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Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
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At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
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I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
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As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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The moment of utter confusion was briefly derailed when Noctis awakened. In spite of the situation, Anne couldn't deny her sense of relief that the young man who was her friend, regardless of her previous life, looked like he was going to be okay. Still, he hadn't fainted in the game, and nothing had happened to him that could have caused it as far as she could tell. So had something else happened that she didn't know about? Everyone did have lives of their own outside of the game's screentime, after all, so did that have something to do with it?

"Er, are you sure you're okay, Noctis?" she asked, hesitatingly, after a moment, "Suddenly fainting out of no-where isn't really... normal..."

And that wasn't the only thing that wasn't normal.

Anne definitely didn't remember Serrica acting like this, or making any of these offers.

"W-work for? I-eh? Eeeeeeh?"

It was a lot to take in all at once. There definitely wasn't an event like this in the game, no matter what you did! What the hell?

It wasn't enough that she got that close and whispered in her ear, it was everything else too.

"E-er, I d-don't really know what you're talking about, um..." Anne trailed off with weak, nervous bit of laughter, scratching the back of her head.

At this point it was all she could really do.

@MagusDream@Pyromania99@PKMNB0Y
The Iron Roses had to move, and they had to move quickly. The cemetary, thankfully, not as far as it could have been had the conspirators choosen a different spot to lurk within. There were two in Aimlenn, the other was further south and typically housed more common folk or those who achieved their status with business, while knights and other nobles were most often interred in this location.

It made it all the more curious that they were able to make their hideout here of all places.

The elaborate gravestones, some depicting Mayon reaching down towards the grave of the dead, a few similarly constructed, but with Reon instead. Others showed family symbols, or conveyed what the dead interred there had done in life. Some were simple, wishing the deceased a good afterlife, and many were adorned with images of Lamplighters and other divine spirits in service of the Goddesses. There were lanterns, flower offerings on many graves, both to help guide the dead to the afterlife and to offer the favored blooms of the goddesses to help ensure the dead made it there.

And then there were the mausoleums. They stood larger then the other graves, and what was visible was only a small component. They stretched underground as well, holding generations of dead. Fanilly admitted, privately, that she found being in a graveyard at night rather disconcerting, but she couldn't show such a thing.

She was Captain of the Iron Rose Knights. Something like this couldn't make her falter.

The Cazt Family's tomb was rather easily-recognized. Above the door was the eight-point star, a symbol of the Cazt family's pride in their martial, magical, and military heritage. As Fanilly knew, each point symbolized something more specific, but she had never learned what. Veilena had refused to allow her father to be interred there, and had stripped him posthumously of his status as a member of their family.

The tomb looked unguarded, from the outside. But gods knew what was going on down there.

Fanilly turned back to the others.

"Our enemies are undead," she began, "They will be less coordinated, but also unable to feel pain. Strike without mercy, cut them down and free them from their wretched enslavement."

The idea of using necromancy to manipulate the bodies of the dead was an abominable thought to Fanilly. Slavery was an abomination, but to reach beyond death and use the bodies of the deceased, disturbing their rest...

The Necromancer would answer for his crimes, one way or another.

But more importantly then that...

"The hostage, if she's still alive, must be rescued," she continued, "Her sister may have attempted an assassination, but she is a victim of a cruel and strange plot. We are the Iron Rose Knights, and we fight for the sake of the crown and for those in need. It is our duty."

Their strategy was admittedly simple. Provided the information still held water, they would cut through the undead, and kill or capture any of the living conspirators that they could.

Now they came to the unguarded doors of the mausoleum.

Next...

It took some effort, but forcing them open did not prove to be impossible.

Immediately a figure clad it tarnished, thin armor lunged for them. It was thin, desiccated, its skin peeling in some places to show bone beneath, its jaw hanging open and gnashing as it raised a jagged blade-

And fell backwards, head taken off in a single swing of Fanilly's blade, the edge cutting through the night air. Its flesh was dry and decayed, but the armor would still be able to put up some resistance if the other walking corpses still possessed any.

Indeed, beyond the doorway, a dozen or so shambling, animated bodies turned to face the knights already. Their empty sockets were alight with an eerie purple glow as they raised swords, spears, axes, and shields.

"Iron Rose Knights! If you can't cut off the head, aim for the arms and legs to disable!" declared Fanilly, "Then cut them all down!"

There was no opportunity to be subtle here.

@Creative Chaos@Rune_Alchemist@Saiyan@Crimson Paladin@Psychic Loser@VahkiDane@HereComesTheSnow




As three of the Throne Knights, including Sir Adeforth himself accompanied the Princess and the Roses who had chosen to stay behind to defend her headed into the back halls and up the stairways, it was as if they were taking a stroll into history. Portraits of notable figures, and of course the royal family, lined the walls.

