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From the highest peak sounded a rhythmic sound of steel on steel. Montis was laying his last hand on a new piece. When he had cooled it for the last time and inspected it's shape, he heard a tinkling noise. His divine ears and ages of experience told him it was gold, some sort of coins.
He turned around and looked, there lay a pile of gold coins. He knew some other god had sent this. he walked over to the pile and put down the masterwork on his way. He crouched beside the coins and saw his emblem on every piece. He knew the sacrificial feast was about to start and he would go there after he had finished his piece, which he just did. He now threw of his leather apron, grabbed a sack and took all of the coins with him because he knew something was up with them, and wanted to investigate this further. He took his human form, stepped out of his forge and called out for his friend and helper: 'RODAIKAR!'. his voice sounded mighty and deep, it echoed far and made the mountain tremble slightly.
Almost immediately after a black dragon appeared in sight and it flew down in circles.

Montis mounted the mighty beast and said: 'I'm sorry to denigrate you like this, but I just had to finish that last piece, it is for you after all.'
The dragon eased a little bit and took off, he knew exactly where to go for Montis had planned it all.

'To the celebration' he thought.
Wait.. I do not completely understand the coin thingy..
Are these coins spread out in every domain?
And, correct me if I'm wrong, if so; the champions will be collecting them?
Hmm I made a HUUGE post.. I thought it was smaller, I'll keep the rest a little shorter.
Also if you see it twice, the first one is the good one, but my phone often bugs as I post, and my pc is broken so I can't work on that.. that is the reason you might see it twice..
Apologies for all the inconveniences!
[nasty double-post]
On his way to World's End Gardìmn thought of his last few days in Borìn Fraethr. His decision had sent him on this journey, but he did not regret it.

The great hall was completely filled with dwarves, everyone was nicely dressed on this only day off in their year. The entire hall was brightly lit and in a festive mood. For today was a special day, the annual day of choice. Young dwarves that became 25 in the past year could choose to take in a tiny bit of Montis, the father. That way they would develop a stronger bond with their mining tools and the gems and noble irons they work on. But sometimes dwarves are interested in the outside world, adventure and finding more than rocks and shiny stuff. The perfect smooth walls of the great halls, the food and mead that were brought home by courier dwarves. Everything that was not made by what the dwarves found in the mountains was probably bought via trade, but most dwarves didn't leave the mountains in their life.

Gardìmn was one of the dwarves that wanted to see more of the world, learn about the ways of the people, spread what he had learned up until then. His forging teacher was a very respectable dwarf and one of the best teachers in Borìn Fraethr. And he had always uttered Gardìmn to be very good at what he specialized in, but he knew that Gardìmn absolutely despised making other things.
Gardìmn was a goldsmith, he loved making the smallest but most intriguing pieces of jewelry and he performed this as an art.

He now looked up from his thoughts, he saw fireworks and heard all kinds of loud noises, and thought 'there is probably something important going on, I hope I won't miss it...'
He took stronger grip of the small cart that he had been dragging along for his entire journey and fastened his pace.

All of the boys and girls, age 25, were standing in line awaiting for the oracle to call out their name and ask their answer on the greatest question of their lifes.
"I will gladly serve my lord and father Montis and I will present myself as a tool for his work might he need me" were the words that the guy he knew was called Androthin, said. Seconds later he felt warmth radiating off of him and sensed him fall to his knees.

"GARDÌMN, STEP FORWARD!" The oracle exclaimed, and Gardìmn did as he spoke. "WILL YOU, OR WILL YOU NOT PRESENT YOURSELF AS A TOOL FOR THE LORD?"
Gardìmn felt his heartrate rise, as he knew his decision and he was the first in line to say; 'I will not, for I wish to travel, explore and investigate the upper world, to see its beauty and feel its emotions.'
Thus the oracle walked over to him and asked: "Is this truely your wish?" 'Yes' he answered.
"THEN SO BE IT!" The oracle made it final by laying his hand upon Gardìmn's head and giving him the final blessing. While he felt the hand he saw images of a town located near a cliff, World's End. "Start your journey there!" he heard the deepest and most serious voice he had ever heard, say.


And here he was, nearing the town full of people that would be filled with excitement over something he did not know about. But as something was happening he could probably show his artistry and maybe sell it.
He went here 3 days after the day of choice and he had brought all his tools and some small gems. A small bag of gold nuggets and 5 feet of the finest silver necklace-chain. He wanted to spread his art, maybe een teach people how to use their emotions to define their pieces as theirs.

He was close to the town now, he smelt a great fire and wondered if he could get something to drink somehere, along with some information about what was going on.

Wodgev said
Elsewhere in Travel's End, a young couple was having a disagreement in the sanctity of their home."Well, if you love that woman so much, why didn't you marry !?" the woman shouted."That's not what I said, my love. I only said that I respected her." the man tried to reason in vain."Well you might as well have!""But dear...""No! you're not getting in my bed tonight!" she screamed, picking up a pillow and a pair of breeches. "Find yourself another place to sleep.""But...""Maybe take you in. Wouldn't that be wonderful?"Opening a window, she threw the pillow out, followed quickly by the breeches. A moment later, a small clay flask of ale followed suit.What the woman didn't know was that the street outside wasn't empty.


When he turned a corner he almost got hit by a pillow and some breeches, he looked up to see a clay flask falling down as well..
'OI!! WATCH IT IN THERE!' He shouted at the window in indignation.
I had a plot thingy in mind for that, they are animals like humans are. But at a certain age they can choose to become servitars as an extention of the god.
Name: Montis
Titles: God of mining and smithing, Shaper of minerals.
True name: Birndràth
Inspiration: the dwarves.

Appearance: Montis is a man with a huge beard and broad shoulders, he always seems to have a serious look on his face. But sometimes he gets depicted with a big smile and a just finished piece of work in his hand. He wears a rough spun tunic, sleeves rolled up showing his huge underarms.

Symbols: A torch, a diamond and an anvil.
Portfolio: domain of Mountains, Mining and smithing.
Alignment: Lawful Good
Servitars: Most of the Dwarves and sometimes dragons

Weapon: Nobody remembers what weapon Montis wields in battle. For the last time he battled is several ages ago. But mankind believes that might Montis go to battle he would bring both his hammer, in his right hand, and pickaxe, in his left, to battle.

Animal: The Dragon
An animal of treasures that has a natural attraction to the mountains. It is said that Montis chooses a dragon once in so-many years to aid him in heating his metals to intense temperatures. And learns them to handle ancient power. The rest of the dragons help te dwarves and in return they recieve gifts im the shape of jewels. Montis keeps up peace between these races and the dragons see him as the biggest god.

Followers: Specific monk tribes that settle in the mountain peaks to meditate and slow their pace of living.(of course only the ones that pray to Montis)
People and dwarves with any sort of interest in smithing and mining will be heard by Montis.
I have completed my god more or less now, but I decided(not completely out of free will) to shut up here for a while, as I must have been annoying the crap out of you last time...
Sorry for that!

I don't know if I should post it yet, but I figured I might as well ask you :)
I'm sorry, I work on my phone as my pc is broken, so I make some typing mistakes, and also some grammatical ones as I'm not a native Englishman but I try ;3

If you see my message twice, the first one is 'corrected' just ignore the second one.. It was a bug from my phone. If you don't see it twice, nvm this part.
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