From what I know, SweetCin doesn't mind how many players she recieves. So I say, create a character for later evaluation to see if you'll be accepted. I say later because our GM is currently busy soo we are waiting as well.
But our Co-GM is Prince so he can look it over too.
*Thumbs up* Can't wait to see.
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Haha, it's okay guys.
And Thunder I read that and immediately thought:
Haha.
And Thunder I read that and immediately thought:
Haha.
scribz said
It's refreshing to see someone's work to go from decent to better as you go through the page. Much improvements on gesture and anatomy.
I could definitely tell the improvements in some of your work (assuming they were out of order). They look really good, keep up the good work. ^-^
Coming from a first time GM, I can tell you that creating a roleplay isn't easy. It's something you have to be really confident about, along with very, very organized. As a GM you have people depending on you to post consistently and lead them into a good roleplay- hm. . . Maybe I should start this over.
*Take Two*
Towards the first thing you stated, about having effort and various genres:
This is a natural thing with people- From the most Advanced writer to someone in the Free section: Everyone appreciates visuals. Something that catches the eye first will get them to stay just a little longer. That little bit longer might be what you need for them to read what you have to say. Aesthetics always catch people’s attention. If you have nothing but, straight walls of text, it'll more than likely send people scurrying away. (Hey, maybe not all, but definitely a lot.) If you have walls of text, put some in hiders, to give the *illusion* that it isn't as much as it seems.
Now, just because I say walls of text scare people off doesn't mean you necessarily can't add information. When you can show that you have a plan of where things are going to head in your roleplay, more people become interested. It's the whole, "Not too much information, but not too little information" ordeal. That I believe is pretty self explanatory.
Confidence is key! When I got my roleplay started, Pirate Age I was so nervous that it wouldn't do any good and that it would be ignored and brushed to the side, but with some encouragement from some friends, I managed to relax and not worry so much. I think I'm just rambling sorry.
Hmm, something that might help in your lack of roleplays might be to make friends. This is a community for everyone to enjoy writing. Go hangout in the Member Lounge and find some people that you may have things in common with. You could then a) see if they want to roleplay (and with a friend, you can easily tell each other if something is going on or if you want changes to be made, whereas telling a stranger could be kind of awkward) or even b) organize and plan a roleplay out together with that friend whether it be a 1x1 or Group. If it's a group, that's two good ideas being put together and more likely to get interests.
About the person who isn't responding: I've had that happen to me before. I say just let it go and try to find someone else.
Don't worry, you'll eventually find that one RPer that you're so compatible with, you guys can't contain all the ideas, hah.
Annd, yeah I hope my random gibberish helped a little bit. x.x'
*Thumbs up*
Good luck out there.
*Take Two*
Towards the first thing you stated, about having effort and various genres:
This is a natural thing with people- From the most Advanced writer to someone in the Free section: Everyone appreciates visuals. Something that catches the eye first will get them to stay just a little longer. That little bit longer might be what you need for them to read what you have to say. Aesthetics always catch people’s attention. If you have nothing but, straight walls of text, it'll more than likely send people scurrying away. (Hey, maybe not all, but definitely a lot.) If you have walls of text, put some in hiders, to give the *illusion* that it isn't as much as it seems.
Now, just because I say walls of text scare people off doesn't mean you necessarily can't add information. When you can show that you have a plan of where things are going to head in your roleplay, more people become interested. It's the whole, "Not too much information, but not too little information" ordeal. That I believe is pretty self explanatory.
Confidence is key! When I got my roleplay started, Pirate Age I was so nervous that it wouldn't do any good and that it would be ignored and brushed to the side, but with some encouragement from some friends, I managed to relax and not worry so much. I think I'm just rambling sorry.
Hmm, something that might help in your lack of roleplays might be to make friends. This is a community for everyone to enjoy writing. Go hangout in the Member Lounge and find some people that you may have things in common with. You could then a) see if they want to roleplay (and with a friend, you can easily tell each other if something is going on or if you want changes to be made, whereas telling a stranger could be kind of awkward) or even b) organize and plan a roleplay out together with that friend whether it be a 1x1 or Group. If it's a group, that's two good ideas being put together and more likely to get interests.
About the person who isn't responding: I've had that happen to me before. I say just let it go and try to find someone else.
Don't worry, you'll eventually find that one RPer that you're so compatible with, you guys can't contain all the ideas, hah.
Annd, yeah I hope my random gibberish helped a little bit. x.x'
*Thumbs up*
Good luck out there.
Prince said Maybe I'll do another one just for you, Aki. :P
Heh, flattered.
I don't mind you guys moving along and saying that they docked and were starting their exploration through the town.
*Add to the story*
*I do not mind*
And Winter, after my next post will be your cue to finally post! I appreciate your waiting.
*Add to the story*
*I do not mind*
And Winter, after my next post will be your cue to finally post! I appreciate your waiting.
The voyage was a quiet one at first, with the exception of Ray playing traveling tunes to fill the silence. Luro made some sort of declaration that he was joining, which meant they'd probably stay a little longer than originated- unless they just ended up staying for the whole tournament. "Well, if you go, hopefully you win the money. And you know, prove you're an epic fighter."
"Let us drink and be merry all grief to refrain ~
For we may or might never all meet here again~"
She sang along with Ray until the song was over and he stood up. She was sitting on the ledge over the main deck, and looking down at all of them. When he walked towards her, she hopped down. It looked important so she decided not to be so high up. She listened to him explain himself and merely nodded. He did swear an oath- though she only knew the bits and pieces as to why his mind was all over the place except with them. He swore a new oath and Runa saluted. "Well, as I told you once, I shall tell you again, it's good to have you on board. May we have many adventures together."
Luro spoke up again causing Runali to shake her head. "You mean to tell me all this time you didn't know my name? Luro your head is stuck in the clouds." The one eyed girl then saluted him for being in board with what Ray said. "Who said you guys were allowed to die any time soon?" Runali smirked and then turned back to the ledge she was on and got comfortable.
The trip to Utsukushī was a three day trip...
The crew did their normal activities while on the ship. The captain helped Nolan clean the kitchen and watched him cook dinner. She was interested in how he managed to be such an extravagant cook, so it didn't hurt to watch. Another day, she got Dani to show her the different maps she gathered from the trips. It was good to know what her crew enjoyed. It brought them all closer as a 'pirate family'. Of course, she sang songs with Ray and attempted his viola, and found it much more difficult than she thought. Instead of the nice music Ray made...she managed only certain notes that didn't sound like screeching animals. With Luro, Runali knew she couldn't drink with him. It would end up in her death or something. So she merely enjoyed the silence and the scenic view of the ocean with him- until she ended up falling asleep.
The third day rolled by and the captain decided to sit on the edge of the ship and go fishing. For awhile, there was nothing and Runali sat with a bored expression, occasionally even falling asleep.
It was silent for awhile.
When the captain woke again, the island came into view.
She abandoned her fishing post and whistled yo her crew. "Utsukushī, dead ahead!" She was on the main deck once more, waiting for everyone to gather. "So, I say we enjoy the town and see the tournaments. And if Luro joins, we have to cheer him on."
Ohh, I like that song! And a lot of their his other songs...
Hopefully she didn't mess up everything...?
Hopefully she didn't mess up everything...?
You should do it. Then link it here.
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