I do have a minor critique for RPG Maker, if I may. I think your ICs will have better flow if you start a new paragraph when dialogue is started by a different character. For example,
"T-thank you" the girl thanked Bobby."It's not safe when you're alone,you should come with me" Bobby said as he lends his hand to the girl"O-ok" the girl replied then girl took his hand and stands."By the way, Mari Newman" Mari introduced herself."I'm Bobby Jones" Bobby introduced himself as well.
Would become,
"T-thank you" the girl thanked Bobby.
"It's not safe when you're alone,you should come with me" Bobby said as he lends his hand to the girl
"O-ok" the girl replied then girl took his hand and stands."By the way, Mari Newman" Mari introduced herself.
"I'm Bobby Jones" Bobby introduced himself as well.
This can kind of eliminate any confusion in who is saying what and give a good flow to your narrative. Bobby Jones is pretty kick-ass, really looking forward to more! :D