yoshua171

【Bleach: Souls Adrift】

Alrighty. Accepted, put 'em in the character tab ^_^

【Bleach: Souls Adrift】

【Name:Hogo-sha】

@Oblivion666

Here we go!

First, can you remove the part that says "name" from the top of the CS. Keep the "Hogo-sha," though.

【Additional Appearance Info: Having evolved to this stage Hogo-sha is oddly unique looking. He seems to have almost a liquid like form, and can move way more differently than most Hollows, moving his body almost like a snake can. On all four he stands at about ten feet tall, and on his hind legs that shoots up two feet. He is also not very wide at all. Being smaller than a bus but larger than a truck. The mask doesn’t seem very large but in truth a majority of it is covered up by what appears to be almost hair. It also seems to have a strip appearance as well, the true mystery is where his hollow hole is. Most have never found it due to his entire form being black, but if one were to have enough time, or were lucky enough. They would know his hole is actually in the middle of all the goo like hair. It should also be of note that his tail is the only natural hard surface on him besides his teeth, it is also naturally sharp as well and can cut through solid stone with little effort.

So, as a note, his being at 10 feet tall whilst on all fours is...kind of odd for an Adjucha, especially a Greater Adjucha, which would probably be considerably smaller/more compact. Consider that he'd be 10 feet tall at the back. Which would make him 4 feet taller than a 6 foot man. Take your own height, and then consider how much further up Hogo-sha's back would be from your head.

Additionally, if he stood up on two legs, his being only 2 feet taller than his norm, would make no sense as his height would essentially be the length of his body from hip bone to head, whilst also including the length of the legs he's standing on. Consider that a 10 foot tall creature is gonna have some ludicrously long legs as well and you get a really bizarre, not terribly proportionate, picture.

I'd say make him about 6 feet tall at the back. His height, I imagine, would be considerably taller if he reared up on only his back two legs, but given how his body's put together, I imagine that he can't stand on two legs and keep his balance (due to not enough strength and stability in and around his rearmost legs. So yeah.

As to his hollow hole. It's typically portrayed as just a black circle, but is quite literally a hole that goes straight through some part of a hollow's body. So it would be visible. It might just be small and/or in a place that people don't generally look. So yeah, moving on.

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Huh, so yeah, looked everything else over. Your stats check out. The ability is fine, so I guess the appearance and the logistics of that are the only problem I have...which is a weird feeling, but yeah ^^;

So work on/fix that and then I can accept it :)

【Bleach: Souls Adrift】

Alrighty @Xan the G. So the only problem I saw was the following:

The only reason he defected from soul society was because his Captain had done so, but for a man like Xero, that was reason enough.

So, none of the current characters "defected" from soul society. They were defeated and kicked out by other shinigami, calling themselves the Junsei. They did not explain their motive/as to why they were doing it and they were not of any known rebel or opposing faction. They are shinigami, just to make sure that's clear.

so yeah, alter that detail and the above post and then I can accept you ^_^

【Bleach: Souls Adrift】

【Yanagi, Taikou】

【Theme I/|\Theme II/|\Theme III】

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With the others following with relative swiftness, the commander made his way to the center of the city, the rain pouring down on him and his group. Eventually he stopped, midair at first before momentarily closing his eyes, so as to locate the reiatsu signatures of the other shinigami. His subordinates...his comrades. Everyone seemed more or less fine, which was good. Of course, he had absolute faith in them, so he hadn't truly been worried. Nonetheless it was best to keep a keen eye on the lay of things.

This in mind he opened his eyes and glanced over the city proper. He could detect a number of hollows here and there...an odd amount. Perhaps something more was going on.

At that thought he narrowed his eyes. He made a rather troubled noise before he shunpo'd downwards and to the roof of an eight story building where he decided to stay for a time, knowing the others would follow swiftly behind. “Now, who would like to gather the hollows? Corral them in our area. Lure them as it were.” He glanced back at Jinzo, Yubina, and Daigo, smiling slightly as he did so.

