[Abandoned] Tylode Wil - Jedi Padawan

[BTDukes]

OoC

How long do you usually write?
Several paragraphs.
Do you enjoy writing collaborative posts for things like conversations, combat, etc.?
Yes.
Is grammar and depth of writing important to you?
Yes. Currently writing a fantasy epic.
Are there any writing subjects you particularly enjoy exploring?
Fantasy, cyberpunk, and dystopia settings. In regards to concepts, I typically incorporate contemporary worldly issues and psychology + philosophy concepts into my writings.
Is there anything you really dislike and want to avoid like the plague?
Boy meets girl; girl meets boy; traditional hero journeys; I prefer scarred, jaded, skeptical characters who get smacked with radical sidings from experiences rather than the go-to. The challenge is nice.
Is there something you are uncomfortable with happening to your character?
Nah, please challenge me.
Do you have any short-term or long-term goals with this character?
I would like to have them fall to the Dark Side, undergo Sith trials, become a Sith, and then undergo a path to redemption if possible. This wouldn't involve holding back punches. If they're scarred, they're mortally wounded with lifelong brands of failure and misguidance. I want to break the character as its known, rebuild them, break them again, and create a relatable legend.

Jedi Temple Public Records

Name: Tylode Wil
Species: Human
Homeworld: Coruscant
Age: 24
Gender: M
Rank: Padawan
Master: (please assign)
Former master(s): N/A
Apprentice(s): N/A

Jedi Temple Internal Records

_{Detailed appearance. Imagery insufficient.}

Tylode Wil was born with bags under his eyes, and worn milk skin. He is neither fit nor otherwise; Tylode stands at 5'8 with a broad, husky build. His brown beard keeps to the shape of his face with a ginger highlighted mustache that is shorter than the rest of his facial hair. His eyes are a deep blue with a gray ambiance, leaving others unsure of his intentions with a sense of on-edgeness. Tylode has thick, wavy long hair tied into a bun at the back of his head, all sides trimmed to a number two. The Padawn also sports stretched earlobes to a size 2 gauge, always plugged with blue kyber crystal tunnels, and has a tattoo sleeve on his right arm of depicting the Jedi oath.

_{Report on natural ability with the Force, as well as all known Force Techniques and the skill level.}

Tylode has an interesting connection with the force. He is proficient in tutaminis, curato salva, and altus sopor (focus & presence, energy absorption & channeling, biological control). Tutaminis is expressed by Tylode through his ability to hide his presence and maintain high levels of force focus. Curato salva is expressed through Tylode's ability to absorb incoming energy (force, pure energy/lightnight/laster) into physical bursts of strength, as well as the ability to channel energy to speed up biological regeneration at the cost of shortening his life span a little bit each time. Altus sopor is expressed naturally in his ability to control the other schools of knowledge for the force (Tutaminis + Curato salva), however is uniquely adapted by Tylode through allowing him to greatly enhance his own physiological senses and abilities. Such examples include being able to use "Dark Vision" to see naturally via infrared vision in dark environments (sacrificing attention to detail with blobs of heat), above-average bursts of strength & agility, and life-threatening bursts of strength & agility (due to using the force to tap into physiological limiters).

_{Report on skills not directly rooted in the Force, including level of skill}

Please see the above answer. Please consider the ability to control these based on Jedi level. As a padawan, Tylode would be able to utilize all abilities, at the expense of drastically draining him depending on how much he's trained in the ability. I.e., bursts of strength and agility are more easily trained than infrared vision--with the latter being more living to make him have trouble focusing after usage similar to a migraine-state.

_{Report on known combat experience, training and lightsaber training.}

Padawan level training.

_{Detailed notes on political influence and associates.}

Capitalist with heavy socialist leanings.

_{Detailed notes on known rivals and enemies, outside and within the Order and Republic.}

None. Tylode seeks enlightenment.

_{List and description of other known associates, including intimates.}

N/A aside from master and other known members of the order, and the republic.

_{List of all known ownerships, including vessels, (non-standard) equipment, and locations.}

Civilian transport vehicle on Corosant.

_{Psychological evaluation of Jedi Order member.}

Tylode is a skeptical person to a flaw. He constantly feels watched and evaluated, however has learned to accept all judgments passed and to seek improvement in his shortcomings. The padawan is naturally affiliated towards anxiousness and depression, making him more susceptible to the darkside of the force, yet he has somehow channeled that negativity into positive outlets such as refining his philosophical understandings of the jedi code and histories. Tylode is much so above average on charisma, but those who are close enough can see past the facade of confidence.

_{List and description of known and suspected flaws. To be put into restricted database.}

* Depression
* Anxiety
* Stocky, husky build = poor ability to do more refined/micro physical movements
* Self-doubt

_{known interests of the force-user.}

* Political progress
* Redemption of all
* Path to Mastership

_{Notes on skillset specialization, if applicable.}

Uses the Obi-wan fighting style.

_{Major achievements on record.}

N/A

_{Major failures on record. Confidential.}

N/A

Interview

_{Personal biography, as detailed by the candidate for use in Jedi archives. Acquired shortly after last achievement of note.}

Tylode was an orphan on Corosant, who at the age of 16 was taken into the Jedi order doing general volunteerism while undergoing common education. Tylode expected to find himself in the civillian services side of the order, but somehow passed his entry tests and found himself under the tutorship of a master Jedi. Although Tylode's childhood is relatively simple and straightforward, his personality and defining characteristics are not, and are the root of his lively troubles. It can be said his downfalls seasoned his simple life. Tylode's shortcomings are what lost him multiple jobs as a bar cook, made him resort to selling death sticks, and put him on the path of the jedi.

On his path for becoming a padawan, while in the academy readying for his tests, Tylode was definitely the oldest of his cohort. He began his journey at 21, and was reluctantly accepted to undergo the path of Jedi. After three years, Tylode was able to catch up and keep pace with natural-born affiliated force users at a typical pace of development. Tylode was the oldest "jedi youngling" and became one of the oldest padawans. His age has definitely set himself back, however he made sure he trained hard enough to ensure his acceptance by a jedi master/knight to be considered for padawanship.

[Sini]

Uses the Obi-wan fighting style.

I'd like you to use an era-specific term. Then there are these guides on Jedi Training and Life, and Lightsaber Combat. Both are strongly suggested reads.

I would furthermore want you to expand and elaborate on your fella's biography, also check typos.

[Ellri]

How's the sheet coming along, @BTDukes?

Do you need any help? Have you got any questions?