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Bleach: A New Dawn

Zane620 said
Looks good, but not sure on the Shikai ability. Can she use it multiple times in a row?

Hmmm....well if you're asking if she can stack a forced on another forced to further exceed the original forced duration then no. Only one forced use per a Shikai move and once that runs out, it cannot be used for that move until the original move is used again.

Bleach: A New Dawn

With the final touches, my new char is now complete so whenever someone has time then I need that deducing(Sounds a little bit "Dafuq did I just say" after posting it but hey what the hell) XD

Kareta Rōzumarī

Name: Kareta Rōzumarī( Withered Rosemary in Japanese)

Age: 257

Race: Shingami

Rank: Unseated

Spiritual Energy Color: Yellow with a little bit of orange within the center.

Personality: Will reveal in Rp

History: Kareta was born into District 43 where she was trained in hopes of becoming a Shinigami. Her Father, Minutar Eskalend Rōzumarī, was once an esteemed Shinigami but suffered irreparable injuries during a mission which was none other than suicidal. When she was younger, he had always told her the story over and over again, determined to have it forever engraved in her mind. He did this so that the story she could passed it onto her children in the future. Minutar always started the story with:

"A long time ago, when your old man was still fighting to protect the world as we know it, I went on an assignment. I had my two most trusted companions with me, they were known as, Asutaru Tenimo & Bakrue(The "e" is silent) Tylune. We were outnumbered by tons of Hollows and somehow we manage to prevail against them. Oops, it seems that I skipped past part of the story so let me continue from where skipped from. Ok, I was part of Squad eight as the eight seat while Asu and Bakrue were the seventh and fourth seats of some other squad. I was sent to assist a growing problem in district 178 when I first met those two. I came with some higher-ups to assist and what we saw was something unexpected. They were a bunch of Arrancars attempting to abduct not normal civilians but our own Shinigami. One in particular made the other Arrancar feel less than ants in comparison." Minutar always stopped when things were getting good before saying "Until next time, Kareta."

Her mother had died a couple years after giving birth, 5 years to be exact. People said she was a good woman while her father said that she was off on a long journey. Kareta didn't bother figuring out which was true because she didn't even know the lady. Much was needed to be done and she wasn't sure about becoming a Shinigami but since her father was so fixated on it; she didn't mind working toward his dream at least until she found one of her own. Minutar made her go through the most extreme training missions in order to prep her for Shino Academy. First was the countless hours she spent fighting her father until a winner was decided.

Kareta wielded of course non other then a wooden sword with Minutar on the other hand, wielding his Zanpakuto. The fact that he was using a sword put her at a grave disadvantage and her objective was to last ten minutes against him. First glance would look as though it was a test of skill but once the fight began, it was more so a test of durability and evasion. She was eight or eighty-four(Human years) when the training first took place, a gifted child really, even without her father's intensive training. She failed the test over and over, suffering serious slashes, cuts along the way until five months later...

"You've gotten real close to victory but...it's over." Minutar said proudly, bringing down his Zanpakuto to split her blade in two. Instead of attempting to dodge the slash, Kareta swung her wooden sword accompanied with something extra in the direction of her father's blade. The wooden blade was backed by the girl's own spiritual pressure and for a mere moment, the two swords clashed. Seconds later and the Zanpakuto had begun to pierce through the Wood and eventually made its way through her right shoulder as well. Minutar wasn't one to take things easy on people, even if that person was indeed her daughter. After she was patched up, he congratulated her on passing even though she only managed to survived a little longer than eight minutes. Later on that day, he continued on with his story and like always, he started with saying:

"A long time ago, when your old man was still fighting to protect the world as we know it, I went on an assignment. I was sent to assist a growing problem in district 178 when I first met my two trusted allies. I came with some higher-ups to assist and what we saw was something unexpected. They were a bunch of Arrancars attempting to abduct not normal civilians but our own Shinigami. One of the other Arrancar in particular made the other Hollows feel less than ants in comparison. Oops, it seems that I went back to part of the story so let me continue from where I left off from. My superiors began jumping into the fray while they tasked me with saving the other Shingami before they could retreat with them. I wasn't really fond of helping someone from another division because uhhh....you know. Well if I haven't told you already, squads don't get along with each other. Despite that, we're all loyal to the Captain commander which is pretty weird right? I guess you'll have to just wait until you're old enough so you can know understand why, it's just a squad thing." Minutar said while changing his daughter's bandages into some fresh ones.

