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The Prime Temple of Lezajskona

The domes, arch ways and engraved feathers of the temple dominate over the sprawl of urban towns and peasant houses where tool makers, bakers and artisans work in solitude from the public. Impressive in its size and stature, the temple is among the few structures that rise out from the sprawling fortress of a city that is Lezajskona; one could see the main castle from this temple, and see that the castle stands out like a mountain of stone and ramparts. Further out is the lake itself, sea-like in its vastness. Looking the other way is the great wall which surrounds it all, and the constant conflicting architecture built upon by thousands of years of consistent building by multiple dynasties dating back millennia of time.

The temple itself by comparison is quite new, being only six hundred years old. Yet it seems naturally part of this fortress city and its sprawl of roads, aqueducts and villas. The urban sprawl is to some level filthy, and densely populated; nearly a million people live in this fortress of a city, in completely stark contrast to the spread out countryside with its villages and occasional castle that marks the vast majority of Thernopolesian society.

A tan skinned, well groomed but wrinkly middle aged man in rainbow robes runs into the ornate archways of the temple, speeding past the tiled floors echoing his foot steps throughout the spacious chambers. Four heavily armored knights take notice, and proceed to march in his way before turning to the man’s direction, stopping in their places in a monolithic wall of polished steel.

“Halt. Who be you?” one of the knights, speaking from the thin horizontal slit in his helmet asks.

The man in the garish rainbow robes pushes off the hood with his hands, revealing a grey haired, stone face of a man with olive eyes and a rather thick nose. He stares at the knights for a second with some distress before stating “I be Arch Decider Baro Agy, you need move out of the way. Fates of your children depend on it.”

Three of the knights, wise in their ways step out of the way of Baro, but one of the knights stays in his place, and asks Baro “Why is it, that a honored man such as you wears the robe of a plain Decider?”

All Baro tells the knight, is “Business. Knights such as yourself need not know more.”

The last of the four knights, not wanting to waste the Arch Decider’s time further lumbers in his heavy, plated armor out of the way joining to the left side of chamber with his fellow left side assigned knight.

The big door is opened by a knight on the right side of the chamber, and as the door slowly cranked open Agy walked quietly through. Behind Agy, the large doors quickly closed shut, the slamming of the door echoing through the entry chamber.

The hallway leading to the main chamber slowly curves in on itself, leading to a small door that is locked. Baro gets out his social key, unlocks the much smaller door and enters the core of the temple; a surprisingly humble, candle lit wooden box of a room with a few holes leading up to the top of the temple for air. It is almost dungeon-like, despite the refined wood used and the quality of the table's craft. On top of the table is a hide, stained in wine juice due to not being washed recently.

Sitting on two of the stools are a short man, and a tall man. They, like Baro are of the Great Decider caste. Baro proceeds to take a seat at one of the stools around the circular table, and begins to converse.

"No one else here, correct?" Baro asks the other two Great Deciders, who look at Baro funny due to the peculiar robes he is wearing. Ignoring the oddity, the shorter of the two others simply states "Only us."

Seeing the obvious, Baro tells the other two "Good. I want to discuss something."

"Is it your fetish of wearing lesser robes?" the taller of two wryly asks Baro.

"It is not of fetishes, it is of the problem." Baro reiterates.

"Which problem?" the taller one asks.

"The king one."

The king one, the taller one thinks to himself for a bit. The taller one, like Baro has his suspicions of the king. Yet, he simply asks Baro "The king will pass, why worry?"

"He will run this city into the lake before he leaves the throne."

"Are you suggesting somehow removing king who was legitimately picked by the other twelve Great Deciders? Even with the wealth gotten from the Ezons?"

The question Baro received did not do much to deter Baro from his beliefs, if anything they affirmed them. In his self-righteous thought Baro tells the taller of the two other Great Deciers, "There is no legitimacy in bribery."

A awkward silence filled the room, but the taller of the two other Arch Deciders starts to tacitly see what Baro is going on about. The shorter one gets out a bottle of wine and simply states "Let us talk of less political things instead."
I think it's just one more person showing interest than the quota is fulfilled.

However even if not one person expresses interest by April 1st, I probably will go forward in making the RP since a 7/8 is still a high B anyhow.

I will spend efforts today [since it's 2 AM where I am] refining the shorter TL and outlining plot events along with detailing aspects of the [REDACTED].

I also pretty much should say that the GC's distribution of wealth is not as lopsided as it may seem- Sol is not really wealthier than the inner colonies and the outer colonies are only behind since they're still developing. The global aristocracy has no equivalent in current GC society, as capitalism as we know it tends to be practice at a local level on some worlds only. There is multiple powerful organizations, but they aren't corporate in nature. They'd be more like guilds than corporations.
Maintaining a interstellar empire would require a different way of handling logistics.

My theory is that instead of sending out one ship for a trip at a time, you have to keep a constant stream of ships "checking" on vassal systems. One ship every two months is sent off to the vassal star system to occupy it. Ships make return trips, and as one ship leaves the people subjugated would see another ship come by.

