@Holy Soldier. Same here :)
I already have some idea's for my chatacter. I'll post my WIP later today.
I already have some idea's for my chatacter. I'll post my WIP later today.
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redbaron1234 Full of Pluck
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Mujida.
So, I was thinking of making sort of a government official character. Not quite a samurai, though historically the kind of person I have in mind would be one, but something along the lines of a magical cop?
I would like to ask what kind of weapon you would consider a Jitte to be. I figured that they were so strongly associated with law enforcement of the era that it would fit with the character concept.
Edit: Another thing, are guardian spirits used as weapons considered melee or ranged for purposes of the "one primary/secondary/ranged" thing or is that a case by case call?
So, I was thinking of making sort of a government official character. Not quite a samurai, though historically the kind of person I have in mind would be one, but something along the lines of a magical cop?
I would like to ask what kind of weapon you would consider a Jitte to be. I figured that they were so strongly associated with law enforcement of the era that it would fit with the character concept.
Edit: Another thing, are guardian spirits used as weapons considered melee or ranged for purposes of the "one primary/secondary/ranged" thing or is that a case by case call?
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@redbaron1234Use only what is given in the weapon categories.
Guardian Spirits are only primary or secondary. They can be ranged because they charge an enemy and inflict elemental damage but their range for that is close combat. Not medium or long range.
Guardian Spirits are only primary or secondary. They can be ranged because they charge an enemy and inflict elemental damage but their range for that is close combat. Not medium or long range.
Ryteb Pymeroce The Emerald Mage
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Updated my CS following your suggestions. I hope my backstory doesn't seem too angsty, I noticed the point in the rules about orphans.@Holy Soldier
Name: Lord Zane of Lychbaen
Titles/Honorifics: The Black Wolf, Lord of the Werewolves, the King’s Dog (insult)
Age: 27
Origin: Albion, a small country similar to England, save for they remained under anglo-saxon feudal law. The country is ruled by King Charles the Third, and the country’s chief export is war. The noble houses earn vast wealth by aiding other countries in struggles, using the poor as their weapons.
Profession: Knight
Hobby: It might seem strange, but Zane finds training enjoyable enough to do it as his hobby. When his body is too fatigued to train, he hones his mind by exploring texts on warfare and similar documents.
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Strengths: Zane is an expert soldier, and a fierce fighter. Even those who hate him cannot refute his prowess in battle. In addition to this, he is an expert strategist, able to attain victory where others would only find death. He is loyal to the men under his command, and his unit, named the Werewolves, was regarded as one of the most elite fighting forces in the world.
Weaknesses: Though his skills on land are numerous, his ability is almost non-existent when it comes to the seas, getting seasick almost as soon as he sets foot on a ship. In addition, his academic ability lies solely in the art of warfare, making him weak on the political and diplomatic parts of his job. The loss of the Werewolves has also hit him hard, as he considered many of them equal to brothers. He is heavily reliant upon his guardian spirit, deferring more to its wisdom rather than his own.
Height: 5’9”
Weight: 124lbs
Build: Muscular but slender, relying on skill rather than strength to fight.
Hair: Black
Eyes: Red
Skin: Caucasian
Handedness: Right
Scars: His body is covered in scars, mainly around his face and arms. A couple of large gashes are across his left eye, as if someone had clawed at it.
Tattoos: An ornate picture of a fox and wolf is upon his back.
Basic Description: If men are like sheep, then Zane is a wolf who is forced to fight other wolves. The nobility despise him because he is of low birth and has risen. The poor hate him because he serves the king. Yet the soldiers love him, as he is an uncompromising leader, who would defy the king himself to save his men.
Visual Description:
Disabilities: Left Eye missing
Primary Outfit: black plate mail, with a helm designed to resemble a wolf’s head. He also has a cloak made of wolf fur upon his back.
Secondary Outfit: A pair of black breeches
Most Prized Possession (Material Value): His longsword, Black Regalia
Most Prized Possession (Emotional Value): A carved effigy of a fox, from his home town.
Likes: Fighting, Strong Opponents, Learning
Dislikes: Alcohol, Politicians, Nobility
Purpose: Zane and his Werewolves were sent to the east to aid the J, though this was a ruse to get him killed. After being shipwrecked of the coast of Mahoushima, Zane and his remaining men have but one goal. Avenge their fallen comrades.