It almost seemed like he intended this to be a contest among the three as well. To see who could gather and slay the most hollows in addition to their already stated mission directive. Yes, for Taikou was rather unlike the Commanders before him as he preferred to foster a sense of camaraderie with his subordinates, rather than merely create a relationship consisting only of fear, respect, and awe. It was more wholesome and he liked to think that it decreased the chance of any...meaningful squabbles among their ranks.

Still, he hadn't been the Commander long enough to know if his efforts would truly pay off. So, as with all things, only time would tell.

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Unbridled Potential

Intermission
_{Kairi's Adventure}

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Meanwhile, in another castle, Kairi slipped into a gigai, bought some gum, and then slipped out, heading for the coordinates in earnest after she had done so. She came across a well-appointed manor - two stories, with a private shrine in the back and completely walled off. There did not appear to be any security thankfully.

Looking at it with a fair measure of boredom, the lieutenant hopped over the wall so as to more easily access the shrine. The coordinates would have put the urn somewhere in or beneath the shrine. Perhaps it had an underground burial chamber or something. Not that it mattered to her much. Walking in she searched for an entrance to the chamber - largely empty, just a small memorial against the far wall with some incense laid out. It was still smouldering - somebody came here regularly. There was a sliding door recessed in the wall down a set of stone stairs, with a very obvious lock set in it.

Seeing the stairs, she made her way down them, her eyes falling onto the lock. “Man, this is hilarious. I could break this with my pinky finger. In fact…” she reached out, curling her pinky around the curved bolt of the lock and pulled snapping it as she pulled it against the door at an angle, so as not to damage the actual door.

This act proceeded to trigger the alarm anyway. Modern technology was inconsiderate that way. The room beyond, besides being filled with noise, looked to be a small combination office and storage room for the shrine itself - there was a desk and several cabinets against the far wall. Hung next to the door was a traditional painted scroll, depicting a figure representing the Moon crying islands into being in the frothing sea below.

Well that was annoying, she thought, as she pushed the door open and walked into the rather loud room. She took a brief moment to search the place, and for like two seconds, admire the scroll, before proceeding to ransack the desk and cabinets. The urn was nowhere to be found - just a bunch of paperwork, most of which looked to have to do with somebody’s will. The coordinates from the kido were right about in the room though - she should have seen the urn the moment she stepped inside. It had to be in here.

“Well this is annoying,” she muttered before she suddenly got a bright idea. She glanced at the walls until her eyes fell on the scroll. Walking up to it, she moved it aside to see if there was anything underneath. She was rewarded with the sight of a wall safe with an electronic lock. It was a pretty large safe too - nearly half as tall as she was, and just as wide. There was definitely room for an urn or two in there, amongst other things. The tricky bit would be opening it without damaging the urn - her control over her own strength was immaculate, but predicting how pressurized steel would bend and break was a touch more difficult.

“Hmm,” she said, thinking a moment. Eventually she shrugged and drew her zanpakuto. “Let your body be my shackles and my mind be your will, Shūryō-jiku(終了軸 'Terminal Axis'),” she said and in but a moment she had donned a pair of bladed knuckle dusters, between the spikes of which there were orange spheres. Almost lazily she let her knuckle make contact with the door. She waited a few seconds, and then tapped the hinges and the lock. An orb settled into each hinge, merging with the material, the same occurred to the hinges. After a moment of contact with the main body of the safe she used the rest of the orbs, locking it in the place and form it was in. She then moved out of the way and activated the other effect of her zanpakuto onto the orbs connected to the hinges and lock.

Immediately the door was torn off of the safe, flying into the wall, before it fell to the floor. The orbs reformed in front of her weapons, before she sealed her zanpakuto and looked inside the safe, the main body no worse for wear. As expected, there was the urn - or at least, something that might have generously been called an urn. It was little more than a large metal tin with a clasped cap on top. A picture was taped to its side with a message in permanent marker written on it - showing a man holding the urn at some scenic overlook, possibly somewhere out of the country by the looks of the terrain. The message itself was faintly troubling.

'Ashes scattered in New Zealand, November 4th, 2016. Peace be with you.