"Ok since you have a tiny bit of why we dislike like each other, I can finally get back to my personal story. I lowered my Reiatsu and tried to stay low until I saw my chance to sneak over there. When the time came, I made my move and I was this close to reaching their knocked out bodies before one opened a Garganta right in front of me. More specifically, the one that made the others feel like nothing was the one. A Garganta is a portal so when I say Garganta, imagine me basically saying portal. So once the Garganta opened, the Arrancar began tossing the captives inside it before turning to me. You know your old man couldn't just stand there while it made me look weak and stuff. I pulled out my Zanpakuto and prepared to swing when it just smacked the entire blade off of my hilt before it waited to see what I would do in response. To be honest, I didn't know what to do exactly. If it could get rid of my Zanpakuto so easily then there was nothing i could do." Like always he stopped before saying "Until next time Kareta."

Over the next year, Kareta was being fed more knowledge on the world while her physical training was lessened in order to get her mind on the right track. She was a pretty quick learned but she must've inherited that trait from her mother's side of the family. Not saying Minutar was stupid and in fact he was pretty smart but she had something extraordinary about her. By the time she turned ten or 100(In human years), her father made her take the Shino entrance exam test in which she passed with a decent grade. After successfully passing, she was then given two Zanpakuto and Kareta' new training would soon begin.

Her instructors taught her all kinds of things one wouldn't most likely know without attending the Academy. Starting off with the basic fighting forms, Zanjutsu, Kido, Hoho and Hakuda with Zanjutsu being the easiest for her to catch onto. Over time, Kareta excelled everyone in her class except for two individuals with one of them she challenged to a spar. The fight seemingly lasted for awhile, much to her surprise, she was apparently losing to this individual. The individual was in their teen years, already year three within the Academy so she was thirteen or 130(In human years).



"Let's continue...shall we?" The individual wore many bandages and fought as if it wasn't hindering him in the least. The bandaged warrior proceeded to swing his left Zanpakuto at her side which she blocked with her left before he attacked with his right in which she met it with her right. Kareta was already at her maximum while the male didn't even seem to be trying. She pushed off of the teen's swords and then shunpoed behind him, appearing with a slash directed at his right shoulder right after. Bandaged warrior quickly spun in a 180 and raised one of his Zanpakuto to defend against in response. Kareta attempted to drive her spare Zanpakto into Bandage boy's midsection, causing him to toss his spare sword up into the sky. He rose the recently freed hand in front of the oncoming sword, piercing his palm deeply. She forced it in more which made the Zanpakuto come out on the other end of the bandaged man's hand before starting to forcibly enter his abdomen.

- Aftermath(TBA) -

- Dark Destinies(TBA) -

- ????(TBA) -

Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Mayonaka & Yakubyō( Midnight & Pestilence in English)

Type: Corrosion & Heal

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Those who heal and those that destroy, come together and please don't annoy.

Spirit Appearance: Mayonaka

Yakubyo

Combined form Appearance:

Inner world:

Sealed appearance: Mayonaka

Yakubyo

Shikai appearance: Mayonaka: Same as sealed form but with the exception of tiny holes that are close to the size of pores on humans. Yakubyo: Same as sealed form but with the except of tiny holes that are close to the size of pores on humans. Combined form:

Bankai appearance(Both Zanpakuto and physical appearance):????

Shikai Skills: Natural ability, Forced: Kareta can make some of her moves continue past a certain limit even after the duration time is up by saying or thinking "Hirogaru"(Meaning extend in English). The extended amount varies depending on the move and all forced moves will have a longer cooldown time.

1: (C)Mitsudo no Kaizan(Tampering with Density in English): The user envelops their weapon in static like black and white spiritual energy after first saying Kaizan suru(Tamper) to initiate the move. As long as this move is active, making contact with any solid reduces the density of that solid for a period before it is restored back to its original state. The density of any solid will always be lowered by 1/5th of it's original density, no matter the density. Last 8 posts, cooldown 9 posts. Can be cancelled at will.

