@urukhai They're fantastic! You just need final world from Draco before you post your characters in the character thread!
Is Olifina primarily a servant, or primarily a warrior? I need to know where to list her.
@SleepingSilence Because we don't have our lore post up, it wasn't mentioned, but Lucifer is an NPC. He can't be king of the kingdom of Lucifer for that reason. I'm sorry! I'm definitely going to have to refuse him. If you still want to be the king of Lucifer, he needs to be his own person.
As for Gilgamesh, I'm confused - has he been a demon the whole time? Demons don't develop from humans, which is what it sounds like he was. The kingdom of Lucifer is a secret, so he couldn't have just ended up there. Also, if he's fighting, he's either a warrior or a knight. I'm intrigued by his story, but it just doesn't seem to fit together. I'm going to have to refuse him as well, though you're welcome to revise him.
@Cubix I'm a bit confused by Rancor's story - if he was recruited by an officer to be knighted or become a warrior, why was he kept around when he couldn't complete the task? It doesn't make sense that he would be delegated to be a chef for the monarchs when he was previously living in the slums of the kingdom. I don't think it's realistic that he and his family would have been allowed to stay.
Aside from that, I'm not seeing any problems with his profile, though Draco will be looking him over as well.
@AimeChambers Serenity sounds adorable! Draco will need to look her over as well, but I like her! (Auberon may be very focused on his twin, but he's definitely going to be a doting older brother!)
Is Olifina primarily a servant, or primarily a warrior? I need to know where to list her.
@SleepingSilence Because we don't have our lore post up, it wasn't mentioned, but Lucifer is an NPC. He can't be king of the kingdom of Lucifer for that reason. I'm sorry! I'm definitely going to have to refuse him. If you still want to be the king of Lucifer, he needs to be his own person.
As for Gilgamesh, I'm confused - has he been a demon the whole time? Demons don't develop from humans, which is what it sounds like he was. The kingdom of Lucifer is a secret, so he couldn't have just ended up there. Also, if he's fighting, he's either a warrior or a knight. I'm intrigued by his story, but it just doesn't seem to fit together. I'm going to have to refuse him as well, though you're welcome to revise him.
@Cubix I'm a bit confused by Rancor's story - if he was recruited by an officer to be knighted or become a warrior, why was he kept around when he couldn't complete the task? It doesn't make sense that he would be delegated to be a chef for the monarchs when he was previously living in the slums of the kingdom. I don't think it's realistic that he and his family would have been allowed to stay.
Aside from that, I'm not seeing any problems with his profile, though Draco will be looking him over as well.
@AimeChambers Serenity sounds adorable! Draco will need to look her over as well, but I like her! (Auberon may be very focused on his twin, but he's definitely going to be a doting older brother!)