Kairi stared at the message blankly. “If I had not just said we had to protect humans...I may have killed this one.” She began turning away from the destroyed safe, before she got an idea. Walking over to the desk she procured a permanent marker, and then wrote, on the note ‘Your ancestors are unhappy with your actions. You have disgraced us.’ She made sure to use a bright red marker. She also drew arrows on the wall next to the safe to further direct attention to it. She then put the marker away, sat on the desk and waited a few minutes to see if anyone would show up due to the alarms.

As predicted, a mere three minutes later two very nervous looking police officers huddled into the room, squinting around anxiously before they noticed the wall safe and the message.

“Shit.” They both said simultaneously.

Kairi smiled as she saw them look around, anxiety clear in their body language and expressions. She sat and watched. The place was clear, she was invisible. She mostly wanted to see the look on the owner’s face when he read the message. If the police officers even tried to remove the note, she would, with a huge smile on her face, punch the wall with a fraction of her full strength, causing it to form small cracks in a roughly crater-like fashion. Thankfully (or unfortunately), they did no such thing - one left, possibly to explain what they had found to the owner, while the other simply stood guard. A minute or so later the alarm stopped blaring. Another two minutes and the owner - the same man as was in the picture, dressed only in a night robe - shuffled angrily into the room and gaped in shock at the message on the wall.

Seeing the man enter, Kairi decided to fully commit to her act, mostly to see if perhaps the message had been a lie. If the man had even a small amount of the ashes, and any old urn, then it could probably trick the hollow. If not, well, they’d just have to beat it into submission.

Win/win. Drawing her sword she cut the tip of her finger, not even wincing at the action, before sheathing the blade. Then she realized, belatedly, that her blood would be invisible too. “Shit, uh.... Guess the marker will have to do.” Picking it up off the desk--which to the humans looked like it was being lifted by an unseen force--she began violently and sloppily writing jagged letters across the wall until it spelled ‘RETRIEVE THE ASH.’ She smiled at her work, glancing back at the humans.

“Ok, I’m out.” One of the police officers said flatly, turning around on the spot and walking straight out of the room. The other one, to his credit, only began backing out slowly as he reached for his radio and began calling in to the local precinct to report…

“A...a violent intrusion! Somebody is in the domicile and tearing the place up, but we can’t see them…”

The owner simply stared in bewilderment at the flying marker, he read the message with nothing but confusion on his face. “The ashes are gone! That whore’s remains had to be disposed of before the will was read! That was the only way-” He broke off and began to splutter in a mixture of fear and rage, a paroxysm of anxiety.

“Oh wow, poor guy. I wonder what kinda woman she was. Too bad I don’t care about his feelings,” she smiled, and there was an evil look in her eyes as she threw the marker, channeling a little energy into it. It struck the wall and pierced an inch into it, sticking there. She had hopped off the desk, using shunpo to close the distance between herself and the man, before she lifted him off his feet and pushed him/threw him into the wall, making sure he stayed pinned there.

“Man this is too good. If a captain ever saw me doing this I’d be in sooo much trouble.”

She grinned and pulled the marker from the wall with her free hand, her other hand keeping the man pinned to the wall by pressing against his chest. The pressure would be at least mildly painful. Meanwhile she wrote, at a feverish pace, on the wall next to her.

‘HOW DARE YOU!’ She followed it up by crossing the phrase out and drawing numerous jagged, messy lines with the marker. This was far too fun. Both of the police officers were gone now, leaving the owner to choke, suspended against the wall. “Damn you nosy spirits!” The man spat. “You killed her entire family anyway! I just inherited the damn stuff! She’s not even a direct relative by blood! What do you care?”

That left her a bit at a loss. The guy didn’t have what she needed, but he seemed like kind of an ass, so she casually decided to throw him into the desk. She then wrote on a wall again, this time as calmly and precisely as possible.

'Two days.’

Following this, she poked his finger with her sword, drawing blood on it, and then sheathed the zanpakuto, before she stood in the doorway to watch his reaction.

Regardless of what he decided to do or say, she wrote one final thing on the wall. This she wrote right under the previous statement.

‘Your disgrace will be punished.’

She then grabbed the urn, using shunpo so it appeared to simply vanish outright, only to reappear on the wall outside of the man’s view. She was laughing as she jumped down from the wall.