Density depletion levels:
0-3(Takes 3 turns to revert back to original density)
3-5(Takes five turn to revert back to original density. Solid can be easily shattered.)

2: (H)Kurenjingu en(Cleansing circle in English): The user raises their Zanpakuto upwards so that it would be directly in front them but upside down. After that, the user focuses their Reiatsu into the weapon, causing a mystical pink circle to appear on the ground below her that begins glowing a radiant light soon after. During this time, all things within the circle are cleansed of anything considered toxic to the body for a period of time. Lasts 2 post - 3 if forced. Cooldown 4 post, 8 if forced. The user can expand the circle to accommodate others but then the cooldown is extended by +2.

3: 50% Reiatsu Release: Unlike many Shinigami, she wears a black seal tattoo located on her right palm that restricts the amount of Reiatsu she can use. This was placed on her after witnessing the manic like nature and the serious amount of destruction she causes without it. Still a selective amount of spiritual pressure can be released by either saying the phrase Dizorubu or thinking it while in a calm controlled state. Despite that, Kareta can forcefully unlock the selective amount but the defensive part of the seal will activate in response to not being unlocked correctly. Over the course of seven turns, several markings will appear on the seal, attempting to seal up the majority of her Reiatsu. Lasts 5 turns, forced version lasts until the seals finally restrain the user which could be between from 1 - ???. Cooldown 5 + amount of seals currently activated to forcefully cancel.
Mark Levels:
1: The First mark Inu which means dog in Japanese, this is the first warning mark before the real marks appear.

2: The second warning mark Nintai which means patience in Japanese. When this appears it'll begin to send a burning throughout the host's body.

3: The third and final mark Kesshō which means Final in Japanese. When this appears it'll begin to increase the severity of the burning sensation from the previous one.

4: The first sealing mark Tatsu which means Sever in Japanese. When this appears it'll attempt to seal up the host's Reiatsu but next mark activates when this fails.

5: The second sealing mark Shīru 2 which means seal two in Japanese. When this appears, it attempts to seal up the host's Reiatsu with a more efficient seal but next mark activates when this fails.

6:The third sealing mark Chikara which means force in Japanese. When this appears, replicates original seal on other palm and attempts to seal up the host's Reiatsu with a more aggressive seal that starts to make the the host's bones squeak in pain. This has a higher chance of working then the other but next mark activates when mark fails.

7: The fourth sealing mark Zetsubō which means desperation in Japanese. When this appears, the original seal appears on multiple parts of the body and seals up the majority of the host's Reiatsu but in very rare cases activates next seal if fails.

8(Bankai only): The fifth sealing mark Kyōakuna which means atrocious in Japanese. When this appears, the host is wrapped up in numerous bandages mummy style that restrains the user as the color of the bandages slowly become dark grey. One they become dark grey fully, they are sucked into the seals with the host left in a death simulated state for a few moments. As probably suspected, this restraint is deadly and can cause death but that is uncommon among individuals.

4: Mayonaka No Yakubyō(Midnight Pestilence in English): Only in Shikai state or higher can the user merge both Zanpakutos's together to create an entirely different sword all together. While in the combined state, the cooldowns for all moves are reduced by one(Except for Mayonaka No Yakubyo exclusive skills) Lasts 5 posts, forced 9 posts. Cooldown seven while Shikai is temporary unusable until then.
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Bankai skills:
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Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu: Hozuri, Shitonegaeshi
Kido:1- 39
Hakuda: Tessho, Super Harisen Slipper
Hoho:Shunpo
Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:

(C) Means Corrosion type
(H) Means Heal type
(C & H) or (H & C) Means both.

Bleach: A New Dawn

Jangel13 said
Angelo groaned softly at him "okay stop talking or I'll actually give you to them, your seriously annoying me" he then turned to the woman "I'll make this really simple for you, most of you will die here if you choose to continue down this path. If you really want to fight me then don't you dare hold back or your going to regret it." He said waiting for their attack knowing his zanoacto was the defense type it would be in his best interest to wait for their attack and redirect it back