One in particular stood at the end of the hall. It was by far one of the largest paintings, depicting a rather striking sight. The first was a scene that every adherent of the goddesses would know. The towering, black knight, a crown of spines rising from his helmet and clutching an enormous sword . A single, ethereal-seeming young woman in armor, clutching a silvery blade. Both of them on a rock jutting high above a plain. The battle raging below.

The Duel between Saint Lilianna and Orodrunn was the end of the war between all peoples of creation and the forces of the second dark lord. She had in the end miraculously shattered the black blade, Angroron, and pierced his armor to slay him. It was a scene familiar to all those who worshipped the Goddesses.

There was a single blank spot on the wall among the portraits of members of the royal family.

Prince Meren, still clad in his gleaming, royal-seeming armor, had butchered his mother, father, and his brothers by surprise in the night, all save his younger sister, whom he had become obsessed with. Elionne challenged him to battle, In a bout of furious combat after which Meren believed 'he would make his sister his own', Elionne slew the mad Prince by piercing his heart, and the Royal line survived through his younger sister.

The reviled madman's portrait had been removed from the walls and burned long ago.

Elisandre turned to the left, and soon enough they reached her room. Within, it was rather lavish, with a four-poster bed laden with pillows and blankets, a large bookcase full of various volumes, a desk, a body-length mirror, a nightstand, and even access to a balcony. The glass and steel doors leading to the balcony were shut.

Sir Adeforth leaned against a wall, as the other two Crown Knights took positions outside of the Princess's bedroom. He did not need to speak of their failures any longer.

Elisandre, desperate for some form of normal conversation, headed to the bookcase and took a red-bound novel from a shelf.

"S-so, have any of you read Fireheart?"

It was a hundi-written novel, about a young hundi on her coming of age journey. It had become quite popular in recent years.

Maletha, meanwhile, had found her way to the bed and sat down, her arms wrapped around a large plush dragon as she remained staring at the floor.

@Psyker Landshark@Raineh Daze@The Otter
@UnWorthy28: Going to be frank and say this simply doesn't work at all. The name is Ancient Greek, which I guess isn't impossible for someone to use but is questionable to say the least, his appearance and personality are completely inadequate. "Convincing people why he shouldn't be sacrificed" isn't a skill and I'm confused why it's even there.

His Echo is described by an excerpt from a poem and its abilities are also not really described. Sure it can fly and has fire, but what can it do with its fire? How powerful are its flames? Does it fire them out? Does it just have a fire aura?

The backstory is not long enough to explain anything and is confusing to say the least. He was in a cult? "Deity of the Earth"? How did he get to Japan? How did he even enroll in a school if he didn't exist legally?

This just doesn't work.
Tch.

Uncouth, unpleasant beasts. She had assumed as much from the manner in which the townsfolk spoke, but to actually see them right before her eyes was another experience entirely.

Aleksiya could even detect a rather unpleasant odor.

It was best to be rid of the abominable things as quickly as possible, particularly the one that was directly endangering one of her peers. The former paladin wore armor, but the Lady Emeraltide could have suffered a much more unpleasant(though hardly existence-threatening) experience.

The crystalline spear of ice twisted in the air, spinning rapidly as red light surrounded it, Aleksiya suffusing it with power as the beast tried to throw itself down on Lady Emeraltide.

"Unsightly."

With that, the spear was sent hurtling through the air, tearing directly for the creature's head. Without pause, she formed another spear from the air, the glistening ice gleaming before it was sent to join its fellow.

@Psyker Landshark@Asuras@Rune_Alchemist
It was a throbbing, unpleasant sound.

The thudding rhythm not unlike that of a heartbeat. It wasn't exactly heard so much as it was felt, reverberating through each of their bodies.

But it wasn't their own. It seemed to come from the very air around the, the ground beneath their feet.

As the sun began to sink lower, drifting further towards the horizon, and the shadows grew longer, something felt strange to them. Unnatural.

It felt as if they were steadily going out of synch with the world around them.

And then they could see it. The entire world froze.

Every single person around them stopped moving.

The breeze died.

Every sound ceased.

They could still move, but they were seemingly alone in their ability to do so.

And then every single person was gone.

The scenery remained, but it was empty. The sun was gone, as well, an enormous moon seeming to dominate the sky, which was otherwise without a single star.

If they were to look down, they would discover the ground beneath them was red. Further observation would lead to a far more unpleasant discovery.

There was blood, everywhere. The concrete beneath their feet was coated in it. Walls, buildings, splatters of what could only be blood adorned most surfaces. It stood out even more against the pitch black of the buildings, who had lost all their identifying features. Even the shadows seemed strange, almost purple on coloration.

