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In Lumos 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Stella Nieves’s eyes flew open as she sat bolt upright. A cold sweat clung to her brow, and her breathing came too rapidly. It took a moment for her dark eyes to adjust to the bright light streaming through the window, and once recognition came, her heart rate began to steady though it took much longer for her body to stop trembling. “I’m in my room.” She breathed, confused. Where had she thought she’d been before? Try as she might, she could not conjure any memory of what she realized must have been a dream. Only the feeling of danger and terror still clung to her.

Oberon, her kneazle-cat, bumped his forehead against her hand, prompting Stella to wrap her arms around him. His soft fur and warm body were a great comfort to her, and it wasn’t long before her shivering stopped. He had been so patient with her these last few weeks as she awakened more and more in these cold sweats. She must have reeked of fear, but he never showed any distaste, only empathy and love. “You’re the best companion a witch could ever ask for.” She mumbled into his snowy fur. He responded with a resonating purr that vibrated through them both.

Stella sighed and pulled away to press the button on her alarm clock. She always seemed to wake before it went off whether she was in the midst of a nightmare or dreamless sleep. It didn’t matter if she stayed up all night or went to bed early, either. It was just who she was. Her internal clock was perfectly synchronized to the hour. It could be both a blessing and a curse.

Getting out of bed, she did her daily routine of a short yoga session, showering, and getting dressed. Today’s attire would be about comfort because she’d be spending most of the day on the Hogwarts Express. A tank top, cardigan, jeans, and flats could accomplish a nice mix of comfort and style well enough. She could change into her school robes on the train when it got closer to Hogwarts.

Oberon, who had refused to leave her side the entire morning, escorted his human into the kitchen where Stella’s father was setting down plates of eggs and toast. “I think I set a new record!” The man said excitedly, his accent still distinctly American even after living in England for over a decade. “I only burned one egg. The rest turned out perfectly, and all of the toast is the perfect shade of golden brown.”

“Wow.” She replied, nodding her head appreciatively. “I’m impressed.”

“Me, too.” He laughed.

Stella used a fork to scoop a hard-cooked egg onto the toast. It wasn’t bad to eat, but it was a little bland. “This is perfectly cooked, Dad. The next step is learning to cook eggs with seasoning!” She teased.

“Hey, it’s edible for once. Baby steps.” He replied.

They both ate their food while standing. Stella was too excited to sit, and her father wasn’t about to relax so much he’d cause his daughter to miss her train to school. When they finished, he spoke. “I think it’s time to go. I packed you some food for the train. There’s enough to share with your friends, too, if they’re feeling hungry. It’s in here.” He handed her a backpack.

You made me food? Did you suddenly learn to cook more than eggs and toast when I visited my friends last?” She teased.

“Ms. Renally next door, with the dwarf rabbits, made me some dinners for while you’re gone, and I divided up the leftovers I won’t be able to eat for you to take.” Her father admitted.

“Oh.” Stella replied, surprised. “Are you two…”

Tadlo lifted his palm. “I’m going to stop you right there, Estela. Ms. Renally is a very nice woman who has been very good to us since she moved into that house last year. However, I can assure you that Renally has no interest in me beyond friendship. I think she just wants friends, and she may be trying to get us to buy a rabbit.”

Stella laughed. “Why don’t you just tell her about Oberon? I don’t imagine kneazles and tiny bunnies make a great combination.”

He shrugged. “I might eventually, but I want some more cooking tips first. You don’t think I magically figured out eggs on my own, do you?”

Stella shook her head, sighing dramatically. “I think we better get to the Platform before I learn any more about how you manipulate our neighbors.” She entered the fireplace, and Oberon leapt into her arms. She transferred him to one arm, scooping up floo powder with her free hand. “King’s Cross Station!” Stella spoke clearly as she dashed the powder on the stones at her feet. In an instant, her surroundings changed, and she stepped from a new fireplace onto Platform Nine and Three Quarters. A moment later, her father followed behind her with the trunk of her belongings.

Oberon hopped down and waited at her feet while Tadlo hugged his daughter tightly. “Be good at school. Study hard. Have fun, and if you need anything at all, you contact me. I’m here for you no matter what you need, no matter what the hour.”

Stella smiled, a little sad to be leaving her father again after what felt like such a short time with him. She was glad he was getting on with the neighbors while she was away at school. He’d seemed so lonely these last few years. “I know, Dad. I will. I love you.” She kissed his cheek.

“I love you, too. Be safe!” He called as she boarded the train with Oberon.

“I will!” Stella replied over her shoulder with a wave. Now was the time to find the compartment that housed her friends, provided they’d already arrived. Thankfully, it didn’t take long before she saw a very familiar boy smack his head into the top of the doorframe. She cringed empathetically, resisting the urge to simultaneously chuckle and rub her own forehead. How did Zef manage to do that every time? She supposed it didn’t matter as much now that they were in their final year. She suspected he might do it once more when boarding for the train right home, but after that he would be free. Door frames elsewhere seemed tall enough to accommodate him, usually.

The witch hesitated just long enough in the corridor to make sure it didn’t seem like she’d witnessed Zef’s blunder, then she slid open the door and stepped in with Oberon on her heels. “Hey! Long time no see!” She placed her bag in the overhead compartment and sat between Zef and the window. “How was the rest of your summer, guys?”
In Lumos 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
That would be fantastic! I would love to be able to start posting even if it's just introductions at this point.

Post collaboration is fine in my opinion. I just want to ask that if/when we do, we have a clear break or some kind of marker between character point-of-view changes. I've read some post collabs that didn't in the past, and it can be really confusing to read.