"Like I haven't heard that before and that's my job. My life wouldn't be worth anything if I wasn't the soul of the party, isn't that right everyone?" Myzurik said jokingly, looking at the woman for an agreement response who apparently seemed to have ignored it completely. "All we want is the man, nothing else but it seems as if you won't hand him over so easily. Whether we die or prevail today which we will, that's up to me make that decision. And like I told, no battle is won without suffering a few casualties. Eliminate..." The woman spoke so lightly as if she knew for sure that the end result was already decided. Hundreds of men poured in from what looked to be every angle in an attempt to take care of the target assigned to them. Starting with the ground forces first, they went in recklessly, swinging their blades in the direction of them man's Zanpakuto to keep him occupied. Second was the long range fighters, loading up their Reishi enhanced arrows for a devastating rain of destruction while the third moved in to assist the ground forces. Unlike the ground forces though they moved in close but stayed hidden, knowing that the others would shroud their arrival until the time was ripe.

Bleach: A New Dawn

Jangel13 said
Angelo turned slightly to see who was talking and said "if your after this guy you must not have anything better to do" Angelo sighed loudly then turned to his target "don't die on me, id rather not fail this mission." He said simply pulling out his sword and he called out "suffering strengthen my resolve!" then he stabbed the sheath and his sword turned into a double bladed spear as he turned to the person talking "leave and I might not have to kill you or your friends" He told him knowing that this was the ambush that he was feeling. He knew that if this guy had to hide himself that their were people after him and them trying to surround me in a clearing was an obvious move, however it does mean that they will be in one place and that Angelo could immediately confront them and then be done with it making it a smooth journey to the captain

"....yeah, you're right but he's quite the prize ya'know. I can't say the same for you though...now leave before that is no longer an option." A woman with a light and gentle voice alerted while pulling out a hidden dagger from her pocket. Myzurik turned to Angelo with a small grin before separating both of the cuffs from each other with ease. "Don't die on you? Do you even know who you're talking about? If I was that fragile, then I would've been dead ages ago. Oh and you shouldn't use unconventional objects like that anymore, those are human restraints. It almost makes me think that you thought little of me this whole time, and I was starting to like you too." The blue haired man chuckled, moving closer to his bodyguard for protection from the mysterious assailants. "Oooh, an unsealed Zanpakuto, haven't seen one of those in a while. Hahahaha, you really don't get out much do you kid? In nearly every battle, there are bound to be casualties but how one goes about it determines the severity of them. So how will you go about yours?" The woman pulled out second dagger, triggering her surrounding forces to unsheathe their weapons of choice as well. Yet none of them strayed from keeping hidden until someone gave the order to kill...

The leader, Celeste

Bleach: A New Dawn

Jangel13 said
Yet your still talking" Angelo sighed softly moving slightly faster with his target wanting to just be rid of him already "pawn, knight, rook, bishop, queen, and king. They are all simply pieces of a chess board it is how they are used that determines their usefulness. Couldn't care less what I do it what I am as long as it helps the seretai I'll be happy" Angelo said simply since his zanpacto was a defense type that used his own pain in his enemy he would handle it all if it meant the seretai would be safe. He will work as hard as possible to keep it that way, he kept walking with his target glad he could see the gate to the seretai in the distance but not letting his guard down still

"Well as the accused prisoner, it would be wrong for me to keep shut. Your job is to take me in and my job is to annoy you until I can prove my innocence which seems fair to me. And no, you're simply incorrect on that one you see. The king and queen is the two most treasured pieces because you only get one of each while one equals game over if lost. Everything else has more than two of its kind on the board while the pawn is the highest in numbers, making them expendable for the most part. However, only in some cases are they heavily depended upon but that's usually when the game is nearing its end. It might be a simple game to the inexperienced but those who understand the game truly and use the pieces to the maximum effectiveness, are the ones who become..." A mysterious presence could be felt coming from behind, cutting off the man's speech. "I...no we have found you...once we are through with having you reveal his location, we'll eradicate your very existence." Soon multiple unknown spiritual pressures could be sensed moving around in an attempt to fully surround the two, with the one speaking standing a couple feet from behind.

