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Castor said
The young man immediately fell on his knees as did the other bystanders around him, prostrating one-by-one before their deity. In a few seconds, a heavy silence fell over the wharf, only the occasional sound of waves lapping against the sides of ships punctuate this overbearing tension. Gods were among men, the natural order was about to be changed."Lord Argys, we, your humble servants, are honoured by your presence." The man spoke, his voice a lone tree in the middle of a storm "Regarding the Tradeship, I was not a witness to this tragedy but it was a freak accident resulting from the mishandling of cargo which was mostly flour and scented oils. A spark would have sent the ship into the sky. However..." The man hesitates "There is a rumour spreading that the attack was orchestrated by a band of Kobolds that opposes the rule of Gods as they believe, the All Holy Ninjen to be an upstart against the will of The Old One. Kobolds believe this entity to be the only true God that created this realm." After he spoke the man was apprehensive, as the bearer of ill omens, he feared the wrath of the God. A high pitch voice spoke out from the crowd, a child. "Your Holiness, the titan Krumpus and Ozythyl saved the survivors and also the ship, i saw it with my eyes! It was complete chaos on the river, the fire was still burning even though it was totally under water, men were drowning, I could hear the terrible screams from the bank. But suddenly, everything vanished and reappeared on the other side of the river. Even what was left of the whole ship, with flames extinguished and the men saved from harm. And the titan Krumpus rolled up to the bank, I swear i saw him, he was big and round! They are all gone now, Your Godship, but I promise you , it really happened!" A buzz of anxiety ran through the crowd, the kid should have shut his mouth.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ozythyl had managed to warp the space around the catastrophe, identifying every human in the water before transferring their existence onto the space beside the river. As the last of the human bodies touched the bank, Ozythyl's vision blurred, his whole being had lost a huge amount of energy. "Help them Krumpus! I cant do anymore." With that, he slumped onto Bobs neck, only manged to stay on his saddle by Bob's willpower alone. A familiar sinking sensation of weightless, and blackness submerged his whole being as Ozythyl and his steed winked out of existence.


"Oh, my... Okay..." He grabbed a handfull of Ichor, said a prayer, and splashed it on the humans, "Please work, oh dear Watchers please work..." he whispered.

The humans were alive, but out cold.
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Name: Xarg
Appearance: Humanoid race, luminescent light blue skin. Usually large-boned with curled, ram-like horns and are typically 6'3-7'8.
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Age: 35
Race: Xarg
Appearance: His skin glows brighter than others. He has red Xarg armor (Built-in jet pack and waterproof) and his main weapon is a Beam Cutlass, and his secondary is a military-grade riot shield.
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VarionusNW said
what do you mean "from your series" exactly?


A series you created or had part in creating.
Kinda. We'll need more people, ofc.
Castor said
[Hahahahah, would you trust me to respond properly to you? XD Were on different sides, I could make it so that it was an rebel group of humans that hate the gods much more than Titans. This rebel group would be destroying everything sacred and related to the Gods in any way. Hows that for a plot? I originally had something else planned but Blue kinda made that impossible. Ill post something very soon.


GO ON WITH IT.
VarionusNW said
This is a stupid question, since the answer is probably no, but are OCs allowed?


OCs? Well, are they from your series, or are they from someone else's? If they're from your series (WIPs count!), they're allowed.
VarionusNW said
Bobo, did you not see 9.5? While these rules are phrased badly, its stating that as a "franchise guy" you can use any THREE minor bosses. You have 4, and you did not ask for permission to have multiple characters, so I am guessing you meant for them to be the same character. You could either have them be separate characters, or remove one.Honestly, I think it is better just to remove the franchise guy system. I will make a character soon.


You can have multiple characters from the same franchise. Limit being... Is three good?
VarionusNW said
As you said that we would be building the lore, I would like to suggest something before I go ahead and use it. Gods are mighty and large, as are the titans, but the aura, or something, of a god could kill a man that looked at them (that is why the temple of the gods is impossible for mortals to reach, maybe?) (also, this doesn't have to be the reason, it could honestly be anything) but, because of some reason, the gods take vessels when going in to a group of mortal creatures, such as humans, to deal with a situation. Vessels, of course, means they basically possess a member of X species, and the only way you would know it was a god was by their glowing eyes. Though, the mortal people would see these vessels as holy from that point on, as a god chose them as a vessel.Other possible reasons for the vessels:-Mortals cant understand the language of the gods-Mortals cant see the gods (okay, this is a bit stupid)-Gods just kinda prefer to talk to the mortals like that (also a bit stupid)


1 and 3 are good. 3 is great because they feel that they are morally and all-around superior to the mortals. 1 is... It just makes sense. 2 is just right out.
Everything else is great.
"Humans?" He seemed confused, "Why'd the humans want to attack us? Th--" He looked out on the horizon, horrified as he saw a trade ship burning, "They're not attacking. Their ship is on fire!" He rolled to the river, panicking as he wasn't fast enough. The ship sank, "...Dear Watchers..." He wasn't as cheery as he usually was, "Alright. Someone needs to salvage the ship, see where they were bringing it. A memorial will be on schedule after the Dining Hall."
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