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(Mallion)


He couldn't believe it, his eyes in tears, the smell of blood lingers in the air as he waits for the Ferris wheel to let him off, he's at the very top right now. All that remains is his dad's left shoe.

He's been looking forward to this day for about a month now, he was going to go to the smallest but the best theme park in Taryn with his father. His mindset was always negative towards his father after the death of his mother. "Why couldn't you protect her? Why are you such a weak man? Why couldn't it have been you?" He asks his father frequently. When he asks these questions he always ends up sobbing along with his father, he knows Mallion doesn't mean to be rude. She didn't deserve that, it wasn't right.

As they fly to the theme park in their cherry red convertible (roof on) hovercraft, with the green sun illuminating the grey road, a rain drop hits the windshield, then another, then another. Mallion has always loved the rain, but his father has always hated it. They were opposites; he glows, he doesn't. He has wings, he doesn't. He likes Taryn, he misses Earth. He loves the dark weather, he loves the bright weather. He likes men, he likes women. The one thing they have in common is sadness and sorrow for their mother. The shadows of the raindrops on the windshield cast upon Mallions face as he smiles. He reads aloud off a sign above the theme park "Enoth" Mallion's dad pats his sons shoulder and they step out of the hovercraft.

Several hours of laughs and joy pass and there's only one ride left to enjoy. "Mallion, it's getting late, we need to eat dinner." Mallion scrunched his eyebrows down and pointed at the Ferris wheel. "Okay but after this we have to leave." Mallion laughed full of excitement as they got in line for the ride. The sun has gone down so now the theme park's lights were the only source of light they had along with Mallions glow. A red light ran across Mallion's hair and wings, then a green light ran across his father's hair as they struggled to get in the cart due to the wings, but they finally managed to get them in. They started to go up and his father started to breathe heavily. "I didn't know you were afraid of heights dad." He didn't reply, instead he just grasped tightly on the cart's blue cage walls. "It's almost over dad just calm down." They reached the very top of the Ferris wheel and stopped so that more people could get on at the bottom. "Hurry up!" His dad yells frightened. "Dad calm down!" As Mallion said that, two hands appeared on his dad's shoulders. Mallion's face turned from angry to frightened and he became pale. "Get your hands off me Mallion!" The hands then started to pull on his dad, trying to pull him through the bars of the cart. Mallion grabbed his dad's arms trying to pull him free of the hand's grasps, but wasn't strong enough. Mallion watched as his dad was folded in half, bones breaking, and pulled out of the cage. "Dad!" Mallion burst out crying, gasping for air. The theme parks lights turned off and the sound of screaming erupted down below. Mallion tugged on the door of the cart as hard as he could but it wouldn't budge, he ducked in the middle of the cart in a fetal position, wishing he could hide his glow.

He couldn't believe it, his eyes in tears, the smell of blood lingers in the air as he waits for the Ferris wheel to let him off, he's at the very top right now. All that remains is his dad's left shoe.
Okay I guess we can start now, I'll work on the 1st post. If anyone else wants to join they can, we can mix people into the story.
Charles woke up to the sight of black boots, most of it cuffed with grey fur. He jumped back hitting his head on the concrete ground and feeling the bruises on his back from people stepping over him. "Oh my lawwwd" He says as he stares dizzily at the Hispanic teen in front of him. "Did you say somethinnnng?" He asks in a sort of drunken way.
LokiLeo789 said
Ya you are right, these must be some strong zombies if they took down and army that nearly a millennium years advanced.


Guess we will see c;
Charles rolled up to the party in his cherry red convertible, blasting out Nicki Minaj music. He took out the keys and hopped over the car door, ready to party.

He smelled something awful, almost like skunk and common barf. "Good lord what in gods name god fuck damn shit hell is that smell?" He just shrugged it off as roadkill and speedily walked towards the front door, covering his mouth, but harshly fainted face first on the door.
LokiLeo789 said
I don't mind starting with some one, or starting alone. I think it would build a better story if we found each other, than just plopping down with the whole group.Also will there be roles each person in the group play for example the Leader role( I'm assuming we will have a leader because, you know "This isn't a democracy" type thing), stuff like that.


True.