She left and wandered around until she managed to locate some rather small life signs in the form of a rat colony. She killed all of them before placing them in the urn, and then departed again. She found a factory with a furnace, located something to put the rats in--the workers having left for the night--and figured out how to turn it on, incinerating the rats to ash. She extracted the ash, placed it in a freezer for few minutes, and then poured it into the urn. The ash would be room temperature.

She then headed back to her allies, popping in a new piece of gum as she did so. She couldn’t wait to see if the hollow noticed the difference.

【Bleach: Souls Adrift】

Kiai-katta

@Xan the G

This is pending full approval, the other two techniques look great. Gonna find a way to balance the deflect bit.

Gonna review the rest of the CS tomorrow :)

【Bleach: Souls Adrift】

Since we've already gone through the reviewing in PM and whatnot, Accepted. Throw him in the character tab.

【Bleach: Souls Adrift】

First of all, welcome to Souls Adrift, it's nice to see you again Xan and despite some of the below I--and I'm sure the others--would be glad to have ya ^_^

Anywho, on to the review and all that jazz.

【Rekuzan Xero - X-0】

@Xan the G

Alrighty. So, I'll admit I have not yet read history/personality (the bio section) since I wanted to see what the zanpakuto looked like first (since that is typically what I need to review more than anything else). I'll take a look at Xero's "Personal Info," once we figure this out. So, without further ado, the zanpakuto review. Bear with me.

Ki-Manipulation. Légion has the ability to disrupt reiryuku like a physical sword can disrupt a physical body, making power leak like blood or Ki-skills malfunction like broken/injured limbs.

Shikai Ability

So this is essentially fine and could result in some interesting effects. The problem comes in the area below. Aka, techniques.

Iemo-pi: Xero will launch a spirit wave attack. If it hits a being with spiritual energy, their next use of spiritual energy will backfire. If it hits a spiritual being, the next reiryoku attack from their bodies or skill will either hurt them if it's intended to attack someone else or hamper them if it was supposed to support them by the same extent they expected it to work for them. If it hits a zanpakuto or other 'item' of spiritual energy, then the next reiryoku attack using or channelling through that item will backfire in the same way.

So, I'm fine with the attack being able to hinder or somewhat disrupt someone's ability to access or control their reiryoku. However, what is not okay is the fact that it can essentially cause any attack/ability to "backfire," somehow. This is largely problematic for several reasons.

1.) Mechanically, that...doesn't always work. Some abilities manifest reiryoku and then allow the individual to control that. Causing something like that to "backfire," doesn't...really make any sense. So this wouldn't work on some abilities, for starters.

2.) It's...kind of over powered to be completely straightforwards and honest with you. Additionally, it doesn't really stay with the theme of your ability that you set in the primary description (that being the disruption/manipulation of reiryoku(ki) as if you were causing damage to it in a manner similar to damage caused by a physical weapon to someone's body.

So I'm going to say no to this technique. You can make something that weakens an ability or briefly disrupts their ability to use reiryoku-based abilities, but causing them to backfire or suddenly inconvenience them rather than help them is a no-go.

Seishin Shifuto: Xero will stab the target in the heart in a passing lunge. The poke distorts what the mind feels as pain and what the 'heart' feels as fatigue. In the mind, the user will register lost reiryoku as if it were physical pain. The amount of pain they feel will depend on how empty (as a percentage of their total when full) they are of reiryoku. Additionally, the moment this skill is successfully used, the target will be 'caught up' by this phantom pain for the lost percentage of reiryoku in a single instant, similar to feeling all the strikes from an actual fight all at once. That moment can cause the target to flinch as well as raise hesitation as they use their spiritual energy, since each use of reiryoku from then on will make them feel pain. While this skill is in effect, it is possible for the target to pass out or faint from the phantom pain of energy loss without actually being hurt.

So...no. This doesn't fit with the theme of your ability and it is massively overpowered. It makes any use of any energy at all painful to some degree. I should remind you that reiryoku is a character's equivalent of stamina meaning, living and moving around would also use it up somewhat. That coupled with any zanpakuto ability that uses reiryoku (aka literally every single one of them) and any ability that uses reiryoku (kido for example...and also anything at all that could possibly require energy) makes this completely unreasonable.

