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Our Dark Star




It has been two thousand years since man began exploring space. Contact with the enemy came swiftly, and they attacked without provocation. They razed our solar system, plundered our resources and used a terrible weapon on our sun, draining the life, warmth and light from it. The enemy left us to our fate. The Ancestors built the cities beneath the earths crust, and here we remain until our star goes dark for good.


The Pillars

Mankind now dwells in subterranean cities and structures collectively called The Pillars. These are massive structures burrowed into the earth with thousands of floors. They are all roughly cylindrical in shape with a tangled spiderweb of connecting tunnels, railways and service lines. Energy is supplied by Pre-Descent Engines of unknown origin. They appear to require no source of fuel to maintain power. Engines that have run for millenia have been known to suddenly cease functioning. Salvaged Engines from abandoned Pillars can be coaxed back to life. Engineers specialize in learning about Pre-Descent technology like the Pillar Engines.The Pillars are scattered across the globe, relics of ancient government projects designed to save their citizens from the environmental effects of the darkening star-and our current home. Some are filled with societies-living and dying every day. Trade routes have been established, new farming techniques discovered. Alliances are formed and broken. War erupts.


Some of The Pillars are tombs for our Ancestors.Perhaps the Enemies weapons found them before they could seal the gates, or some sickness carried them to oblivion in the quiet darkness. Some say we should search these ruins for supplies, science or information. Others say we should seal them off and wait in solitiude until our star goes black.


Important Figures


Of the Greater Lands

King Nestor is the ruler of Pillar Neln He has an excellent reputation for honor and justice. His army is small, but well trained. His engineers are some of the most talented in the world. Nestor has a grudge against sorcerers since Sorcerer Varim Grin took the life of his eldest son. Sorcerers have been expelled from Pillar Neln until our sun goes dark.


Lord Oben Graz leader of the Royal Combine movement. Little is known about Graz, or if he even exists. Rumours persist that he is a great knight, or a sorcerer or both. Whoever he is, he is well protected and connected. The Royal Combine's resources seem to be unlimited.


Sir Kamahl Khan famed leader of the northern barbarians. Every few years his soldiers march south in War Machines and pillage as much loot as they can only to slip away into the ice flows and glaciers once more. He has good fighters and knows only one language:money.


Lord Prospero, high king of our hated enemies, Pillar Malka. Prospero rose to power through bloodshed, killing the former council with the aid of an unknown sorcerer and very probably the aid of Lord Oben Graz and the despicable Royal Combine. Prospero speaks openly on the Nets of his intent to destroy our city-even with the peace in place.


Of Pillar Dakhen:


Sir Izar Maxim is the commander of Pillar Dakhens small militia. Although Sir Maxim is a trained and well equipped knight, his militia is not. Maxim is the oldest knight remaining in Dakhen-He refused promotion for many years preferring to remain on the battlefield. The last war with Pillar Malka was particularly devestating to the knights ranks, and Maxim finally excepted command of the militia. He is loyal and adamant supporter of the Priesthood of Tallus.


Madame Larimar Vol is the President of Estate Power which supplies 25% of Pillar Dakhens energy needs from scavenged Pre-Descent Engine technology. Madame Vol is concerned only with the well being of her company and will (and has) cease to supply power to the city if her demands are not met. She has petitioned for a seat at the High Council and is rapidly gaining support among Dakhen's nobility.


Sir Ben Pella is a knight and High Guardian of the Priesthood of Tallus. Tallus the Merciful is the light of honor and justice in this dark World. Sir Pella has served at the Temple since he was a child, training knights and giving aid to the city and citizens when he can.[/b]


The Factions


Dakhen, our beloved city. Our power has wained in recent seasons and the citizens seek to restore that power. The kings war with Malka saw his ultimate destruction and the rise of the High Council as the true governing force in the city-(that's all of you!). The kings foolish war has cost our knighthood untold losses, this will have to be rebuilt. We rely too much on private enterprises (see Estate Power, Madame Vol). Our Engineers are underfunded and without direction. Our hydroponic farms need maintenance. Our people-teetering on the brink of becoming an unruly mob make public their demands. We should restore our city to greatness less chaos befall us all. Long live Pillar Dakhen!


The Priesthood of Tallus is a religious order of knights dedicated to ancient ideals of honor and justice. After the descent mankind cast aside these virtues in favor of greed and anger. A warrior known as Tallus is their diety. He is said to defend the weak and powerless against any foe. Tallus' tomb lies in the Temple of the same name. A dwindling cadre of knights defend this stronghold in Dakhen.


