I think I've got everything right... @CaptainSully, how's he looking? I'll finish Viridian Gym soon.Title:
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Name: Quilo
Nickname: Master of Mist and Mystery
Age: 27
Hometown: Snowpoint City, Sinnoh
Height: 5’11”
Weight: 160lbs
Occupation: Viridian City Gym Leader
Likes: Teaching, kendo, reading
Dislikes: Arrogance, hot summer days, unnecessary haste
Talents: Swordfighting, weather forecasting, and dice games
Personality: Usually quite composed, Quilo nevertheless has a charming and polite personality that has made him if not popular in Viridian City, certainly respected in the town known as the entrance to the Indigo League. He's quite fond of the local children, and is employed part-time as a tutor at the Viridian Pokémon Academy. His careful, precise manner helps many of the children, though he credits most of the improvements to his calm, patient teaching environment; outdoors on the grass.
He adopts a similar attitude to challengers who enter his gym; while his gym attendants gain his mentoring, he will advise and praise challengers while teaching them to trust their Pokémon. He also personally greets challengers, even though he is required to wait for them to make his way through the gym before battling him.
He likes mints.
Background: From the cold city of Snowpoint in Sinnoh, Quilo’s parents joke his affinity for ice pokemon came from being born in a snowdrift. Certainly he spent a lot of time playing with the swinub and snorunt that wander through the town, and his first capture was a snorunt who had taken to following the little boy around. Young Quilo quickly showed his affinity for Pokémon, though average at most other subjects.
That changed when his family moved to Kanto; the disruption sent his grades tumbling for several months until he earned a scholarship from the Indigo League.
This helped him find his focus again, and he went 7 of 8 in his pokemon league challenge. His natural talent with ice pokemon led to an apprenticeship with former Elite Four Lorelei, whereafter he was appointed to the Viridian Gym. Renovating the gym to its new ice type theme, he's set about guarding the “entrance to Victory Road” with aplomb ever since.
He hands out the “Blizzard Badge”, a redesign of the Earth Badge that resembles snowflakes on a crescent rather than the feather of the older badge. An ongoing debate between his and Pewter City's gym is which is considered the first gym in the Kanto League; officially, this remains Pewter City, despite perceptions.
Pokemon:
- Nub, a Mamoswine. Ability, Snow Cloak. Moves: Earthquake, Ice Fang, Ancient Power, Hail. (First of Quilo’s Pokémon, and still his favourite. The two of them often rest together in the gym, and Nub carries Quilo when he needs to visit people.)
- Lora, a Lapras. Ability: Shell Armour. Moves: Ice Beam, Sheer Cold, Perish Song, Brine. (A gift from his mentor, and named after her, Lora enjoys sleeping in ponds around Viridian City. During school holidays, she lets children play around and on her back, despite the thinness of her shell)
- Haze, a Froslass. Ability, Snow Cloak. Moves: Blizzard, Draining Kiss, Shadow Ball, Double Team. (Haze is affectionate. When she was a snorunt, this was cute. Now that she can move through walls, it's often startling and sometimes terrifying. Haze doesn't notice this.)
- Katana, an Alolan Sandslash. Ability, Snow Cloak. Moves: Icicle Spear, Metal Claw, Brick Break, Hone Claws. (Serious and focused, Katana was smuggled into Kanto by poachers. He was brought to Quilo in the hopes he would recover from the trauma in a familiar environment. While he's still not entirely friendly, Katana has calmed enough to train with Quilo’s kendo class.)
- Flurry, an Alolan Ninetales. Ability, Snow Cloak. Moves: Dazzling Gleam, Double Team, Ice Shard, Frost Breath (While Katana became sullen and vicious, Flurry’s experience left her shy and skittish. Haze’s affection has helped her recover somewhat, and she occasionally participates in gym battles as she regains her confidence)
- Austram, an Aurorus. Ability: Snow Warning. Moves: Freeze-Dry, Ancient Power, Frost Breath, Hail. (Aloof and regal, Austral stands as the tallest of Quilo’s Pokémon. He cares little for people other than his trainer, but will play disciplinarian when the rest of the team gets too boisterous. Most people who interrupt his almost-constant browsing on the nearby Viridian Forest get pushed aside with his tail.)
While Quilo relies on his personal Pokémon during battles with appropriately skilled trainers, not all of his challengers have their seven gym badges. For that reason, he keeps weaker teams around for weaker challengers. They can include:
- Smoochum (Forewarn) (Sweet Kiss, Powder Snow, Confusion, Sing)
- Swinub (Snow Cloak) (Mud-Slap, Powder Snow, Hail, Endure)
- Sneasel (Pickpocket) (Feint Attack, Fury Swipes, Avalanche, Ice Punch.)
Looking good. All i'd suggest is putting a line space between each part of the CS, just makes it look a bit cleaner. Also ideally i'd like him to have a full name (first and last). Apart from that he looks good and quite happily accepted.