I'm sorry if that comes off as harsh. I'm just being real with you since I think anyone deserves that, you know?

Kiai-katta: Xero makes a cut able to cut into reiryoku-based attacks as if they were tangible objects. Whether elements, waves or even vibrations, Xero can physically cut them or stop them with his zanpakuto. If he uses the back or flat of his blade, he can parry or deflect them rather than cut them.

Now this is better, with the only part I have a problem with being the deflection. He's going to need considerable reiatsu and/or physical strength to be able to deflect attacks like that...and that's without considering the effects of any given reiryoku-based attacks. So you may keep his ability to cut reiryoku-based attacks with greater ease than others might, but he can't deflect them unless it makes sense (his reiatsu/physical strength stats would need to be around the same level as the other person's reiatsu stats or higher although I may change this after some deeper thought).

So yeah, those first two techniques are largely a no-go, and part of the third is a no. I would suggest you make a PM with @Ganryu, @Terminal, and myself to work on some edits and alternatives for the direction you could take the zanpakuto. Once we/you work that out, then I'll take a look at everything else and see if there's anything that needs alteration.

【Bleach: Souls Adrift】

Hollow NPCs

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Working list.

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Mal Aliento

To Be Added.

A Hunting Party

【Saishi - The Crackfic Hollow】

【Theme】

_{~"Nothing could possibly go wrong when a lazy bum and an overachieving single mom get together. Right? RIGHT???"~}

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【Personal Info】

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【Name: SaishiName: Sashi(Priest).
【Alias: The Crackfic Hollow; Fiend; Little Pest; Sub.
【Age: A lady...monster, never tells her age!
【Gender: Female.
【Race: Hollow.
【Form: Greater Gillian.

【Additional Appearance Info: Saishi's form is..odd, appearing at first to be very similar to a Menos Grande, possessing neck spikes, and a black robe which covers the rest of her form quite neatly. However, this is a deception she has used to intimidate others as beneath her robes she is spindly and rather weak with four pairs of arms, two tails, and two legs, which are perhaps the only part of her that has any muscle, with the rest of her body being a fragile looking pink and baby blue, which blend together. Her mask, on the other hand differentiates her mouth taking the form of a beak like a plague doctor, her eyes being covered with an almost ornate masquerade mask. Beyond this the mask curves up to the top of her head, covering it as well, with something reminscent of a pope hat.

Typically, Saishi keeps her two tails aligned with her back, effectively pointed upwards and laid across it. This hides them and allows her to use them as defense if she is attacked from behind...not that she's any good at that.

【Biography: In life she was weeaboo trash, who wrote crack fiction for monies. Seriously. She got so attached to one of her fics that she didn't eat for days, resulting in death by starvation. She ended up a hollow because her one regret was that she never got to finish her magnum opus: ….

Yu-gi-oh the King of Games X Shadow the Hedgehog.

【Personality: Crackfics, amiright? In all seriousness though, Saishi is something of a fanatic. She's craaaazy about shipping things, especially things that ought not to be, and she loves watching people deal with weird situations...typically from a distance...with goggles...while drooling. Yeah she's kinda...off.

【Notable Traits】

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【Likes/Dislikes】

✔ Reading.
✔ Writing.
✔ Eating.
✔ Talking.
✔ Going on Binges.
✔ Sake.
✔ Stupid people.

✘ Soda.
✘ People who don't appreciate books.
✘ People smarter than her.
✘ Boredom.
✘ Swimming.

【Defining Traits】

Positive

▲ Cunning.
▲ Bubbly.
▲ Optimistic.
▲ Witty.

Neutral

☯ Intelligent.
☯ Observant.
☯ Empathetic.

Negative

▼ Manipulative.
▼ Obsessive.
▼ Creepy.
▼ Holds grudges.

【Relationships】

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Kiretsu: Hunting Partner.

Essentially, Saishi and Kiretsu each play a role in a given encounter, and this role various somewhat. Either Saishi acts as bait, running away and tiring their prey before Kiretsu ambushes them, or she hides, letting Kiretsu kick up a fuss and fight, while she plays a support role. As a result, the two have become somewhat symbiotic, sharing their meals. Nonetheless, Kiretsu is unaware that Saishi has been feeding off of him the entire time, and he is similarly unaware that she lets him take the bigger portions of their kills, rather than truly being subservient to him. Though admittedly, she does kind of like Kiretsu, but she knows the time for that sort of thing has passed. She's not really...human anymore after all.

