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Supernatural High School

Michael gazes into Bluebells eyes

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Michael laid there..
In uttermost pain, as blurred vision took upon him the wild shapes and shadows took onto him. He couldn't tell. His vision began to clear, as the first thing he had recognised were those sad ocean blue eyes looking over him.

Michael felt the immense pain of heartache as well as the physical side. Though, He couldn't contain himself, still looking into her eyes, then at her lips for a few seconds then back into her eyes again.

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Michael let out an agonising whirr of pain and violently coughed. He opens his eyes slowly, and tried to make a gentle movement but he just couldn't budge.

Supernatural High School

Michael lays there, almost lifeless, unconscious..but still breathing silently, slowly.

Supernatural High School

I am not too good with detail

@carla6677

Try.

Supernatural High School

Bluebell heard it and duh weapons in the gym

@carla6677

Explain in detail.

Supernatural High School

No offense but when you said:
<Snipped quote by carla6677>
it kind of pissed me off.
One: How did you/Bluebell know that the rubble fell right away? Did you at least hear it and try seeing what happened, then rushed out to get a pickaxe to move the rubble? You're not being very specific (Well, to me anyway).
Two: Where did the pickaxe even come from?!
Three: What is that random "no" for?

@RainbowFactory

Carla doesn't want any characters to be killed off. The vision/flash that Michael has doesn't mention him trying to save Elizabeth, he only sees the steeple fall onto her. So the future slightly changed when Michael jumped in to try and save her, when the rubble fell it doesn't imply that either of the characters are dead.

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There's a major plot hole in what you typed up, Carla.

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"STOP, don't go out there!" Cried Michael. He chases Elizabeth out into the courtyard. The cobblestone steeple began to tumble, he pushes Elizabeth out the way. But the steeple fell and still managed to land on them both...

To be continued..

Supernatural High School

"She doesn't even like me, she totally flat out ignored me when I spoke to her" Said Michael, looking at Elizabeth with a sorrowful look with his blue eyes welling up into tears. His eyes spoke to her the truth, an unforgettable truthful gaze. "Neither of you all know anything about me, you don't even know me..Neither does she. She doesn't care."