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Cold be hand and heart and bone, and cold be my sleep under stone...

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@Capra Alright :) Enoch sounds very interesting for sure. I like it.


Thanks! Just a question: does the name Xathanael mean anything or is it just invented? My knowledge of Jewish is very limited, and I don't know is Xathana is a word or not.


With this I think I'm done with the kingdom, will be doing the character soon.
Very nice - now we shall wait for at least another char to be posted, then we can start the dances.


More in next post. I don't like posting in tiny bits like this, but RL busyness leaves me no other choice.
Consider this a draft: more will come in next posts.

Nice! Just a few things to fix about the backstory: Berber society is semi-nomadic in nature, so there's no unified kingdom of Mauretania, and the "inheriting land" thing doesn't make too much sense, as there are no "lands", just clans and tribal chiefdoms. Also, Berbers are either pagans or Marbouti Muslims, as there are no other currents of Islam which are widespread among them. Some basic level magic is fine.
Oh, don't worry, there will be plenty fantasy aspect.
To be fair, I had humans in mind. I could change that though, but I don't understand your hostility towards Adam's issue.
I'm taking the Dreadnaught. Name: Mictlantecuhtli. I'll post more ASAP.
Would a nomadic, horde-like "kingdom" be fine for you?
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