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Midhaven is laid out as follows: There is a tall white palace in the center of the city, with high spires and onion-shaped domes. Just south of it is the Auction House, a boring box structure. In fact, the rest of the city is mainly clay box houses with flat roofs and not much else. That said, the buildings are fairly modular, and can be stacked several times before structural integrity is compromised. The buildings further in are multi-story stores, with the bottom floor reserved for business and the upper floor for residence. Further out are the residential districts where you'll find inns and rental places. On the outermost edges of the city are the abodes of the wealthy, the larger and more ornate houses belonging to captains, generals, and aristocrats. Not all the outer ring is residence though - the northern half is heavy industry. Yeah, the blacksmiths and carpenters are in the center of the city, but the mines, mills, and factories, the real industry of the city, are along the northern rim. Farms and plantations can be found in the surrounding suburbs.

Midhaven also contains remnants of the former cultures that lived there. Their water treatment and sewage systems remain among the most advanced in the world, and there is a functioning electric power plant on the outskirts of the city. With the loss of electrical knowledge, however, the plant is now only used to keep the mines and water pumps running.
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Awesome. :). I'll for sure have a response by the end of tomorrow. I got a new guitar today and not gonna lie I'm playing it till 4am. I'll be hashing writing ideas while I practice though.
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Erudessa's retort is roughly translated, "Go french-kiss an orc."
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I had this plot idea.

Mariƫ's reaction when she sees the Imperium for what it truly is:
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So, would it be wrong for Lanik to assume the Imperials are making serious leeway with their invasion into Aetherion?
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So, would it be wrong for Lanik to assume the Imperials are making serious leeway with their invasion into Aetherion?


They broke through the wall, so it's only a matter of time before Aetherion falls. I wouldn't say they're making serious leeway with that, but they've conquered enough territory to acquire slaves and set up a base of operations.
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I'll have something up this weekend!
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Yay! Looking forward to it. If I develop enough inspiration, I may post some lore flashbacks in the meantime.
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Not my most inspired writing, is it?
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Haha, what do you mean? I think its fine.
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Haha, what do you mean? I think its fine.


I meant that I read my post again, and it looks meh. :P

On a more positive note, I have more plot details forming. For one, I've got a new elvish villain cooking things up. Additionally, Eru may be young, but she's a schemer. From here on out, she won't just be re-acting to story events - she'll be manipulating them. Once she has a moment to settle down and think, she'll start cooking up plans. It'll be so exciting. xD
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I was thinking of the places you could go from here. Erudessa needs a tour of the house so she can start working, as well as a permanent sleeping location. Lanik will want to put the limiter on her at some point, which he will need her cooperation for. We could timeskip to a point where Mariƫ leaves the room, perhaps on Lanik's command, so the two can discuss things in private.

Just some ideas.
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Heads up: I edited Eru's reasoning. I realize it god-moded a bit, since she wouldn't have reached the conclusion that Lanik was keeping her for personal gain by that logical path except with a little omniscient help.
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Did my post throw you for a loop? :P
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Haha no! Apologies, this week has been a little hectic for me. But I'm planning on posting this long weekend.
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I GOT IT UP FINALLY.

Lanik is one hell of a ranger but he isn't exactly the most communicably charming.

Also, I ended the post off for the three to go shopping in the morning. Something to break the ice for the little trio, but if you're going to introduce any sort of plot directive or new character now's the time to do it. Everything from me will mostly be getting the characters a little more acquainted. I'll leave you in charge of story direction.
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Holy fuck I just had an idea. The RP is called Condemned right? If you could somehow work Darian into killing Serani and framing it under Lanik and Erudessa then that would cause a shit-storm that would be worthy of the namesake, bahaha. What do you think? Or what direction do you want the story to go?
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I'm so sorry for the long wait. Fire Emblem: Echoes has been insanely addicting. Plus, there's so much great material to reply to. :P
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Haha! No worries! My sister's been obsessed with that game too. Apparently it's like the second coming of Jesus, I wouldn't know though. Never played them haha.
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I'll have something up this weekend. Drafting begins tomorrow. Is there any chance Lanik left some unfinished projects lying about?
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