So before I forget I am going to post a large thing on this-and-that answering all your questions and concerns and what's going on. I was originally going to do this after I finished my profiles since that would be a decent outline to work on, but considering that I may procrastinate even more, I thought, "Hey, I might as well just do it right now." I'll also throw in a disclaimer -- I'm either kind and lenient or straightforward and to my word. I'm sorry if any of this comes off as mean -- I share no intention of doing so! However, I must not let this version of the role-play become unbalanced and chaotic as the original. On top of that, I like to consider my co-GM's words, so moving on...
✥ Kaalee: It's okay, it's okay -- I personally don't find longer biographies necessary, but if it helps keep consistency, then throw in whatever you may. Now, you did put yourself in a tricky position because you did want to be part of the Kingdom of Michael as a 23 year old princess. Even if she didn't want to take the throne, she would naturally be bumped up, unless if she ran away... but her chance of return? Well, if she returned, she may not be very welcomed, or at least not warmly. You are put in a difficult spot too because if your character was younger than the twins, this wouldn't be much of an error. I can try to see if Wisp wants to bump our character ages up, but I don't want the whole "depending-on-another" going down. Yet, at the same time, you kind of do depend on the twins because they are the siblings to your character technically (unless you toss up something like she was adopted by the king and queen). I'm sure to revise my profile and edit the mention of the elder sister when we figure out how Kyalia will fit.
We can try to make her a temporary queen, and perhaps by her word she stepped down? I'm not too sure if that is possible, but another thing I would personally consider is how often she did these violent acts. I feel like enough acts would make her unsupported by the people or perhaps null her from being heir by her parents. Sure, I mean, there was that one time, but think about it being like... multiple times -- and how much trust there is between those lines! You can also lower her age to make her younger than 19 to keep her from ever being considered queen in the first place.
And then there's the minor detail of the surname being Zaphiris, thus she'll be Kyalia Zaphiris since she's part of the royal family that is currently ruling Michael.
✥ Deathmaker: I see you have traded sides -- I mean, welcome back. X'D
Awesome profile, but there's only a few pet peeves that I'm gonna throw out -- but don't worry, you're not going to have to flip a table and recreate a character (( In fact, I really hope no one has to do that. I don't want to drive anyone through that insanity ))...
1) The quote comes from someone who is talking about the character, not the character actually speaking. It's kind of weird, isn't it? However, to see how people would think about them from the outside is interesting.
2) Be prepared to change "For years" to a smaller amount of time -- I know, it sounds less hardcore, but depending how long time has passed since the declaration of war... I would assume a few months or a year? Nothing too dramatic, but things are getting started. Unless if Ash is chill being in prison for some time, but I surely wouldn't.
✥ NarayanK: I'm going to first praise you for your creativity and dancing around the system -- yea, the latter may sound like I'm disapproving, but just hang in there.
I expected Macbeth to have a friend and run into three witches who told him that he will be king, but alas I was disappointed. Being a demon knight makes up for it though. But let's get to the point I wanted to make -- you got your ability, like usually, and then you got a weapon full of magic, which danced around the system of having only one main ability (( and for demons and angels, you get those subs 'n we have to consider skills 'n all, ya-da-da... ))
An awesome sword that is really powerful is neat, but with the magical enhancement you did bring in another ability to you. I could talk through with my co-GM about having magical weapons because it's not native to the wielder, but rather to the item itself. Also, the sword is really powerful, did I mention that? Yea, I originally wasn't gonna have any kick-butt magic weapons -- just plain old regular items and then the ability would be what you can manipulate, create, or do. The ability isn't exactly like a move -- no, you don't have to punch in up-down-up-down-a-b-a-b or any of that fancy! It doesn't get a name either; ability was meant to be the sort of power they have. I suppose you can title the general ability of summoning the acid (( for example )) and such, but it's up to you whether you want your character to have to say a spell aloud or have spells, like "Acid Splash!" and whoo, corrode an enemy. If you could for now cut out the weapon and save it onto a notepad or so, that would be neat. As for the last two, you did mention Cold Flux and then Unknown Ice Magic -- that's where everything comes down to your ability and what you can use, or you can attempt to combo it by saying one is the main ability while the other one is secondary, which means the latter relates to the first.
I also understand that what you have presented is just a rough draft. A very pretty rough draft.
And I just saw your update. Damn.
✥ TaroAndSelia: I thought about it, but I feel like it's just going to end up as pure angel or pure demon. Perhaps because you can get so many stat bonuses for being half-angel -- I mean. Yea, you either are completely a demon because of product of other demons as an angel may have to posses your body and think, "Hey, this is a nice place to stay." Those are the only ways when it comes to reproducing by the such.
I'm very sorry if I brought anyone down or upset anybody -- I do appreciate all of your ideas, but I just want to keep with what I've written and decided on for the role-play. u_u*
Some things may change as I consider on other things going on, but I will let anyone know if there are such changes going on.