Axel

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Jangel13 said
Angelo got up from his parents have and said "goodbye guys" he said as he got up and he put his walls back up and his face went back to a blank look and he went away from his home to go back to the seretai hoping that one day he will see his sister again but he needed to keep her promise to be the captain someday. Instead if going back he decided to go to a restaurant and Angelo ordered something to eat and some bottles of sake to help relax his nerves after seeing his parents grave. No matter how many times he saw their grave all he could think of was that day and it seemed like the good memories kept fading away but no matter how hard he tried he still couldn't forget that day he lost everything if only he could see his sister again so he could really smile again, maybe even remember some of the good memories he used to have

Feyora

"So like you where were you then Asture? Me and Levan were holding off the thing while Heope charged whatever that blue thing was. And all of this was meant to leave an opening for you to finish it with your Reaper Claw. But you were a no show so what happened?" An elegant woman with shining white hair asked. "I was going to use it just like planned but I saw something. There were more of them coming and I just up and left. No point trying to get caught up in a massacre. Well still, it's a good thing that everyone made it out in one piece. So all's fine and dandy and I'll make it up to them later so relax." Asture said, placing his share and a little extra on the table.

"Even though you didn't work the amount of time stated, that belongs to you. So where are they? Headed home perhaps? Not a chance knowing those two party animals. Matter of fact, you don't need to tell me, I'll just find them myself. Gives me a chance to sneak up on them so see ya latter." He stood from out of his chair before feeling something grab his shoulder. "There's no need Asture because they're long dead. Remember the not getting caught in a massacre thing that just left your dirty mouth? We were caught in that massacre but Heope was kind enough to save you a souvenir." The woman began unwrapping what looked like a present which caused a tear to fall from Asture's eyes.

Without it being fully unwrapped yet, he could already tell what it was. The item created a foul odor once fully unveiled, making some of the nearby people eating lose their appetites. "Yes this is Heope's if you're wondering. Also, consider this my resignation but I guess you have bigger issues at the moment. Either way, I'll let you two work things out from here. Thanks for the drinks, at least you could show up for that..." Her voice slightly changed for a moment as she pushed off her seat in order to stand. "Why do you mock me!!? All I did was choose what looked like the best course of action at the time. I didn't mean for this to happen so you have to believe me!!!" The woman quickly turned to him with a serious look.

"I do so because you disgust me, you shameless rat. You abandoned your friends when they needed you the most. Hell, it was your plan to stay and fight when they were ready to call it a day. You said that everyone was in it together but apparently all you cared about was yourself. If you have even the teeniest bit of remorse for your actions then go back. Go back as in go back to where they died and go Alone. I'll be there five hours before dawn, I hope you can make it." She sarcastically chuckled before casually walking away from the table.

Just as the elegant woman prepared to leave, a Shinigami in particular had caught her interest. She walked over to the mysterious man as silently she could without him noticing. Once reaching a certain distance, her voice relaxed and proceeded to speak. "I can tell by your face that today wasn't a very great one. Well if it matters, she just wasn't right for you. So mind if you let me in on why she dumped you?"

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Kirishin (Extended)

- Three hours later -

"As I said before, as long as you take two a day you shall be fine. You're free to go for now but weekly check ups are a must. Also, let us know about any irregular symptoms." Kirishin readjusted his glasses before walking over to the door. "Alright and uhhh...I..I know that!!! Now leave me you jerk!!!" The patient spoke with the voice of a disrespectful woman which wasn't much of a surprise. Kiri easily shrugged of the response as he proceeded to exit the room. He helped a few people and now it was time to help himself.

Kirishin's usual fake smiley face faded upon leaving the room. Once it faded, a relieved expression appeared in it's stead. Now time to get to work, this is going to one hell of night if I'm correct. He thought while heading to his room. Upon entering which didn't take very long to reach, one could see multiple photo's spread across his walls in a piecing together a culprit style.

Kareta

"Huh? You talking to me? If so, I only glanced at you once so rest your bar-!!!" Before another word left the Shinigami's mouth, Kareta's left index finger was already on his lips. "Shhh...I want nothing more." She said in a calm tone before walking away. "Well I should start from the ground up but that's not an easy task. All of these roads lack signs which means I have no idea where I'm going." Her face turned red, knowing that she would have to ask someone for directions. "...oh I got it!!!! All I have to do is separate the strong from the weak!!! But how am I supposed to do that?"