Mal Aliento: Superior.

Saishi thinks Mal is kinda...well, kawai, but she doesn't know how to feel about the fact that what would have once been lust, has become ravenous hunger. Seeing the Centipede makes her want to write down or recite rather vivid epics regarding how he might taste. Unf, the texture, the swirling tastes on her palette. How she wishes she could indulge in him. She could eat him forever, and never grow hungry again! Or so she'd like to think. Despite this infatuation, or perhaps because of it, she follows order to the T and does her best to please the Singing Centipede in hopes that one day she will be able to stand at his side...and maybe even take a bite of him <3

【Capabilities】

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【General Aptitude】

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Great Reiryoku: 2
Legendary Reiatsu: 5
Average Integrity: 2

Unremarkable Mask: 1
Incredible Hunger: 4
Legendary Rigidity: 5
Legendary Instinct: 5

Poor Form: 0
Poor Offense: 0
Poor Defense: 0
Average Physical Strength: 2

Average Power: 2
Average Hollow Power: 2
Legendary Perception: 5

Incredible Speed: 4
Incredible Agility: 4
Poor Biorythm: 0

Total T: 13-1-1-1-1(9)
Total S: 3+2+0+3+6(14)+5+5+5+5(34)

【Specialization】

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Kōshoku(_好色 'Sensuality'): Perception(5); Reiatsu(4); Hunger(4); Instinct(4).

Kōshoku, a trait that has developed from her unique obsession, and stalker-like behavior, Saishi has incredibly keen senses, which are tied in with her reiatsu, hunger, and instinct. Effectively her reiatsu is incredibly insidious, always seeking out that of other beings to tie itself into it. Additionally her hunger causes her to pull in free reishi quite rapidly, and of course her control of reiatsu and perception round this off, allowing her to draw information from the aforementioned. This acts as an additional sense or an amplifier to her existing ones, informing her of someone's unique smell, taste, and minute physical traits. She can even learn what texture someone will be going down. Scarily...and creepily, enough, Saishi can actually 'feel people's cells breathe,' something which she loves to inform others of.

Kosui musubime(_{狡い結び目} 'Insidious knotwork'): Instinct(3); Hunger(4); Reiatsu (5).

Something of a unique trait of her reiatsu, and something of a skill, Saishi is capable of using her reiatsu's natural tendency to seek out and intrude in that of others to actually bind people. She can weave the invisible tendrils of reiatsu around others to act like invisible chains or to even form bonds of reiryoku should she condense the pressure enough. She can even tie 'knots' in people's reiatsu, causing blockages if it tries to reenter the body, or weighing them down. All bindings, weights, or blockages eventually fade though.

【Hollow Ability】

_{~"So it is today that I wed thee in unholy matrimony! You shall, henceforth, be together...forever, ooor until one of us dies. Whichever comes first."~}

Ability Description: Saishi's unique ability allows her to create a connection between her and any number of pairs of individuals. The more people the more taxing the ability, though the more powerful it becomes. This connection is formed of her suppressed reiatsu weaved into and merged with that of those who are linked.

Once linked she may use a sort of sliding scale, allowing her to cause sexual or magnetic attraction/repulsion between linked individuals. This means she may cause individuals to be pulled towards one another OR to feel very intense sensations and feelings of a more primal nature towards their fellow linkee. While this effect is not particularly lasting, it can make an impression if maintained for long enough. Notably, since this ability is channeled via reiatsu, it is amplified by greater amounts of it, creating stronger attraction and push/pull reactions if more reiatsu is involved. Saishi may also use these abilities between herself and an individual, but she will—to an extent—fall prey to it...though she has more experience dealing. It should be noted that the reiatsu link cannot go through solid objects, but can go around them.

Ability Techniques

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Unknown: Unknown.

Unknown: Unknown.

Unknown: Unknown.

