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@Enso

I figured 165 pounds (75 kilograms) ain't bad for a 6 foot (183 centimeter) mummy. I added that to the CS as well, but telling you like this seems easier. He has the healing factor, but I guess super strength may have not been the best way of putting it. He's strong enough to go toe-to-toe with most heroes, but he won't be throwing cars through the air. Maybe lifting them up and dropping them on top of people, but he won't send them flying through the sky or anything. And I wasn't planning on making anymore changes beyond what I did already.
Is (subjectively) better, MUCH (subjectively) better!

Enso said
The comment about his skin looking like it belongs to someone who was mummified gave me an idea for his history. Its not a very good one, but its something. Maybe he was an Egyptian (or some other ancient civilization) prince who grew ill and the priests in his charge, in an attempt to heal him, used a spell to ward off Anubis (or some other god of death) and keep his soul in his body until he was able to heal, but the spell worked a little too well and he died from his disease, but his soul stayed and he was mummified and buried before waking in his tomb. He escaped and was chased away by the horrified priests and now he wanders the world, ending up in Manhattan by some strange circumstances, looking for somebody who can finally release his soul from eternal torment.


Thank you. That was massively helpful.

NOTE: This is not the final character sheet. I'm only posting this now because something about it just feels...off, but I can't really figure out what. I'm hoping that several extra pairs (no offense to any cyclops here) of eyes will aid me in my noble quest. I'm just curious what you guys all think so far, and if you can suggest areas that I can tweak to make him a stronger character. I'm open to changing preeeeeeetty much everything but the Solomon Grundy bit. He's my favorite comic book villain.
I very much want to do this, but also don't want to waste time making a CS if this is no longer accepting. So...room for one more?
YES
Shadowcatcher said
is it okay if Juneberry has a crush on Lonan?


Yeah that's fine.

Also, I am unnaturally excited that soon I'll have the chance to work rock lyrics into a RP. Finally...
Shadowcatcher said
@Nobbs every time i see your sig, i read it as "May the Fuck be with you" then i laugh and pee a little.


“I'm going to throw a party tomorrow night. Ya know, to kick off this whole 'sober until we win the Cup' thing.”

“I thought you were going to abstain from sex?” Nicholas asked, hoping that he wouldn't have to walk in on Lonan this year. Yeah, there were curtains around all the beds, but just hearing someone have sex in the same room you're in is...disconcerting.

“Yeah, that was my original plan. And then I saw Zelda walk past two or three times and it has given me serious pause about that. Have you seen her ass?”

There was a slight awkward pause, the kind that always came up the first few weeks of school until people readjusted to how Lonan spoke and behaved after a summer away from him. And then Lonan remembered what Nicholas was talking about, and trundled on like nothing had ever happened.

“I don't want to go to the feast. I'm just gonna stare at that Quidditch Cup all night, up there with those damn gold and red ribbons when anyone with half of a goddamn brain stem knows that we should have won that Cup, but...”

And he stopped and took a few deep breaths because he could feel the anger churning around his stomach, and he didn't want to start screaming about Quidditch until the first practice of the year, or at least until the team was in the Slytherin common room later that night. He changed the subject.

“What have you all been up to this summer?”
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