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Padawan=Future sight is still manifesting. They can but yes they will be physically weak and the power will be weak.

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@TheUnKnowable: Not the most grammatical and skillfully written cs, but it does fit the requirements and that's good enough, accepted!

@Corrupted: Sure you can, you don't have to be that informed. (I read like 2-3 series of NJO only.)

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@Reem: Fine except you need to expand the skills and strengths/weaknesses sections.

@knighthawk: Accepted!

Updated the setting, go check it out where I left a placeholder. Also, I got the ooc up, go nuts there.

Anyone want to be Twi'lek, Togruta, or anything like that? That would be pretty cool to add to the rp.

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@know: It's not on the Yavin moon, it's going to be on Corusant. And the Luke thing should be fine, but it's better if it isn't Luke. Also, it isn't plausible since Obi-Wan is, well Obi-Wan and I don't think he's going to sleep with a prostitute. He's also a major character and the consistency is off.

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I didn't think we would have this problem but we do. You guys can't all be human Jedi who are adept at light saber combat. You guys need to diversify. Right now, all characters save for Platinum's, are Human who are better at light saber combat than force use. If you guys might have another race you can use, changing will help diversify the rp. This applies to all humans, most

@Corrupted: Your history is not made for new jedi order and this sith lord thing is not good. And your abilities and strengths/weaknesses need to be expanded upon.

@ Roxx: Thank for diversifying and cyborg should be fine. I don't see a problem with your cs thus far. Your personality is similar to Corrupted but that should be fine.

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@Anybody related to the Jawa discussion: No Jawas. 1. Too difficult to incorporate 2. Too far-fetched. 3. Nobody would want to rp with a Jawa.

@TheunKnowable: You have to rework it quite a bit, everything up to the appearance is fine (age range is still being thought through). But after that it gets a bit screwy, Anakin Sky- I mean Mott Faze's history is a bit weird and needs to be reworked, stay away from main characters as much as possible due to god-modding and consistency issues. So that means no personally trained by Luke WinWalker. Your personality needs to be more in-depth and strengths/weaknesses need to be expanded. If you clean it up that would also be great, formatting and the like.

@Platinum: Similar issues with Know, you have re-format and elaborate on some parts, personality, strengths, and weaknesses. Remember to expand into your backstory as the rp goes on.

Everyone, somethings I have noticed about the two cs so far is the amount written. Please write at least more than a couple of sentences for personality, backstory, etc. Also, keep your cs neat, Add bold to your headings and subheadings, add spaces between sections, stuff like that. Also, on the topic of age, every race is different, so find an age you feel is mature enough to be a padawan but not so old as to become a knight. For example, races with human like cycles will range from 13-20s range while longer lifespan races will have 30-50 years (just an example). Get those cs' out as soon as you can!

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@Platinum: Being 19 would me he would be a jedi knight in a few years and would be pretty trained in comparison to most, change it please. Also, give some backstory, don't have to be in depth, just need an idea, especially since he's from Dathomir with all of the witches and whatnot. Other than that, it looks fine, could be more in depth though. Fix those and you'll be good to go.

Yeah, I screwed up the age range, you can leave that blank for a while before I do some more research. Help and insight is appreciated.

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Some rules to follow:

-Stay under the realm of what Padawans are, no god-modding basically. Also, no dark side prone characters, no PCs will be dark side.
-I will probably control most npcs because most are universal, but if you have a npc that is personal to you and you would like to use him/her, go ahead.
-Rule of Thumb= Don't go crazy, Think "Would anybody be pissed ooc by this?"

The Setting

The Jedi Academy has been rebuilt on Corusant, Grandmaster Luke Skywalker and the New Jedi Order has rebuilt the Jedi Temple from the ruins of the Old Jedi Temple. Many Jedi Masters and Jedi Knights have begun to move into the newly rebuilt temple, including you. You will start by going to the temple with your master, eventually settling in and going to do something. You can interact with the other Padawans right away if you please or you can leave it open for others to interact with you. This is the time frame before Darth Caedus goes crazy.

How the rp will work is that everyone will have their own master, controlled by themselves, and you guys will interact with each other through missions, training sessions, living in the temple, studying, whatever. You can read about the temple through wookiepedia for more info. If you guys have any idea how to amass all of the padawans onto one adventure, go ahead. If not, I'll think of something, most likely a big mission to test the capabilities of the Padawans without their masters.

Character Sheet

Character Sheet

Name:
Gender:
Race: (You can be creative, but like I said, don't go crazy.)
Appearance: (Picture is fine, description is also fine.)
Personality:
Backstory/History:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Abilities/Skills:

(Your lightsaber colour/class will be determined by your strengths and personality. Good with lightsaber combat and strongly willed to protect people? Blue colour. I'm basing this on the video about lightsaber colours and their meanings, it's quite popular on youtube if you want to check it out.)

If I missed anything that might be added, feel free to point it out.

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Njo it is, I'm glad you guys all agree with me how his demand was really stupid. Give me a bit to research and put up a cs, the setting, and an official post. I will be cutting off entrance here unless more people leave. If you have suggestions or questions, feel free to ask or suggest.