the fleshspinner


kaezira fucking hates those things. in his eyes, magic is a beautiful work of art. and he sees their form of magic is a mockery of this art form.

Two people have posted while I was writing, and both times I've had to nearly re-write the whole fucking thing.


deepest apologies.

Your posts were certainly detailed enough for me. I don't think they lacked anything necessary. That's what matters.

Of all people, I know how fun it is to add tons of detail, but don't feel obligated to put more facts in a post than are needed. When you write, the goal should be to tell someone what happened, how it happened, and who was involved in it's happening. If a detail is not relevant, don't include it, and don't feel the need to apologize for not having it. :D


yea i guess that makes sense. but i find that adding the detail makes the reading experience more enjoyable and a lot more novel-like.

sorry for my short and detail-lacking posts. i've been uninspired but i wont let it keep me from continuing the story forward. also @Arkaotic our character's voice colors are very similar so i chose a darker shade of blue to differentiate their voices in my post


"And what makes you so high and mighty that you get to say such a thing?!" The elvish woman's remark made him realize how rude what he'd said must have made him sound to the public of close-minded neutral like herself. Still, the arch-mage of the Nephilim wasn't about to let this woman make him sound a fool. He dismounted his horse and stepped forward about a meter, and directed his words towards the elf. "I'm terribly sorry, but have you seen the thing? It's absolutely hideous! And that sounds horrible I know, but its by complete choice! Does that not baffle you? It's basically begging to be hated."
The creature stood swiftly, frightening the crowd around it. The women and children screamed, and the men gasped. Unsurprisingly, as it revealed its repulsive self as result. "Begone, people! Do you have any business monster-slaying? Otherwise, you're wasting you're own time." Of course, they did nothing. Kaezira strongly disliked the common neutral. After all that the Nephilim had done for them and now they are opposing the holy light? Raziel himself? Unspeakable. The monster began to speak to the young girl, it started analyzing her. What horrible things does it have on its mind? She began to hide her body from it as if she was feeling violated.
Bright and loud lightning struck the ground near the group, and Kaezira was quickly aware of what it was. Carlisle, his brave Nephilim brother. "Ah, thank Raziel's light that you're here. I hate dealing with this neutral crowd and that discomfortable being that's caused this." Crow nodded respectfully towards Kaezira, and pointed towards the Fleshspinner. Kaezira now standing to his side, arms crossed. "By Alithe's wastes what do you think you were doing Fleshspinner? You should be dead!" The crowd around them were once more frightened by the Nephilim warrior's raised voice and shimmering eyes. He was aggravated, even a neutral understood this. "Tell me, Corvus. Do you have your Braidh? I've left mine in my quarters. I didn't think I'd be needing such a thing in Wellborough. We might as well put the horrible thing out of its misery while we can, agreed?"
@Soragoku

I don't know if your snooty ice-mage is still sticking around and watching or not, but I want him and Shertul to have a conversation later. If he's over at the bar, or something like that, I'll have Shertul come find him.


my plan was to continue on and go to the bar but i made him stick around for that reason exactly
THANKS, KAEZIRA


yea dude what an asshole...........


His head now buried in his forearms, relaxed on his desk. The entirety of each day for Kaezira is spent reading, studying, learning, teaching, demonstrating, answering the most outlandish questions his apprentices have for him. Its hard being most knowledgeable. So many people want so many things from you, as if you're able to funnel information out to anyone, constantly. A nice, cold drink is much reward for the brain straining work of arch-mage of the Nephilim. The Silver Swan, oh, how lovely it is. The sweet music, the rich drinks. That's where he needs to be.
The travels to Wellborough are short for Kaezira. He rides his horse subconsciously, while his mind is lost in thought of magic and his studies. But relaxation is what's on his mind right now. Approaching the arcane walls of Wellborough, a commotion can be seen near the entrance. High pitched screeching wasn't the relaxing music Kaezira had in mind. His cold breath could be felt by the crowd as he drew near. They began whispering amongst themselves, one angry woman openly descriminating against him. "If it isn't the arch-mage of the Neph'lim. 'ere to save our day again are you?" Kaezira simply ignored her, and carried on. Many people were not fond the Nephilim, and he often received redundant hate in public. He saw a young girl holding an unnatural creature in her arms in the middle of the crowd, it seems to be dying. Ah, a Fleshspinner, fantastic. Of all the types of magic Kaezira desired to learn, fleshspinning was most definitely not one of them. Altering your body in such a horrid way was not appealing, how could anyone desire such an ugly transformation for themselves.
"Don't worry yourself over its poor existence, young one. If it dies, it dies. If it lives, it will be taken care of later. I have not much care for those monstrosities who call themselves mages."
happy birthday Gellert @Lawful Newtral
@Jeyma Sophia will be my main (I have a plotline concerning her in mind), and my Rev elf will be my secondary.

@Soragoku Man, he was super cool being a Wraith.


i mean it didn't really have much prominence to the character. like i used the idea but in a really ineffective way that it didn't really change much about him
ok i edited kaezira ever so slightly cus hes not a fucking ghost hes just a nephilim idk why i used that it was pretty pointless

my post is alright i guess. its much better than the last rendition, but i'm still not very happy with it. then again i'm never happy with my writing. its also not very large. quality over quantity, though.

EDIT: wait fuck i didnt read faq. oh well he spend his most time in the institute, ill get him to neutral territory like next post i guess, my b
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