The heartbeat sound had only grown louder.

And then it would be hard not to look. Somehow, some way, their eyes would be drawn to it.

A great, looming spire, a jagged shape jutting above all other structures in the city, like a spear thrust towards the moon.

There was a shuffling, wet sound behind them, and-

They were back.

As if nothing had happened, the world was suddenly back to normal. People were still around. There was light and life aside from themselves again.

Even the tower was gone.

@AThousandCurses@Bartimaeus@hatakekuro@Pitsuji@Psyker Landshark@DarckLeon
"A-ah, er, he fainted, suddenly..."

Of course. Of course this was a situation where one of the game's love interests walked right in immediately after the other walked out. Why wouldn't her?

Through her frustration, Anne couldn't help but note to herself that there really wasn't any reason why he wouldn't. This was, after all, where he volunteered. It stood to reason that he'd walk in at some point. But regardless of that, it was still extremely inconvenient for her! This placed her in far too dangerous of a situation, accidentally triggering a flag of some kind would be way too easy! She already had the Crown Prince wanting to talk to her again, which was a difficult request to turn down in a society like this. The last thing she needed was to immediately trigger another flag...

Which is why she almost audibly sighed in relief when a clear route of escape came. Now that there were people to care for her friend, she didn't have to stick around. And this was Serrica, wasn't she? It was hard not to recognize her given she was usually the heroine's friend in most routes.

"S-since you're here with the nurse, I feel comfortable leaving hi-eh? Cute? Eh?"

Wait, what?

@PKMNB0Y@Pyromania99
It didn't make very much sense at all. Why would the note be on the Nem girl in the first place during the assassination? But at the same time, her behavior alone lended credence to the idea she was telling the truth. Certainly, Fanilly wanted to believe it. And if it were true, that meant that they likely didn't have very much time to ensure that they would be able to save the girl's sister.

The expression on the would-be assassin, Tyli's, face was one of resignation. A morose and downcast gaze, as if she hardly expected this to work in the first place. Indeed, she was asking knights who served the crown to help her sister, after she had attempted the assassination of a Princess.

However.

The Iron Rose Knights were knights of justice.

And even in this situation, wickedness could not be allowed to persist as long as they had the ability to do something about it.

The Knight-Captain took a deep breath.

"If we're going to save her, and put an end to this conspiracy, you must tell us everything you know," said Fanilly.

The nem's eyes widened for only a moment, before she immediately set about writing. Her script was somewhat more shaky now, but still legible.

The graveyard. Large tomb with a star heraldry

Fanilly paused for a moment. Was that...?

"They're in the Cazt Mausoleum?" she asked aloud.

Almost immediately a small figure pushed her way to the front of the crowds. When the huge black knight noticed her, they swiftly joined her side.

"What?"

It was Veilena Cazt. She'd lingered past the other nobles, and heard much of the conversation as a result.

"If there's a crowd of traitorous bastards in my family's tomb, I refuse to simply stand by and allow them to defile it with their mere presence," she angrily asserted.

But Tyli wasn't done writing.

Necromancer leads them with many undead. Two warriors, one is very large. A mage woman. There's another man, but I haven't seen his weapons. Fyna is at the bottom

Fanilly didn't need to say any of it out loud this time, as Veilena had already read the message.

"Necromancer!? That's... Knight-Captain, I demand to accompany you to snuff out these criminals. I may not be able to fight, but Haelstadt shall gladly cut them down in the name of my ancestors' rest."

Fanilly hesitated a moment. Of course, she could understand the Cazt girl's anger. More then that, she had to wonder how a conspiracy like this had even gotten there in the first place. But at the same time, endangering her life for such a purpose...

"... Sir Fionn, speak to Sir Adeforth, obtain whatever arms we made need," Fanilly began. Her sword had been brought along with her, but the same could not be said for the others, "We will slay these monsters where they hide."

She hesitated again before addressing the fuming Cazt heir.

"... I'm sorry, Lady Cazt, but for the sake of your safety I believe it's best you remain here, with your bodyguard at your side."

She braced herself for an angry response as Veilena opened her mouth.

"That's-..."

To her surprise, the smaller girl trailed off after a few moments, glancing at Haelstadt before clearing her throat.

"Fine."

The frustration in her voice was evident, but surprisingly it seemed that she accepted.

"If you happen to find a single one of my ancestors among the Necromancer's rabble, then do your best to capture that death witch alive," she continued, "For I should like for them to live to answer for their crimes and suffer the punishment, rather then be released by death."

It wasn't a request Fanilly was sure she could fulfill.