The Royal Combine is a fanatical social movement led by Lord Oben Graz. Probably the largest threat to Pillar Dakhen security at the moment. There military headquarters is unknown, but a large presence has surfaced in Pillar Dakhen in recent weeks. Information suggests they seek to restore a monarch to Dakhen, as they did in Pillar Malka some years ago. Royalists recruit from the dredges of society, but it would be a mistake to assume all of their fighters are peasants. Heavily armored knights have been spotted among their ranks during battle. The names of these knights are unknown to us, but a sufficient reward would surely entice some to reveal that information. Royalists carry a banner of crimson with a gold crown mounted on a sword emblazoned upon it.


Pillar MalkaOur bitter enemies. We have an uneasy peace-(more of a ceasefire really), with those scoundrels. Their king, Lord Prospero (if you can call him a Lord!) has made quite public his loathing of our form of government-and would take our city and our resources if given the chance.


Powers

The dying Sun has changed the realm of science and nature. Or maybe it was the weapons used by the Enemy- A certain percentage of the population finds themselves with the ability to manipulate energies. Telekinesis and telepathy are the most common. Simple thermodynamic manipulation is prevalent as well-. Others have increased speed, strength and intelligence. These individuals hold places of power in the societies beneath the mantle. They lead factions and governmental projects. They are the military officers and research specialists. They are the new nobility and social elite of the Pillars' society.


How to Play

In Our Dark Star you play a member of the ruling council of Pillar Dakhen, once one of the most influential and powerful cities in the world. Play consists of turns where the player will tell me what they do and say. Each turn is one season in game time (four seasons per turn). Any additional RP material is welcomed.(vignettes, social commentary, This is a cooperative turn-based RP set in the final centuries of our stars life. This is a soft science RP with a dark tone. Major themes include redemption and discovery, fading memory and the inevitability of the End. It will be at least a week before the character classes are finished.I'm aiming for one turn per-week. At the beginning of each turn I will post any important events, results of the players endeavours, inquiries and news. I'm looking for 4-6 players capable of maintaining casual writing standards.


The Classes

Classes are subject to change while I get this thing together-I'm building this thing from scratch so some early versions might not be the final product


Classes in Our Dark Star define the archetype of what your character is like. These should not be viewed as limitations. Each class has unique features and benefits. Characters can be male or female.




Knights are unmatched on the battlefield. They are the beloved heroes of the common Pillar citizen. They have the best weapons, armor and weapons technology. A knight has access to a War Machine like a Mech Unit, Aircraft or Battle Tank. These machines make knights almost invincible against even a moderate sized fighting force. A knights power increases by 2 when occupying a war machine.


Engineers use science and technology to their advantage. Engineers can traverse the Networks effortlessly, breaking codes and encrypting information.They search out and guard the secrets of the Ancestors. Engineers have access to a Workshop for constructing machines of their design.


Sorcerers investigate and harness the latent energies of the world. Sorcerers are shunned by the common citizens of the Pillars as dangers to the safety of the city. Some Pillars have banned sorcery outright. A Sorcerer has the added benefit of a codex and an underling. The underling acts as a servant capable of completing moderately complex tasks or things a sorcerer might not necessarily be able to get away with. When playing a sorcerer be sure to think about the character of your underling as you will be playing them as well. A codex is a book containing the arcane knowledge a sorcerer has gathered.


Nobles bring the benefit of wealth and industry to the party. Nobles are the financiers, investors and industry captains of the Pillars. They strike trade deals that build and topple cities. Nobles are in the public spotlight and make or break their fortunes under public scrutiny. Nobles have the added benefit of an independently owned industry of their choosing. This could be as controversial as weapons and chemical production or as simple and necessary as food goods or service. Choose a name for your industry as well. In addition, one favor may be called upon from an NPC of your choosing. This favor cannot be refused and will almost certainly succeed. Choose carefully.


The Stats


Assets measure the disposable wealth of your character. Basically the fruits of your labor. Assets are the result of your production. Spend assets like you would money. Each player starts with 5 assets. Assets accrue seasonaly.


Power How much force your character is capable of harnessing. For a knight this is a measurement of the physical ability or mechanical ability of your machine. For a sorcerer this measures the measure of your magic. etc.


Production Your potential income. In other words, how much your character is financially worth. Your production directly influences your Assets. Production is high for Nobles and low for Knights.


Influence Your pull with the major players. This measures how likely you are to convince a person/organization/government entity of your schemes. Increase this by appeasing the powers that be. Not to be confused with Charm, which is how the public views your character.


Charm Measures your popularity with the public at large. This is reflected in your appearance on the Nets and your conduct on the council. The common citizens of the Pillars are fickle and do not easily forget.










