I adjusted the character sheet a little. I hope it fits the requirements. I'm kind of at the point where I need to play her to really get a slid feel for her. Unfortunately, the means any edits to the personality section will be limited until I have the chance to see what she's like. I can always change that on the character sheet at a later time.
As for the history, I only made the change that she's an immigrant. The size of the family lends to the fact that they are poor. It's abnormal for a family to be so large and therefore makes it difficult to make ends meet with only a handful being capable to work. If you need it, we can work out the details about where she was raised. At this point, it doesn't seem to me to matter much, but I'm also not the GM. Let me know what you think,
@A Cute Angel. I'm more than willing to change things if I have to, but would like to keep her as is if I can.