I think the "politics" can wait for the IC, we don't really know how the characters will react with each other yet
Scarifar said
I've been doing a bit of research, and I think there's a bit of a flaw here. Taryn is 2 days away from Earth using 100 mph tech, which I assume stands for mile per hour. In other words, it is 4800 miles away. The distance from the Moon to Earth is 238,900 miles, and their gravity already affects each other well enough. If something as large as a planet is to be that close to another planet, their gravitational pulls would be affecting each other immensely. In other words, they're too close for this to be scientifically possible.


Very True, I'll fix that.
Lemons said
I feel like Solana and ArĂ­a are going to get along...uh...interestingly.


Well maybe you guys can gossip about people and how much you hate working with people, then become hateful friends xD Theory crafting

How should the story start, should we all start spread out then just find eachother, or do some of you want to start with someone?
Dat double post
Revans Exile said
Name: SolanaAppearance: http://www.cosplayhouse.com/images/D/Lineage-Cosplay-Female-Elf-Cosplay-Wig-Version-01_img.jpgAge: 300Starting Weapon and/or Abilities: & Pros:Assassin: Spent 100 years training to be an assassin & spent the last 200 years as an assassin.Stealth: A huge part of her job is to get in, do the job, and get out without being seen.Poison crafting: Sometimes her job requires her to make it look like someone died by natural means.Seduction & Conartistry: Anything to get the job done.Cons: Vanity, ArroganceBack Story: The first contact with the Elvhen was not friendly by any means. Humans were the first to discover the Elvhen planet of Elvhenan. The Elvhen were isolationists and took the trespassing very seriously. The warriors, the assassins, & the wizards attacked in mass slaughtering the humans. That night Elvhen died on human flesh and drank their blood and over the next few days found uses for their bones. The ship that the humans left behind was studied, dismantled, & reassembled time and again. Eventually humans came looking for their lost compatriots and again were slaughtered. Eventually a human had the intelligence to ask for permission to land and begin open dialogue. Peace was achieved, the bones of the deceased humans were returned. The ships used by the humans to invade were kept by the Elvhen.Several centuries pass, many more races make first contact. Almost all end in bloodshed due to their arrogant belief they could land without permission. Eventually word spread if you wanted to land on Elvhenan and survive you must ask for permission first.The Elvhen would never become traditional members of galactic society; they would always choose isolation over pretty much everything. It used to be the warriors, the assassins, & the wizards were all charged with protecting the entirety of Elvhenan. Then it became apparent that some threats needed to be taken care of before they could ever reach Elvhenan. The assassins left Elvhenan to deal with such threats.Solana was born on one of the ships they acquired from invaders. She has never seen Elvhenan except for pictures. Upon completion of her training she set out on her own, teaming up with other Elvhenan assassins as needed. To ensure her missions would always go in her favor she did whatever needed to be done. On one mission she sabotaged the power station for an entire country; it allowed her to bypass all electronic security measures and make sneaking around far easier. She was successful in eliminating her target and acquiring a far more advanced ship, but the sabotage caused a virus to be unleashed that ravaged the country killing ninety-nine percent of its population.Race Info: Lifespan: 1000+ yearsGender: Only one in a thousand are born male, which is cause for a great celebration followed by its sacrifice to their Goddess.Appearance: They are extremely beautiful. The average height is seven feet tall. The shortest height ever recorded was six and a half feet. The tallest height ever recorded was nine feet, she died very young.Community: Everyone in the community is all one big family. When one member of the community dies everyone mourns. They live in harmony with nature. They only kill what they need to survive be it plant or animal. Their shelter is a naturally grown plant that they gently manipulate to form whatever building is needed.Physicality: They are physically weaker than most species but they have twice the stamina.Desirability: The Elvhen are highly sought after as sexual partners. Rarely do the Elvhen agree to bed another species, do to most species inability to keep up.Sustenance: They are capable of digesting pretty much any known organic substance. Garlic is a delicacy that they would do pretty much anything for. They do not let anything go to waste if they can help it, including blood, it is used to make sauces, glazes, wines, or drank raw. Sometimes they even bathe in the blood.Other Info: She has absolutely no desire to copulate with anyone ever.


Interesting, gonna be a cool addition to the story. Approved.
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