Zata

Shock & A.W.E. [Redux]

The name instils the same rage that the knowledge of the fact that there are real human beings named North West, Hashtag, Abcde, and Shithead, but other than that, everything seems good. Even got Jack's nickname for him thought up, though it is one hundred percent a low hanging fruit.

Only thing I still need from you is a short description paragraph of Shard for the first post, which the first paragraph of your bio nicely starts, but needs an ending.

Shock & A.W.E. [Redux]

Alright, there are a number of issues I see with your machine.

1. Your manufacturer has too many positives to negative qualities. General spread is supposed to be 'good-good-bad' with additional attributes being added with both a good and bad at the same time. To fix this, I say you should remove evasive since it really isn't a measurable thing. Also, remove the support bonus from the first one.
2. Your missile pod would be classified as a size 2 weapon. Either reduce the missile count to 3, or remove it for something else.
3. The flamethrower needs its ammo listed. Say that it has enough for 15 seconds of continuous stream, since this is easily measurable.
4. Your shield should be listed as 2 due to your ability, and mark which weapon gets the free point.

If anyone else has an issue, they are free to speak up.

Shock & A.W.E. [Redux]

Works for me.

As for the first IC post: yay, we have a IC now! I'm thinking Mr. Takaru can go next, followed by myself as I write Mr. Tat into the story. Assuming Mr. Bacon is done his character by then, I will give him his opening too, though depending on how long it takes for posts to get done, I may force him to wait a round. Oh, and Mr. Takaru: Roman is in the common room, doing his sudoku again, for reference.

Shock & A.W.E. [Redux]

Post it here; we all get to discuss it.

Shock & A.W.E. [Redux]

I know, and that's the problem. I like to surround myself with less-capable criminal masterminds to boss around, yet you keep acting like a good little boy, and it irks me.

Shock & A.W.E. [Redux]

Yeah, but, see, you gave away your hand by telling me you know Mr. Bringer. Now I need to do a background check, get three references, meet your parents, a urine sample; it's a whole process.

Shock & A.W.E. [Redux]

Sure, if Mr. Bringer vouches for you, since you know him.

Shock & A.W.E. [Redux]

*Smacks Mr. Bringer with the Encouragement Stick*

Shock & A.W.E. [Redux]

My unicorn is a super saiyan doing a kamehamerainbow. It is the best unicorn.

Shock & A.W.E. [Redux]

I want to start on an afternoon — Sunday being preferable — and not in combat. This way we get in some dialogue with the new member before combat sims. Also, if you are going to have the Colonel introduce her, have him mention the possibility of a fifth.