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AbigailTenshi said
Oh don't worry, it's the thought that counts ^_^ Thank you :) And hey, no problemo xD I'm glad you stuck around with us ^_^ Well damn, I don't even know how to implement different styles xD Then again, you're more talented at this so I'm not surprised xP And yeah, I'm pretty sure they would XD But Oooo~ something for Captain and Lieutenant to bond over ^_^ Fumio's stronger than everyone that used to be around him, but it was his devoted loyalty to certain people that calmed him down, or more only suppressed him xD And done ^_^

I guess so XD And don't thank me but yourself because you earned it and all I did was notice ^_^ Well I didn't make all these chars just to have them all disappear XD I'm an apprentice of an extremist so I can't really take the credit. Let's just say that I had an extraordinary teacher who helped me become the Rper I am today XD So I would have say that you're probably the more talented one ^_^ Indeed but his past probably won't be what one would expect XD Rinkei's only other known equal outside of someone lost in time was his older sister. Not much to say on that one but in short....she's M.I.A. at the moment so...yeah XD

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Zane620 said
So..... You want him to die, but not die ........ Just to say, if an enemy does kill him, and then they see this ball appear XD i dont think they gonna just walk away all casually XD

Precisely XD Well yes but that's what his small posse is for(Even though I doubt they would do any better than him of course)XD And when that day comes when he goes into the Rebirth state in front of the enemy without any protection.....then game over for him XD

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Rebirth - Welllll, if you want this skill, I think there should be a limit of how many times it can be used o.O Like, it can only be used 3 times and that's it since this skill means the guy wouldn't be able to die xD Which is OP since, no matter how strong a character is, there must be atleast one way for them to die. I know that looking at some of the characters in the RP *cough* may give the impression that some of them are invincible but that's never the case xD They all can die too :P Response: That's somewhat true but how many people have actually died? Almost every char is near unkillable(If that's a word XD) which is what made me think of this move that would make the char. Only chars people wanted to die have died which is like three or four maybe? Maybe it's that traditional hero thingy when only the bad guys can be killed and the hero prevails. Not saying I have a real problem with it but most of the chars are near invincible because of it.

He is an extremely hard bugger to kill but in no way invincible. For example: Rebirth cannot be activated at all if his very body is destroyed entirely. Rebirth also doesn't activate if the Zanpakuto is temporarily destroyed at the time of his death. Not to mention, Hiezo(Or so he says) can be killed without ressurection at any time in his childlike state. Plus, if beaten in a fair battle, the one who killed him probably has the strength to break through the Reiatsu.

And if not, he/she can simply wait until the ball releases him before doing away with him right then and there. Unlike my other chars, I wanted to make him able to die without being lost forever. And the Rebirth process is more close to that of being reincarnated before retaining the memories of the ancestor(You'll understand what I mean when it happens). A certain amount of times to die is like giving a cat nine lives. A cat with nine lives is going to be one conservative cat which will ruin probably the most crucial concept to this char.

Yep this is just like a more in-depth explanation(Director's cut) rather than some kind of angry thing just let you know. So I'm still chill and will remain the same....unless(Something crazy happens or if this post doesn't go through in which I will lose it because I have to explain this long ass shiz all over again) XD

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AbigailTenshi said
Okay, so the last two are accepted since they have no moves yet xD But when you do add moves, let us know.Hiezogawa PerstrudaShikai Skills1) Acceptable2) Right soooo if a bit of the stain got onto skin, that part of the skin disappears? xD So like, limbs could be erased? Can Zanpakuto's be erased too? o.o Response: Yes, yes, and both yes & no. It's true that the Zanpakuto can be erased by it but the Zanpakuto is the physical extension of one's self so it'll regenerate over time. And that's only if it manages to douse a huge portion of the weapon in one go so nothing to worry about.

3) Acceptable 8) Acceptable Response: Don't forget the fifteen post cooldown for Spirail Garuda

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills

Rebirth - Welllll, if you want this skill, I think there should be a limit of how many times it can be used o.O Like, it can only be used 3 times and that's it since this skill means the guy wouldn't be able to die xD Which is OP since, no matter how strong a character is, there must be atleast one way for them to die. I know that looking at some of the characters in the RP *cough* may give the impression that some of them are invincible but that's never the case xD They all can die too :P Response: *Stretches* This is going to be either a weird or unintentionally funny explanation but I will explain this in a separate post(It's a pretty lengthy one XD)

Way of Travel - This should have a post cooldown o.O Since this could be spammed badly xD Like have it so that he can use it up to 4 times in 1 post or back-to-back posts but then once he has, the cooldown is 3 posts. This is my take on this move. Hmmm...well to be honest, I've only thought about using it as a Way of Travel XD Hiezo(Or so he says) only really needs to use it once(Maybe twice) so I'll go with the latter instead of the 4 times in one before the cooldown of 3 posts.