Of course that would mean A LOT of spaceships, but seeing how much material there is in space I have no doubt it could be pulled off. By having a constant line of ships going to a vassal star system would could maintain a interstellar empire of up to a couple dozen star systems.

And as for time and age… Well, there's hibernation, video games and simply changing people's perception of time combined with longer natural life spans. Or hell why even assume the humans haven't become mind uploaded immortal beings by than? I can think of tons of potential technologies used to make the issue of "time" moot for the travelers.

The people on the planets on the other hand, I have no clue. I don't think technology will constantly innovate rapidly, in fact I speculate it could stagnate in the interstellar age.

Kadaeux said
Stealth is impossible in space. Not difficult. Not challenging. Not an engineering problem. Impossible.http://www.projectrho.com/public_html/rocket/spacewardetect.phpSkip straight to "there ain't no stealth in space, do not pass Alpha Centauri, do not collect 200 Spacebucks." :p


Thankfully the sheer vastness of space, the inability to bend light and presumed advancements in intercepting projectile attacks means stealth isn't that necessary anyways.

Keep moving, keep firing, and always change direction seems to be the way you play the space game. Stop too long and the enemy gets the edge.

But I don't really know, I just speculate based on what arguments I hear and listen to those that sound most convincing.


Well this has not gone as hoped.
Empire since it don't matter who wins the civil war the elves will kill everyone in the end.
I edited the detailed history to make more sense of what happened in how the UGO overtook mars as the dominant power.

dreamshell said
And hey, where's the AI that's gained self-awareness?


They're in there, technological capabilities mentions that self aware AIs have been made, but generally it is seen as a crime to "give a machines a soul". Of course it still has happened, but the fate of the AIs generally involve either having them take a human identity through making them believe they are a mind uploaded human by altering their memories or euthanization.
dreamshell said
Well, I'm not crazy about the name 'World Governing Entity.' Something catchier like... "Unigov" (a colloquialism) or UGO (United Global Order), maybe? Whatever, small beans, I guess, but I can be a stickler about trivial nonsense. =PI'm a bit curious how a desolate, war-torn, resource-poor Earth would be able to come out the victor in a war against a technocratic, resource-rich Mars, save perhaps by a combo of some sort of "space race" scenario to claim the rest of what the Solar System has left to offer and just outright seizing Martian vassals and pillaging their goodies. Is that the way of things?I also fail to see why Mars would even bother with Earth during its own golden age, but as I don't see any mention of it in the truncated sheet, maybe you've dropped that.I'm wondering if the Grand Coalition would evolve into a less greedy-by-necessity society driven by desperate conquest and consumption and more of a market-based one that values trade and innovation, especially as humanity ventures beyond its home system and reaps the benefits of others.And hey, where's the AI that's gained self-awareness? Can't have a space opera without at least one. ;)Anyway, mostly dig it. Like 90-95% of it. ;)


UGO could work better.

The GC is pretty much evolving to what you said; they're in many ways by 2512 already like that. The interstellar civil war was pretty much a wake up call that colonies nee greater autonomy even if the GC still has the ideal of keeping all of mankind united [a venture far easier said than done].

As for the martian invasion part, yeah it probably wouldn't have been for resources. The motive is much more due to trying to stop earth from rebuilding and becoming a serious rival, something they failed to avert as they acted too late. What they didn't take into account was the consolidating of large blocs that formed in the wake of the mass death that actually did a pretty good job at rebuilding things enough to launch spaceships to the moon and spread out from there. The invasion caused the formation of the UGO, which probably would engage in what you said against mars through the later parts of the 23rd century.

Though the big winning factor for the UGO would have to be the invention of the jump drive, which after a mere few years of having made the UGO rapidly dominate the solar system. By the time mars made their own jump drive ship, the UGO already was setting up interstellar colonies. Eventually mars just assimilated into the GC, which only happened in the year 2357.
I wonder if anyone noticed the years on the two Tls I have contradict each other.
You asked for it:



However the final OP I intend to use this due to being much shorter and more to the point:



Probably not as insanely long as some history sheets go [just check out the wikipedia's human history sheet].

I intentionally left out a lot of names so that the historical figures can be made up by people.
Zaikaze said
So I'm guessing there's no magic since it's sci-fi? I'd assume there'd be advanced technology. Do you have any specific ideas in mind as to the limits/general outline of the tech, or would we sort of just make it up as we go along?


No magic since I don't see much reason for it; the advanced technology I feel already fits most the niches magic has to offer. After all, how different is a mage who shoots lightning that much different from a electrolaser?

Here's the technological capabilities sheet for humans/the grand coalition:



Feel free to suggest any technologies you feel would be logical for the GC to have but is lacking from here.

The specific technologies, like spaceship types, toys, weapons, luxury vehicles and so on are open to be made up as we go along.

As you could imagine, the aliens are going to be more advanced than what i've shown.

I have a couple other sheets for outlining Grand Coalition society and a short timeline. I also had a history sheet but was advised against using it due to having too many irrelevant events.
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