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Sure thing, I'll get one up when I get home from work.

Sorry Bacon, didn't realize you had a reply up when I suggested to collab earlier. I should get something up by the morning to help set more up ^___^ muahaha
Ready to collab with anyone who needs it!
No need for forgiveness, I just want the best for this game that's already so freaking awesome. I'm excited to see what you'll get up!
Great post Regret! I'm (for real) going to get something up for the scientist and Finn tonight or .uk n the morning.
Sorry Frozen, but I'm still having some problems with your profile. I understand that you "didn't spend much time on it" which isn't fair to everyone that worked hard on a very thorough profile in order to be accepted. Right now your main character is still a full day behind the others, which shouldn't be influenced if Jacob is accepted or not.

As for the profile: I'm having trouble with Jacob's fears, since they seem to be written as a joke. Four inch heels (spelling aside), pretty girls and drag queens have no real implications or uses in character development. Give him something real to be afraid of and make a more rounded character.

In all honesty, the personality section really confuses me- there are a lot of contradictions. He's really positive but morbid, afraid of everything but not really. It doesn't make sense.

Again, I NEED descriptions to all of the power points. How is he a computer genius? Can he write code? Hack? Amazing at Photoshop? We have no idea and it's too broad. Mechanic extraordinaire; but what can he build? Cars? Boats? Obviously not robots or weapons, because he has points in mechanic instead of engineering or similar fields. Again, I already asked for descriptions to points.

On top of all that there is no history. I understand that some of the others are brief or lead to being developed in-story, but you need something.

So yes, I know that you would like to play Jacob, but he seems very thrown together and this is an Advanced game, as I said in the first post.

EDIT: To add, what are his goals? "Gabriel's money" doesn't make sense. Does he want to steal it? What are his life plans?
Sorry all! And no, the VIP area is under the second floor catwalk the runs like a horse shoe around the room.

Frozen: As of right now, I have a few problems with your bio;

Strengths:
-Positive
-Intelligent with machinery
-Computer semi-genius I'm. Sorry, but neither of these two have power points assigned to them?

-Power Points:
-Empathic Influence: 3 Again, characters with strong will can resist this and he can't influence more than emotions.
-Attractiveness: 3 I would need a better description for this.
-Rich Best Friend: 3
-Popularity: 3
-Wealth: 1
-Brawl: 1
-Bravery: 1

-Paradigm Stone-
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Weakness: Ocean/Gabriel can still overpower him emotionally. So your other character is his lone weakness? Doesn't that make it impossible for everyone else?
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Oh! Quick reminder that there will be a mix of Loche Security (the felon thugs) and regular Beacon guards (honest working civilians) so keep that in mind when you're beating the shit out of one/the other.
Sizzlin Bacon said Anyway, I'll hopefully write something sometime soon, the mojo has not been flowing lately and I've been distracted by other issues.


No need to worry about it, Bacon, hope all's going well!

Like I said before, I might make an update on what's going on with the scientist.
No rush, really. I had my own busy week where you guys were patient ^____^

In other news, I received a PM requesting a certain power for a character. It's for power absorption like Rogue's, but includes shape shifting into any character after contact as well. I would most likely prefer one or the other. Also I personally feel that the players here have signed up to write as characters with super powers (for the most part) and having their powers taken during (most likely) combat, takes away the meat of what they can do. This also leads to a character that is powerless unless they take it from someone else.

Be that as it may, I want every decision in this game to be made as a group, so I want to see how all of you feel about it. We can set strict standards or rules on when the powers are kosher, or opt away from it entirely. Just want to hear everyone's opinions!
Hahaha that was so much fun to write up! The head of the biggest genetics company is hot on her trail :)

I might put up one more post for the scientist in the labyrinth tonight or in the morning.
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