Rewind with the hourglass - Is there a certain amount of time that he can stay in the past for? So if he exceeds that time (Post wise) then he'd be trapped in the past? o.O Maybe the hourglass would take 5 - 6 posts before it runs out.Light at the end of the tunnel - I'm cool with this ^_^ Response: 7 but I'm cool with 5, not six(Let's just say it's a long story). Wait trapped in the past? As in forever? Hmmm...maybe if he had something to tell him how much time was left then yeah.

Soooo here's my opinion, we can work something out though if there's a skill that you need to stay as it is for story purposes only ^_^

Zane620 said
Axel how many times can he do that Reiatsu ball that revives him? Once, twice, etc?

I'll answer both of the "Reiatsu ball" or more so explain the hidden truth behind it in my next postie.

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AbigailTenshi said
No problemo Batman :3 And I do it because you lot deserve it ^_^ No need to thank me, if anything, I thank you for being such a huge part of this RP and making it so Awesome to be in ^_^ It's a joy to read your posts! :P And well, good ^_^ Fumio will shortly return to normal again xD But I don't know how Aya is going to act with him from now on xD

*Scratches head* Well you're apart of that lot, meaning you deserve it as well but my art skills are a bit ummm....terrible so yeah XD In all honesty, I never would've joined on day three(Yes I still remember) if I didn't notice loyal people like Expllo and yourself so thank you and him and also Kurisaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! ^_^ Of course it is XD I tend to implement multiple writing styles so that things will feel fresh from time to time. That's good and I'm pretty sure any sane person would start to act differently after witnessing something like that XD Surprisingly, Rinkei was something like that in his younger days but he had someone strong enough to calm him down XD

Also, I have a new char and his two subordinates located on pg. 782. So whenever anyone has the time, do they mind looking over them? I've got sleep so I'll reapear at a later time. *Vanishes*

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AbigailTenshi said
Well thank you Gm Batman ^_^ Your service is defiantly appreciated! (I'll be making new badges sometime soon and I'm going to add that as your title xD) But yeah, try not to be mad at your Lieutenant f(^_^')

Well no problem commissioner Abigail XD *Bows* Thank you milady(And thank you so much for the badge you have already graced us with. Not to mention the new badge along with the new title so thank you very much as always Abigail ^_^). From what I see, it doesn't look like anything Rinkei wasn't expecting from the jump XD All those that attempt to shroud their emotions almost always seem to have something frightening underneath.

Zane620 said
Very true, deep hate for us XD

You know you like the hate XD

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AbigailTenshi said
I was expecting one of the other Co-Gm's to answer but yeah ^_^ Axelicious knows his stuff~ *Glomps* You might not want to read the recent event that happened between Fumio, Souta and Aya Captain f(^_^') *Nervous chuckle*

Well I know you guys and gals are busy every now and then so I try answer from time to time without stepping out any boundaries whenever necessary(That's why I'm the self proclaimed Gm vigalante) ^_^ *Is glomped before proceeding to hug back* Recent event? Now that I know something has occurred, my curiosity compels me to read it(Especially after reading the Aya Captain thingy)XD

Toaw said
Alright, thank you on the advice, but I was already one step ahead of you on not exactly introducing the antagonist as an arrancar so it can be easily changed in the future if need be.

No problem and you only get one step ahead of me once before I begin to figure you out XD Still that's good nonetheless.

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Toaw said
Hey, I was just wondering if it was ok if could set up a personal story line with my character Gustavo, that may or may not involve an arrancar character further down the line if, and when we are actually allowed to create them. The basic idea though is that I plan on introducing the death of his family through suppressed dreams, and memories, and Giovanni will slowly grow an aspiration to figure out exactly why they were killed, and who exactly killed them. If there are problems with this, than I will gladly choose a different introduction to my character's history.

*Appears* Well depending on how long further down the line it is, I wouldn't see why not unless told otherwise of course. Seeing that they aren't allowed at the moment, you probably should leave whatever part the Arrancar plays in the overhaul a mysterious. This is just in case they won't be able to be used at all so you can change it without fooling the readers.