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It looks well-done and quite interesting, but I'm going to have to give a "maybe".
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It looks well-done and quite interesting, but I'm going to have to give a "maybe".


Thanks. Anything you want to know more about? I realize this is a departure from most RPs on the forum as it is a little more structured, but I wouldn't sacrifice storytelling for rules. If I gather enough interest I will post Factions like the Priesthood of Tallus, an order of Knights sworn to guard the city, and the Royal Combine, radicals hell-bent on restoring a mythological Monarchy to power (effectively killing the council you chair). Will also post a map of the city, the world, and the local orbit.
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This could be a lot of fun. I like the plot and background and the fact that we have to work together.
I'll be keeping and eye on this ;).
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{Just so you know, on the class stat sheet, you gave 11 total stat points to the noble class and 9 to all the other classes. For the sake of balance, I suggest you nerf one of the noble's stats. Also, what's a codex?}

Name: Magus Nilrem

Class: Sorcerer

Stats: Assets(5) Power(5) Production(3) Influence (1) Charm(0)

Class Notes: Nilrem's underling is called Deeds. Deeds has the look of a well-dressed, pre-decent butler. Opinion is divided on why Deeds decided to serve Nilrem, some say Deeds is just someone who is more tolerant of sorcerers than most people, others say that Deeds was abducted and brain washed by Nilrem, there's even a rumor that Nilrem used his control over the energies of the world to create Deeds from nothing. It's quite probable that only Deeds and Nilrem will be the only ones to know, due to the fact that any question about Deeds' origin asked to Deeds or Nilrem is met with nothing but a smile. Nilrem's codex contained so much arcane knowledge, that he had to use his powers to turn it from a book to an ethereal orb. Nilrem's ethereal codex follows Nilrem where ever he goes and sends the arcane knowledge Nilrem requests directly to his head. Magus Nilrem has no vault like other sorcerers. Instead, Nilrem uses his power will his possessions into existence when he needs them, and then Nilrem wills them out of existence when he no longer requires them for the time being.

Character Description: Magus Nilrem is widely considered the most powerful sorcerer ever to be brought to the public eye. He has accomplished feats of sorcery no one else has ever come close to achieving. This only makes him seem even more dangerous in the eyes of his peers and the general public. Nilrem however, has rarely ever used violent force, claiming that 'Those who dabble in decadent trivialities that are as petty as violence, do not deserve to call themselves sorcerers'. The desires and motives of Magus Nilrem (If any) are known only to the man himself. Nilrem was elected into the ruling council by the small sorcerer community to advise the council on matters of sorcery and to help put logic to the otherwise illogical. Very little is truly known about Nilrem, his history is built on a sea of rumors, gossip, and lies. What is known is that he spends most of his free time meditating to become one with the energies of the world, he has lived for over 150 years, but doesn't look a day over 80, and his views on how sorcerers should act have sparked the creation of a small religion among other sorcerers.
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Glad to see this finally getting some interest :).

@rush99999: I like your character already. A codex is simply a book where your arcane knowledge is stored. The complexity and vastness of arcane power is impossible to remember so a written record is a must. It would be unwise to lose your codex, as they are tied directly to your power. Some sorcerers have constructed vaults to store these prized possessions.

@agathon: Thanks! Please stay subscribed!
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Looks like I'll need to add a few more details to my class notes then.
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Should have factions and a map up by tomorrow...I would like to get a few more players interested before I start an OOC.
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Name: Sir William of Dahken
Class: Knight
Stats: Assets(5) Power( 3) Production(1) Influence(3) Charm(2 )
Class Notes: Sir William's war machine is a mech that is like no other, it is simply called The Judge, The Judge stands tall, taller than most other Mechs has a pure white coat of paint that is chipped and scorched. The head of the mech is like that of a medieval knight and the eyes glow green when being operated. It's armaments include a large two handed sword, missile pods in the shoulders, and automatics in the wrist that are made to deal with soft targets as well as counter any other mechs.