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Relationship: Single
Family: Orphan, parents unknown, Darrack (sworn brother), Zamuri (sworn brother), Zel (sworn sister), the Werewolves (sworn brothers, mostly deceased)
Primary Weapon: [Black Regalia] – [Sword] – [A longsword made from the same dark metal as his armour. The hilt of his sword is coated in gold trim, and has a pattern similar to a couple of fighting.]
Secondary Weapon: [Morning Glory & Evening Splendour] – [Dual Blades] – [Morning Glory is a golden blade with sapphire ornamentation, and Evening Splendour is a silver blade with ruby ornamentation.]
Range: [Wolf Fang Crossbow] – [Gun] – [An ornate crossbow made from ivory and grey steel. It fires bolts, which have become more scarce in the era of the gun, as a flintlock rifle is easier to use and a bow is a more skilled weapon. Despite their rarity of ammo, the crossbow doesn’t require gunpowder which makes up for its lack of power.]
Guardian Spirit: [Ryteb] – [Fox] – [Fire] – [A cheeky spirit, one of the 22 guardian spirits that were in thrall to Alfred, the first king of Albion. Ryteb is known as a trickster who loves to play pranks on people, but has actually been protecting the Black Regalia for all that time.] – [Major Arcana- The Magician] – [The guardian is able to speak, and shares his vast knowledge with his host.]
Character Story: Zane was born into poverty, with not even a name to call his own. Barely a year after his birth, the local noble came through on an extensive ‘recruiting drive’, but the town refused, as they had suffered too many of these over the past year. Showing the absolute power of the nobility, his town was erased for the disobedience, and as a warning to anyone else who dared question the nobility.
The young child survived under the pile of corpses, the soldiers mistaking his slumbering form for a corpse. For a time, he survived off the corpses of the town, the soldiers of the noble having taken all other food. It was a testament to the young warrior’s luck, as well as his strength, that he managed to make it even to the age of five.
It is said that strife breeds growth, and no where was that more apparent than with Zane. Though he was but five, his body was of a youth of ten. It was then he attracted the attention of the wolves which roamed the forests around his homeland. Instead of fleeing, something inside made him challenge the wolves. The fight was without witness, but according to Zane it was the hardest he had ever faced. Were it again not for his luck, this would probably have been the end of this tale. As it was, Zane still lost his left eye in the encounter.
Fortunately for the sake of our story, Zane was rescued by the guardian spirit known as Ryteb. For these unknown woods housed a most precious treasure, the blade of King Alfred the Great himself – Black Regalia. Even though near 700 years had passed since its forging, the blade was still sharp, awaiting a warrior who could bring legend to the name. And after watching the child grow, Ryteb had decided that he should be the one to wield such a blade.
After scaring off the wolves, the fox appeared before Zane, and offered him protection in exchange for being his pupil. The child, graciously, accepted, and received his name.
Over the coming years, Ryteb didn’t just train Zane to be a mere soldier, but a Commander of men. The wolves who once threatened him were brought under his thrall, and made to be a staple of his Werewolves until the present day. By the time he was but fifteen, he already had a thousand men under his command. It was believed that he was going to rebel against the nobility and free the people. Then the opposite occurred.
Travelling to the capital, he swore fealty to the king, in exchange for lands and a title. He was named Lord of Lychbaen, a small village of no real value to the nobility. Via his training regime, and Ryteb’s knowledge, Lychbaen and the Werewolves became a sight to behold. Many of the nobles were jealous of Lychbaen, but were too afraid of Zane’s military might. By the time he was 25, even the king was starting to be wary of the threat the force proposed. So they planned a ruse to get him killed. Zane was ordered to sail to Japan, to aid in the war, but in actuality they had sent a message to the Japanese saying that Zane had gone rogue and was planning to attack them.
The Japanese attacked Zane’s ship of the coast of Mahoushima. Lacking any form of skill in naval combat, the Werewolves were all but eradicated. It was only by the quick thinking of Zel, one of his lieutenants, that even twenty of them survived. Upon the shores of the island, the remains of the the Werewolves made a promise. They would avenge their fallen brothers or die trying.
Titles/Honorifics: The Black Wolf, Lord of the Werewolves, the King’s Dog (insult)
Age: 27
Origin: Albion, a small country similar to England, save for they remained under anglo-saxon feudal law. The country is ruled by King Charles the Third, and the country’s chief export is war. The noble houses earn vast wealth by aiding other countries in struggles, using the poor as their weapons.