Bleach: A New Dawn

Jangel13 said
didn't need to ask your name cause it was already given" Angelo said before he kept walking forward Angelo knew their was going to be a catch to how easy this was and Angelo just kept walking but decided that as long as he remembered his training and kept alert he could get to the seretai where whoever or whatever is giving him an uneasy feeling wouldn't be able to stop them once they were inside. "whoever you are you had better be damned important" he said simply as he kept walking with myzurik he was trained to be silent and he knew what it took to be silent and he needed to make sure they stayed that way until he could do the handoff and be rid of him

"Already given you say? And to whom do I have to give the pleasure of revealing such classified information to an underling? None the matter, there's no point in crying over spilled tea unless...it was your last cup of course." Myzurik said jokingly while forcefully being accompanied to the Shinigami's destination. Why haven't they made their move yet? Is it because they know what I know or are they just waiting for an opportune moment?The blue haired man wondered to himself as the straightforward Shinigami spoke once more. "I'm not really important, just a little bit above average you see. While some might say I'm being modest when I say this, I'm actually not. They never even put the spotlight on me but now since most of their good men are dead, they wish for dumb Myzurik to replenish their numbers. They're like children really, not knowing how valuable things truly are until they've wasted it. Then the worst part comes when they want to deprive another little kid out of their toy that they wished to waste on their own. So in actuality, I'm only as important as they want me to be. And you should know that since you were sent to capture me alone, they consider you as only a simple pawn and nothing more..."

Bleach: A New Dawn

What Kurisa said and jangel(I think that's right), I'm going to respond to your post sometime later on today. Also, I'm not pissed or anything, I just haven't been getting proper sleep after having to deal with some time consuming troubles. Focusing on your rping skills, as long as you're following the rules and your grammar can be comprehended, then I'm cool...

Bleach: A New Dawn

Zane620 said
:|

*Lava smacks* What's that face for? Lost your cup of coffee or something? Also, I thought someone was going to bring dear young Hozumi to come see me, it's not nice keep a coffee addict waiting you know XD

Kitsune said
Yes, yes I was ^^Also, should I keep waiting for the head captain or can I just somehow obtain one from a GM? XD

Neat, so my mind wasn't off after all XD

Zane620 said
I think Kurisa has a headache, so just wait a bit more.

^^this

Bleach: A New Dawn

Jangel13 said
right" Angelo said sarcastically as he cuffed the man and patted him down for weapons making sure he wasn't going to trick Angelo while they were on the move. "try anything, I have no problems braking your legs and dragging you their" Angelo said as a warning he didn't care what he called him but he wasn't going to let his first mission from the captain of squad 8 be a failure. once he felt the target was cuffed Angelo grabbed his arm and lead him back outside to start walking back to the seretai thinking that this was to easy and would most likely be an ambush. As a result he had one hand on the targets arm and the other on his own zanpacto

"I had that done to me before and surprisingly, it's not as bad as someone would think. I found it to be rather enjoyable, I hope one day you will experience what it feels like to have a limb broken. That way we could have something to talk about in the future, by the way, my name's Myzurik since you didn't even bother asking." Myzurik noted after being cuffed by the man and was checked for weapons soon after. The Shinigami seemed to be taking every procedure known to man in order to make sure he didn't plan on trying anything which made him wonder. They only sent this guy to capture me? What a pain but he might just manage to actually bring me there safely. Worst case scenario, I'll just simply make way to the Seireitei myself. He thought to himself as the man forced him outside into the open. "Looks like my patience is finally rewarded after all this time. I don't understand how he managed to elude me for so long but now my objective will soon be within my grasp." A voice similar to a woman's spoke silently in an unknown location.

Bleach: A New Dawn

Jangel13 said
Angelo looked at the man seeing that he fit the the description better then the one that choked. Angelo walked over to the man "I am Angelo Ortega and I've been ordered to bring you in." Angelo said simply quickly going over to him to cuff him. He rather not start a fight but he will if he needs to so it's why he had his hand near his zanpscto in case the old man wanted to fight

"Angelo Ortega is it now?" The blue haired man questioned as the Shinigami immediately attempted to cuff him, causing him to take a few steps back. "I don't know what you're trying to arrest me for but I'm not leaving without my stuff. So once I grab my most important objects, I will happily come with you and resolve this matter." He said somewhat joyfully, walking back into the wall like door that he had originally came from before coming out a few minutes later. "Ok, I've grabbed my belongings so let's go wherever you intended to take me. Oh and just know that you're my temporary bodyguard so it's your duty to protect me at all costs now shall we?" The man proceeded to raise his hands in front him so the man could try the cuffing thing again so they could be on their jolly way.