Character Description: Not much is know about Sir William's past within knighthood, but he rose to prominence, only a few years ago quickly establishing himself as knight of valor and honor. Sir William believes in honor and valor more than anything else and if one has none of those traits they aren't even worthy of being called a human being. He was brought forth into the ruling council to represent a small and secretive sect of knights called The Knights of Ruin. As said before few things are known about Sir William, some speculate that his true name isn't even William, some speculate that was was brainwashed by the Knights of Ruin and is used as their mouth piece and trained killer. What people do know about him however is that, in the battle against pillar Dharka, William killed, disabled, and destroyed more war machines and pilots. Than any other knight on the battlefield, and this is believed to be why he was put on the council. The council quickly realized that he was little gung ho and he often believes the simplest thing is the answer.
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You forgot to give influence a number.
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{Just so you know, on the class stat sheet, you gave 11 total stat points to the noble class and 9 to all the other classes. For the sake of balance, I suggest you nerf one of the noble's stats. }


Technically so do knights as they receive a +2 power bonus when they are occupying a war machine. (which I completely forgot about). As for the nobles, I figured they would be the least popular class, so I wanted them to have an edge. I will probably be revising the stats before we start. Thanks for the heads up!

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Name: Sir William of Dahken Class: KnightStats: Assets(5) Power( 3) Production(1) Influence(3) Charm(2 )Class Notes: Sir William's war machine is a mech that is like no other, it is simply called The Judge, The Judge stands tall, taller than most other Mechs has a pure white coat of paint that is chipped and scorched. The head of the mech is like that of a medieval knight and the eyes glow green when being operated. It's armaments include a large two handed sword, missile pods in the shoulders, and automatics in the wrist that are made to deal with soft targets as well as counter any other mechs. Character Description: Not much is know about Sir William's past within knighthood, but he raised to prominence, only a few years ago quickly establishing himself as knight of valor and honor. Sir William believes in honor and valor more than anything else and if one has none of those traits they aren't even worthy of being called a human being. He was brought for into the ruling council to represent a small group of knights who call themselves the Knights of the Round. The council quickly realized that he was little gung ho and he often believes the simplest thing is the answer.


Very nice Enalais, glad to have you on board. Count on spending at least one asset each year, for Mech maintenance. The knights of the round sound interesting, although the name is a bit too cliche for the world of Dark Star-consider attaching Sir William to the Priesthood of Tallus, a faction I mentioned in an earlier post. I would like to know how he rose to prominence among the knighthood. Pillar Dakhen participated in a small scale war with neighboring Pillar Malka a few seasons before our story starts. The war resulted in little material gain for Dakhen and cost the knighthood dearly. Maybe Sir William proved himself in action during the war. Think about it, I still have material to post regarding the world so everyone be prepared to edit your character sheets if need be.
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I added a little bit more, and changed the name of the group to the Knights of Ruin and made them a secretive group. If need be i can touch up on the Knights of Ruin a bit more.
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-added Important Figures
-added Factions

~almost done with the city map...
~thinking about dropping the engineer class, their skill set isn't that specialized and constructing machines would probably be better suited to an NPC faction anyways..
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Anyone still here?
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rush99999 said
Anyone still here?


Waiting for more interest..Doesn't seem to be materializing. Thanks for adding to your signature though!
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Hopping in on this.

Name: Lady Katherine Evangeline Greywind
Class: Noble
Stats: Assets( 5) Power(0) Production(5) Influence (4) Charm(2)

Class Notes: Katherine controls Dahken’s biosynth and genejack factories through her company Union Laborworks Complex, pre-Descent technology capable of creating obedient and loyal servants, slaves, workers, and soldiers through artificial human genetic manipulation and accelerated growth, all hard-coded loyal to her. While the morality of neo-slavery is questionable, its utility and necessity in every field of society and industry is undisputable. Raw labor is a valuable and scarce commodity in the age of the dying sun. Katherine also holds a absolute favor from a media mogul, who can manipulate public opinion how she wishes when she asks. How she came into such a absolute favor is something neither will discuss.

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A darkly elegant noblewoman who made her name in resurrecting Dahken’s dormant genejack lab-factories through recovery of ancient technology hidden in her family’s vaults and in expeditions into the ruined surface. Where House Greywind was a dying and penniless name, it was now an essential pillar of Dahken’s industry and economy because of its production of genejacks (sub-human brute laborers) and biosynths (complex artificial human servants), which act as valuable replacements for increasingly unreliable commoner and peon labor. While many disagree with Katherine’s practices of “neo-slavery” whether on grounds of morality or jealousy of the tight control she maintains over the gene-templates and facilities, Union Laborworks is practically the sole reason Dahken’s Council has any reliable large-scale supply of labor for large-scale projects and industry despite the increasing unrest among the commoners.

While prone to bouts of hedonism and self-indulgence of her assets (gladiator slave pits being her present hobby) as consequence of wealth and power, Katherine does recognize the perilous state Dahken is in, and has joined the Ruling Council to ensure it’s rebirth will be directed in ways she may profit from.
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Hopping in on this..


Nice character Skylar, glad to see you interested. Greywind will be a major force to contend with in Dakhen politics...
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