Profession: Knight
Hobby: It might seem strange, but Zane finds training enjoyable enough to do it as his hobby. When his body is too fatigued to train, he hones his mind by exploring texts on warfare and similar documents.
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Strengths: Zane is an expert soldier, and a fierce fighter. Even those who hate him cannot refute his prowess in battle. In addition to this, he is an expert strategist, able to attain victory where others would only find death. He is loyal to the men under his command, and his unit, named the Werewolves, was regarded as one of the most elite fighting forces in the world.
Weaknesses: Though his skills on land are numerous, his ability is almost non-existent when it comes to the seas, getting seasick almost as soon as he sets foot on a ship. In addition, his academic ability lies solely in the art of warfare, making him weak on the political and diplomatic parts of his job. The loss of the Werewolves has also hit him hard, as he considered many of them equal to brothers. He is heavily reliant upon his guardian spirit, deferring more to its wisdom rather than his own.
Height: 5’9”
Weight: 124lbs
Build: Muscular but slender, relying on skill rather than strength to fight.
Hair: Black
Eyes: Red
Skin: Caucasian
Handedness: Right
Scars: His body is covered in scars, mainly around his face and arms. A couple of large gashes are across his left eye, as if someone had clawed at it.
Tattoos: An ornate picture of a fox and wolf is upon his back.
Basic Description: If men are like sheep, then Zane is a wolf who is forced to fight other wolves. The nobility despise him because he is of low birth and has risen. The poor hate him because he serves the king. Yet the soldiers love him, as he is an uncompromising leader, who would defy the king himself to save his men.
Visual Description:
Disabilities: Left Eye missing
Primary Outfit: black plate mail, with a helm designed to resemble a wolf’s head. He also has a cloak made of wolf fur upon his back.
Secondary Outfit: A pair of black breeches
Most Prized Possession (Material Value): His longsword, Black Regalia
Most Prized Possession (Emotional Value): A carved effigy of a fox, from his home town.
Likes: Fighting, Strong Opponents, Learning
Dislikes: Alcohol, Politicians, Nobility
Purpose: Zane and his Werewolves were sent to the east to aid the J, though this was a ruse to get him killed. After being shipwrecked of the coast of Mahoushima, Zane and his remaining men have but one goal. Avenge their fallen comrades.
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Relationship: Single
Family: Orphan, parents unknown, Darrack (sworn brother), Zamuri (sworn brother), Zel (sworn sister), the Werewolves (sworn brothers, mostly deceased)
Primary Weapon: [Black Regalia] – [Sword] – [A longsword made from the same dark metal as his armour. The hilt of his sword is coated in gold trim, and has a pattern similar to a couple of fighting.]
Secondary Weapon: [Morning Glory & Evening Splendour] – [Dual Blades] – [Morning Glory is a golden blade with sapphire ornamentation, and Evening Splendour is a silver blade with ruby ornamentation.]
Range: [Wolf Fang Crossbow] – [Gun] – [An ornate crossbow made from ivory and grey steel. It fires bolts, which have become more scarce in the era of the gun, as a flintlock rifle is easier to use and a bow is a more skilled weapon. Despite their rarity of ammo, the crossbow doesn’t require gunpowder which makes up for its lack of power.]
Guardian Spirit: [Ryteb] – [Fox] – [Fire] – [A cheeky spirit, one of the 22 guardian spirits that were in thrall to Alfred, the first king of Albion. Ryteb is known as a trickster who loves to play pranks on people, but has actually been protecting the Black Regalia for all that time.] – [Major Arcana- The Magician] – [The guardian is able to speak, and shares his vast knowledge with his host.]
Character Story: Zane was born into poverty, with not even a name to call his own. Barely a year after his birth, the local noble came through on an extensive ‘recruiting drive’, but the town refused, as they had suffered too many of these over the past year. Showing the absolute power of the nobility, his town was erased for the disobedience, and as a warning to anyone else who dared question the nobility.
The young child survived under the pile of corpses, the soldiers mistaking his slumbering form for a corpse. For a time, he survived off the corpses of the town, the soldiers of the noble having taken all other food. It was a testament to the young warrior’s luck, as well as his strength, that he managed to make it even to the age of five.
It is said that strife breeds growth, and no where was that more apparent than with Zane. Though he was but five, his body was of a youth of ten. It was then he attracted the attention of the wolves which roamed the forests around his homeland. Instead of fleeing, something inside made him challenge the wolves. The fight was without witness, but according to Zane it was the hardest he had ever faced. Were it again not for his luck, this would probably have been the end of this tale. As it was, Zane still lost his left eye in the encounter.