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【Kiretsu】

【Theme I/|\Theme II】

_{~"Quiet now. Time to rip throats out."~}

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【Personal Info】

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【Name/Alias: Kiretsu(Fissure).
【Age: No keep track.
【Gender: Male.
【Race: Hollow.
【Form: Greater Gillian.

【Additional Appearance Info: Despite its actual level of evolution, Kiretsu is still essentially a Menos Grande in appearance, though he is a third the height and has several key differences. These differences primarily include his mask and his limbs. His hands are essentially huge claws, hidden only by his robe-like covering, with his feet being essentially the same. Additionally, though always hidden, Kiretsu possesses a rather thin, prehensile tail. This tail can be detached and regrown...though not with any swiftness.

【Biography: No.

【Personality: Kiretsu appears more brawn than brains, but the reality is quite different, as the massive hollow is in truth, rather clever. Possessing a keen awareness of its environment and personal assets, Kiretsu can be considered to be a being with not quite a one track mind, but at least the focus of something with tunnel vision. This results in a being who hones in on specific things, and then works scarily hard to get what it wants. If its mind were more advanced, one could call this ambition, but at the moment it is not. Instead, Kiretsu relies on a mixture of instinct, intuition, and cunning which translates into something that looks like it is acting recklessly, but is in truth...executing some form of plan—even if not intending to do so.

【Notable Traits】

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【Likes/Dislikes】

✔ Easy prey.
✔ Things with a crunch.
✔ A good hunt.
✔ The sounds of anguish and despair.

✘ Weaklings.
✘ Anything that would dull his wits.
✘ Things that he can't hit.
✘ Uppity women.

【Defining Traits】

Positive

▲ Clever.
▲ Focused.
▲ Tenacious.
▲ Forthright.
▲ Confident.

Neutral

☯ Ambitious.
☯ Disaffected.
☯ Dark sense of humor.

Negative

▼ Abrasive.
▼ Harsh.
▼ Cruel.
▼ Possessive.
▼ Unsympathetic.
▼ Short-tempered
▼ Violent.

【Relationships】

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Saishi: Hunting Partner.

Essentially, he lets the little woman play a support role, tiring his prey, acting as bait, or botch up manuevers and teamwork so he may get the kill. He chooses to share a measure of his kills...only to keep her around. He plans to eat her one day.

Mal Aliento: Superior.

There is not much to say about the Singing Centipede, thinks Kiretsu, but it does think that he is annoying. He wishes he could get a taste without getting quite so dead.

【Capabilities】

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【General Aptitude】

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Incredible Reiryoku: 4
Incredible Reiatsu: 4
Unremarkable Integrity: 1

Impressive Mask: 3
Poor Hunger: 0
Impressive Rigidity: 3
Poor Instinct: 0

Average Form: 2
Incredible Offense: 4
Average Defense: 2
Incredible Physical Strength: 4

Impressive Power: 3
Impressive Hollow Power: 2
Impressive Perception: 3

Poor Speed: 0
Average Agility: 2
Unremarkable Biorythm: 1

Total T: 13-1(12)
Total S: 6+6+4+5+0(21)+5(26)

【Hollow Ability】

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Ability Description: Simply put, Kiretsu has the ability to handle anything as if it were a solid, brittle reishi...unless it is actually composed of reishi. This is achieved by way of a bounded field of reiryoku surrounding the hollow's body, which is most dense around its hands and head. Kiretsu is capable of expanding, contracting, and generally manipulating the shape and density of this field by increasing the “resonance” he generates, as well as feeding it his reiryoku. While his ability appears to have no effect no bound reishi—aka the reishi that composes a living form or inanimate structure—it does have an effect on free reishi and most reishi constructs. Essentially, it allows him to disrupt the cohesion of constructs to treat them almost as if they were fragile. In the case of free reishi, it allows Kiretsu to gather it more efficiently.

Ability Techniques

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Unknown: Unknown.