But they had to stop this conspiracy to kill the First Princess. And they had to rescue the nem girl's sister. So many details were strange, so many things didn't add up. And yet Vosahn's behavior seemed genuine.

So they had to try.

"Once you are equipped, I want to leave a few volunteers behind to help ensure the Princesses' safety."

@Creative Chaos@Raineh Daze@Rune_Alchemist@Saiyan@The Otter@Crimson Paladin@Psychic Loser@Richard Horthy@VahkiDane@Psyker Landshark@HereComesTheSnow
Among the Nem's possessions were a variety of somewhat expected items. A few easily-hidden knives, a dagger that was more like a sword for such a diminutive individual, a set of short-range crossbow bolts for the now-destroyed weapon, and a package of tools likely used for the purpose of disarming traps and opening locks.

But the strangest items among them were the Veltan Adventurer's Guild Badge and the sheet of paper. Fanilly was aware of adventurer's guilds, of course. While Thaln's was rather small, she understood how they could be used to handle issues not necessarily within the realm of the soldiery's duty, or that of knightly orders. Some adventurers would even collaborate with their nation's military. And indeed, sometimes these adventurers would cross the border of a country in order to fulfill a job they had taken.

But just as Dame Tyaethe said, assassinations were hardly among their typical duties. Perhaps it was a forgery, or even taken from a real adventurer? But then coupled with the sheet of paper...

It would have seemed a little to convenient, even to Fanilly, save for the way that the nem girl's eyes widened in shock when she saw it. After only a brief moment she was squirming, trying to use her head to gesture to the paper. For how still and cooperative she had been only moments before, she was suddenly far more active. And yet, still not attempting to slip free.

"... Sir Gerard, fetch charcoal and a piece of paper," Fanilly said, after considering her options for a few moments. It was still possible this was a ruse, but maybe the nem's handwriting would help them discern the truth.

When allowed to take the paper and charcoal, the nem swiftly set about writing. She was swift, making it rather likely that she had communicated in this fashion plenty of times before, and on examination her handwriting didn't resemble the note's bold, harsh strokes. The script written by the nem girl was thin and hasty, but clear, in spite of how much her hands seemed to be shaking, her entire body trembling.

Iron Roses

Tyli Vosahn

What happens to me doesn't matter

Please save my sister

@Creative Chaos@Raineh Daze@Rune_Alchemist@Saiyan@The Otter@Crimson Paladin@Psychic Loser@Richard Horthy@VahkiDane@Psyker Landshark@HereComesTheSnow
She was there every night.

Every night, on those same streets.

It was the only choice she had.

They swarmed after her, sensing her very existence and converging on it, practically tasting her presence on the air. It would be far worse for anyone else caught here.

She killed them.

Again and again and again. The roar of gunfire, her limbs piercing inky blackness to be greeted with spurts of red blood. It splattered all over her, pouring down her body, pooling around her feet. Sometimes, she would end the night utterly coated in it, leaving crimson prints in her wake.

And yet it was a failure. Every night was a failure. Simply killing them wasn't what it took.

She had to make it inside. She had to.

It was the reason she existed. The point to her entire being. Without it, there was simply no reason for her to be.

Even if her body broke down, crumbled into nothing. Even if she could barely function. She had to keep trying. She had to break through. She had to.

She was coated in blood again.

The morning light had come.

She'd failed.

Tonight, she'd try again.




The bell rang. The day was heading towards its end.

The halls were filled with students. Many of them were nervous. The main topic of conversation was Strange Gospel. It wasn't hard to see why. The news of the disturbing imagery that the rumored Strange Gospel had displayed was impossible to escape from, and now that people who had used the app had begun to disappear... well, needless to say, there were a lot of people who were scared. Was there a connection? Had someone been using the app, or website, or whatever it was to track its users and do something terrible? Was the Strange Gospel somehow behind it?! Was there something occult afoot? These possibilities swirled through conversation endlessly. Students were clinging to various theories. Some even thought it might be some kind of 'end of the world' scenario.

A lot of the idle chat seemed to have been absorbed by Strange Gospel.

Of course, that wasn't the only topic on everyone's mind as students steadily began to filter out of the school after classes and club meetings had concluded. Relationships, television shows, music, various other rumors... one particularly strange one pertained to a weird figure that had been sighted in town. Apparently, they tended to vanish and reappear at random, never seeming to interact with anyone and only visible just before the sun vanished for the night.

As the flow of students headed away from the school, some of them, those who had seen the darkness within Strange Gospel, may just find themselves running into one another...

One way or another, something would change their world tonight.

@AThousandCurses@Bartimaeus@hatakekuro@Pitsuji@Psyker Landshark@DarckLeon
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