Fortunately for the sake of our story, Zane was rescued by the guardian spirit known as Ryteb. For these unknown woods housed a most precious treasure, the blade of King Alfred the Great himself – Black Regalia. Even though near 700 years had passed since its forging, the blade was still sharp, awaiting a warrior who could bring legend to the name. And after watching the child grow, Ryteb had decided that he should be the one to wield such a blade.
After scaring off the wolves, the fox appeared before Zane, and offered him protection in exchange for being his pupil. The child, graciously, accepted, and received his name.
Over the coming years, Ryteb didn’t just train Zane to be a mere soldier, but a Commander of men. The wolves who once threatened him were brought under his thrall, and made to be a staple of his Werewolves until the present day. By the time he was but fifteen, he already had a thousand men under his command. It was believed that he was going to rebel against the nobility and free the people. Then the opposite occurred.
Travelling to the capital, he swore fealty to the king, in exchange for lands and a title. He was named Lord of Lychbaen, a small village of no real value to the nobility. Via his training regime, and Ryteb’s knowledge, Lychbaen and the Werewolves became a sight to behold. Many of the nobles were jealous of Lychbaen, but were too afraid of Zane’s military might. By the time he was 25, even the king was starting to be wary of the threat the force proposed. So they planned a ruse to get him killed. Zane was ordered to sail to Japan, to aid in the war, but in actuality they had sent a message to the Japanese saying that Zane had gone rogue and was planning to attack them.
The Japanese attacked Zane’s ship of the coast of Mahoushima. Lacking any form of skill in naval combat, the Werewolves were all but eradicated. It was only by the quick thinking of Zel, one of his lieutenants, that even twenty of them survived. Upon the shores of the island, the remains of the the Werewolves made a promise. They would avenge their fallen brothers or die trying.
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Holy Soldier Divine Justice
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@Ryteb PymeroceI'm going to tell you right now rather than tell you to go back and make the corrections you missed that I'm more than likely not going to accept this character because his backstory is just too unbelievable. It's so unbelievable that you even write "luck" but then you don't make "luck" a passive ability. You even have him survive off corpses at a young age without taking into consideration any diseases or plagues. It's just too unbelievable even though this is a fictional game, it just fits that one thing I said not to do. The back story is even exasperating to read.
Mujida.
So, I was thinking of making sort of a government official character. Not quite a samurai, though historically the kind of person I have in mind would be one, but something along the lines of a magical cop?
I would like to ask what kind of weapon you would consider a Jitte to be. I figured that they were so strongly associated with law enforcement of the era that it would fit with the character concept.
Edit: Another thing, are guardian spirits used as weapons considered melee or ranged for purposes of the "one primary/secondary/ranged" thing or is that a case by case call?
I would personally put it in the sword catagory because it fits even less in the rest. Not to mention that most government officials during the edo period used to be samurai i think :)
Ryteb Pymeroce The Emerald Mage
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@Ryteb PymeroceI'm going to tell you right now rather than tell you to go back and make the corrections you missed that I'm more than likely not going to accept this character because his backstory is just too unbelievable. It's so unbelievable that you even write "luck" but then you don't make "luck" a passive ability. You even have him survive off corpses at a young age without taking into consideration any diseases or plagues. It's just too unbelievable even though this is a fictional game, it just fits that one thing I said not to do. The back story is even exasperating to read.
I guess I'll have to go back to square one, and redo the character completely. Sorry about the backstory, it's always been the part of the cs I struggle with most.
Name: Hasagawa Kenta
Titles/Honorifics:
Age: 19
Origin: Toi Chiheisen Island. Toi Chiheisen is an island located roughly 150 kilometers further into the ocean then Mahoushima. It's climate and living conditions are harsh. Fierce storms and heavy rains dominate the weather while high mountains cover the inland. Even though the living conditions are less then ideal, there is a small community of mainly fisherman and hunters.
Profession: Kenta is a fisherman just like his father, his neighbors and at least half the population.
Hobby: Kenta is a fairly skilled carpenter and maintains his families boats just for fun. He also likes to craft useful items from wood such as furniture and even shacks to live in.
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Strenghts: Kenta is a survivor. He was raised under tough living conditions on the desolate Toi Chiheisen Island. He knows how to craft items, put on fires during heavy rain, create shelter and live on what the wilderness has to offer. Though conditions breed tough men with strong determination and ingenuity.