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Capes of Denver: A Worm RP

Lol. I'll see if CB is needed, otherwise it ain't on me, I got an Evelyn post up already :P

Yoshua's Character Storage Mark VII

【Mōke-mono, Hitori - Alias】

【[url=LINK]Theme I[/url]/|\[url=LINK]Theme II[/url]/|\[url=LINK]Theme III[/url]】

_{~"A quote from the character."~}

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【Personal Info】

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【Name: Mōke-mono(Godsend), Hitori(Alone).
【Nicknames: Hito; Mōke-san
【Alias:
【Age:
【Age Appearance:
【Gender: Male.
【Race: Human-->Plus-->Shinigami.

【Additional Appearance Info: Include height, weight, style of clothing worn, as well as the outfit they're most commonly seen in. Consider the position of their zanpakuto and any tools they might carry.

【Biography: Minimum of three paragraphs. Conversely you may reveal it ICly, but must inform the GM.

【Personality: Overarching description.

【Notable Traits】

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【Likes/Dislikes】

✔ Tea.
✔ Combat.
✔ Coffee.
✔ Women.
✔ Five-hour energy.
✔ Kido users.
✔ Cold water.
✔ Peace and quiet.

✘ Sleep.
✘ Dreams.
✘ His sword spirit.
✘ Illusions.
✘ Anything that makes him release.

【Defining Traits】

Positive

▲ Tenacious.
▲ Loyal
▲ Intelligent.
▲ Good sense of humor.
▲ Perceptive/Fast learner.
▲ Supportive.
▲ Patient.

Neutral

☯ Stubborn.
☯ Empathetic.

Negative

▼ Sleep deprived.
▼ Somewhat bipolar.
▼ Paranoid.
▼ Defeatist.
▼ Selectively Ignorant.
▼ Lazy -- Due to sleep deprivation.
▼ Insomniac.
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【Relationships】

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NAME: Friend/Rival/Acquaintance/Superior Officer/Nemesis etc

Summary of Relationship. When they met, how long they've known one another, how they feel about them and why.

NAME: Friend/Rival/Acquaintance/Superior Officer/Nemesis/Lover/Spouse etc

Summary of Relationship. When they met, how long they've known one another, how they feel about them and why.

NAME: Friend/Rival/Acquaintance/Superior Officer/Nemesis etc

Summary of Relationship. When they met, how long they've known one another, how they feel about them and why.

【Equipment】

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Asauchi:

On him at all times should a fight break out or he need to defend himself, Hitori is in possession of several Asauchi that have been designed with limiters. These Asauchi attune to his reiryoku signature as any of their ilk would, but are not allowed to fully bond with it and form a zanpakuto--primarily because he already has one. As a result this katana are merely weapons which he can resonate with to increase their durability and cutting power. He carries three of them at any given time. One on his back, slung over his shoulder, one on his right hip, and one next to his zanpakuto on his left hip.

【Capabilities】

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【General Aptitude】

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Fighting Style:

Immense Reiryoku(3/4):

Legendary Reiatsu(5/4):

Average Alignment(2/4):

Zanjutsu Master(3/4):

Average Offense(2/4):

Average Defense(2/4):

Average Resonance(2/4): Meaning that he has shikai, but has yet to master it.

Untrained Hakuda(0/4):

Poor Offense(0/4):

Poor Defense(0/4):

Average Physical Strength(2/4):

Kidō Grandmaster(4/4):

Incredible Kido Power(4/4):

Impressive Perception(3/4):

Hohō Expert(2/4):

Average Mobility(2/4):

Weak Resilience(1/4):

Shorthand

Reir: 3
Rei: 5
Align: 2

Zan: 3
Off: 2
Def: 2
Reso: 2

Hak: 0
Off: 0
Def: 0
Phy: 2

Kid: 4
KP: 4
Per: 3

Hoh: 2
Mob: 2
Resi: 1

Total T: 13-1(12)
Total S: 5+6+0+6+3(20)+5(25)

【Specialization】

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【Zanpakuto】

Sealed State

_{~"A quote about and/or from their zanpakuto."~}

Additional Description:

Inner World & Spirit:

Description. Feel free to make the title of this a set of links.

Zanpakuto Personality: What are they like?

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Shikai

_{~"Release command and name."~}

Ability:

Techniques

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Name: Description.

Name: Description.

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Bankai

_{~"BANKAI...NAME"~}

Ability:

Techniques

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Name: Description.

Name: Description.

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