I've never heard of pirate pad. What's different about it compared to Google Docs?
I think that's more than reasonable for a slow moving rp. You don't want the time frame to be too long or people just lose interest.
I look forward to seeing everyone's introduction posts!
While I think you make some very good points, I don't necessarily agree with them. With Amon, he was still just a child when he left home. By the time we see him in Republic City, he's in his forties. That's at least thirty years between the time he suffered abuse at his father's hands and the time he sets his plans into motion. I don't know about you, but I've never met anyone who internalized their abuse so much that they made sure their entire adult lives revolved around it. I can understand there still being bitterness, but after thirty years, it feels less like a legitimate purpose and more like he's just being a drama-queen. That is why the "big reveal" was so disappointing for me though I really liked how his end came. It was darker than anything A:TLA had done up to that point, and it was actually really beautiful from a writing standpoint.

The thing about Unalaq is that I could have respected his powers of manipulation if they hadn't been so transparent from the viewing perspective. Both the writing and the scenery set-up was so blatantly obvious that I wasn't surprised by anything they revealed about him. He was also very one-dimensional. Amon and the Red Lotus (except for Ming Hua) had facets to them that gave them character depth. I didn't get anything like that from Unalaq or Vaatu. They just were what they were, and they didn't have any room for growth as characters which is always a bit disappointing to me.

I think with the Red Lotus, you have this idea that they could only be one way. Their goal was to bring down centralized government and allow a stronger system to emerge from the chaos. Zaheer had spiritual inclinations, but that doesn't mean that everyone else had to have them. It was clear to me that the other four just cared about the goal and not necessarily Zaheer's reasoning. In order to really value and want to achieve the goal, there's no reason why any of them had to have spiritual inclinations. There isn't only one way to start rebellions or one reason to want to do so.

Everyone can have their own reasons and purposes, and I thought that actually added a lot of depth to the group as a whole even if we never fully learn why Ghazan and Ming Hua are so loyal to the goal. P'li wanted to bring down governments because rulers essentially used her as a weapon of destruction, and she would have followed Zaheer anywhere because of their love for one another. Zaheer wanted to do it because of his spiritual beliefs. It's obvious to me that Ghazan at least believed in the end-game, and Ming Hua was probably just a psychopath who liked hurting people though that might just be a result of her mind cracking due to the terrible prison environment she was forced to be in for over a decade. To me, hers was the worst of all of them even if all of them were their own, unique forms of inhumane torture.
For me, personally, I like my villains to have depth. Vaatu and Unalaq both had one-track minds with one, too-simple desire. Amon was amazing because while he had a simple goal, the topic was very complex. As a result, his methods ended up being morally wrong while the results could have been very right. It was a moral grey area that I found fascinating. It was ruined for me by the pettiness of the explanation for why he felt as he did. His dad abused him through forcing his brother and him to be perfect benders, so his solution was to get rid of bending. It was... boring, and as a result it was a huge letdown.



Once I moved in with my grandma, I got some huge doses of spiritual teachings and learned a lot about other cultures. One of the things that really drew me to A;TLA was the distinctly spiritual nature of it all. I think that's part of why I actually really enjoyed Zaheer and the Red Lotus.

Rtron, when it comes to Book 2, you really didn't miss much as far as the characters themselves go. They all kind of became caricatures of themselves which is why I feel like season two kind of sucked, but Book 3 really fixed all of that. The characters got a much-needed dose of development that they weren't able to really get in season 2, and after the first half where it was kind of just... fluffy and a little boring, the second half got dark and interesting and kind of awesome. For me, the last half of season three was so good that I consider it my favorite season even if the first half was just okay.
In Lumos 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Stella's sheet has been updated to include how she met each individual. I think I, personally, am ready to start.

Adelie Hurst
Met: 3rd Year; Intercepted a hex meant for Adelie
Feelings: Admires Adelie's loyalty and protectiveness. Disappointed that Adelie doesn't believe her seer instincts are real.


Calvin Magnussen
Met: 3rd Year; Care of Magical Creatures class though friendship started through Adelie
Feelings: Respects Calvin's intellect and academic abilities. Empathizes with his drive to follow his instincts though that's something she hopes they can work on together.


Rin Zephyr
Met: 3rd Year; Divination class though friendship started through Adelie
Feelings: Respects Rin's ability to be unphased by stressful situations. Admires Rin's ability to be herself despite others' negative opinions. Concerned by her bluntness.


Zef Raco
Met: 5th Year; Through Adelie
Feelings: Shares his value of honesty and integrity. Admires his loyalty. Concerned with his lack of empathy when delivering hard truths.
If Amon's "big reveal" hadn't been such a disappointment, I could agree with you. Instead, I'm going with the Red Lotus being the best.

I'm just waiting on everyone to get caught up so I can introduce Lien and the Swamp.
In Lumos 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
A combination of the two could be nice. The books themselves are a little of both, showing the students going through the motions but with the overarching plot that builds through the series. Maybe the various events they go through could lead to a bigger picture overall.

I think that because this RP is titled "Lumos," it could be fun to play the themes of casting light into darkness and/or bringing secrets to light.
In Lumos 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
I've edited Stella's sheet to include her meeting Adelie as well as to fix a typo I noticed where I accidentally called her familiar Orion in the biography when his name is Oberon. Just need to figure out how she met the others before I can include that as well.

Nevermind, do you have a plot idea in mind, or are we still brainstorming options?
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