Weaknesses: Growing up so far from propper society has his downsides. Kenta does not know how to read and write, he is who-fully unaware of proper etiquette and often will be perceived as blunt and disrespectful. Also Kenta lacks any formal martial training and is rather unskilled in the use of weapons for anything other then hunting.
Height: 1.75 meters
Weight: 75 kilogrammes.
Build: Kenta is in good physcical condition and fairly muscled due to daily routines of manual labor.
Hair: Kenta's hair is pitch black
Eyes: Dark green
Skin: Kenta's skin is tanned due to spending most of his days in an open boat at sea.
Handedness: Right handed.
Scars: None
Tattoos: None
Basic description: Kenta was raised in a small society with no formal hierarchy and customs that go along with it. He easily speaks his mind without tasting his words and is often perceived as uncivilized and blunt. Brutally honest and straight to the point, Kenta spares no feelings. Preferring to be clear rather then speak in riddles. He will tell the Emperor straight in his face that he's a cunt just as easily as the peasant from next door. Social classes are a foreign concept to Kenta. He simply does not see how birth right or wealth makes someone a better person.
Kenta was raised along strict moral value's of work hard and do not complain. His father would often tell that if you have time to complain about your own situation, you're not working hard enough to change it. Kenta strongly believes that all men have the power to shape their own destiny as long as they put their mind to it. This believe has shaped the young man into a fiercly determined but at times rather stubborn person. Failure is not an option and Kenta rather keeps trying than giving up.
For those who manage to get around this young man's rough edges will find a loyal, hardworking and dependable friend.
Visual Description: Kenta is of avarage hight and weight. His most remarkable features are his pitchblack spiky hair and tanned skin. He wears traditional peasant clothing made out of cotton. Those who look closer will notice that his clothes have been patched up numerous times.
Titles/Honorifics:
Age: 19
Origin: Toi Chiheisen Island. Toi Chiheisen is an island located roughly 150 kilometers further into the ocean then Mahoushima. It's climate and living conditions are harsh. Fierce storms and heavy rains dominate the weather while high mountains cover the inland. Even though the living conditions are less then ideal, there is a small community of mainly fisherman and hunters.
Profession: Kenta is a fisherman just like his father, his neighbors and at least half the population.
Hobby: Kenta is a fairly skilled carpenter and maintains his families boats just for fun. He also likes to craft useful items from wood such as furniture and even shacks to live in.
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Strenghts: Kenta is a survivor. He was raised under tough living conditions on the desolate Toi Chiheisen Island. He knows how to craft items, put on fires during heavy rain, create shelter and live on what the wilderness has to offer. Though conditions breed tough men with strong determination and ingenuity.
Weaknesses: Growing up so far from propper society has his downsides. Kenta does not know how to read and write, he is who-fully unaware of proper etiquette and often will be perceived as blunt and disrespectful. Also Kenta lacks any formal martial training and is rather unskilled in the use of weapons for anything other then hunting.
Height: 1.75 meters
Weight: 75 kilogrammes.
Build: Kenta is in good physcical condition and fairly muscled due to daily routines of manual labor.
Hair: Kenta's hair is pitch black
Eyes: Dark green
Skin: Kenta's skin is tanned due to spending most of his days in an open boat at sea.
Handedness: Right handed.
Scars: None
Tattoos: None
Basic description: Kenta was raised in a small society with no formal hierarchy and customs that go along with it. He easily speaks his mind without tasting his words and is often perceived as uncivilized and blunt. Brutally honest and straight to the point, Kenta spares no feelings. Preferring to be clear rather then speak in riddles. He will tell the Emperor straight in his face that he's a cunt just as easily as the peasant from next door. Social classes are a foreign concept to Kenta. He simply does not see how birth right or wealth makes someone a better person.
Kenta was raised along strict moral value's of work hard and do not complain. His father would often tell that if you have time to complain about your own situation, you're not working hard enough to change it. Kenta strongly believes that all men have the power to shape their own destiny as long as they put their mind to it. This believe has shaped the young man into a fiercly determined but at times rather stubborn person. Failure is not an option and Kenta rather keeps trying than giving up.
For those who manage to get around this young man's rough edges will find a loyal, hardworking and dependable friend.
Visual Description: Kenta is of avarage hight and weight. His most remarkable features are his pitchblack spiky hair and tanned skin. He wears traditional peasant clothing made out of cotton. Those who look closer will notice that his clothes have been patched up numerous times.
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