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did you know that you're amazing

just wanted to make sure you knew
idlehands said
I just saw this. It looks amazing, Card. I'll be lurking and reading.


Try not to read too much if you're interested in participating at some point.




Yes, it makes perfect sense that Belgium would cooperate with Belgium.


IC post is up.

Now that all the scenic stuff is out of the way, I'll be able to post as frequently as I need to. You're mostly all engaged in conversation, meaning that writing for all of you won't take a tremendous amount of time anymore.
In the shadows of ancient ruins of skyscraping cities, masses of wooden huts littered the forest expanses. Farmers and craftsmen shed their sweat working in the day and shivering with their families at night. With every village was a graveyard of those taken by the torturous winters of Canada, and with every passing winter, they grew, ready to engulf every village in a garden of white headstones.

Outside the glamour, glamour meaning safety, of the Gaulish cities, villagers toiled to bring dues to their brutish king, housed in the crude, wooden rotunda with the local druid. A man swiped at his crops one at a time with a sickle, filling two barrels: one for his family and one for his king. Parts of his wool rags were soaked with sweat, and his limbs scream for rest. He walked up and down every row of his field, taking one after the other, preparing for the winter.

Another stood atop his house, repairing his roof. His hammer smacked nail after nail, bringing board after board into place, but as the sun set in the West, he dropped his hammer down the gaping hole in his roof; he wrapped his arms around himself, knowing that he had to freeze another night.

A woman stirred stew in a poorly made pot over a dying fire with an agonizing rhythm. Every back and forth with her spoon stretched the sinew in her frail arms as beads of sweat drop into the cauldron. An infant began to wail in the corner of the room, trapped in a round nest of twigs and cloth. The woman hurried to the child to silence his cries; he rocked him to and fro to the steady rhythm of the child's cries.

In the house of the ill, which was just as lopsided and loose as the houses of the healthy, an old man lied heaving on a mat, which is to say he lied heaving on the stone floor. From sun up to sun down he felt every beat of his heart, rattling his body with the same, agonizing rhythm. Every bump was pain, and between each bump was dread. In time, he'd know peace, but it would only be for a time, for illness moved with the same up and down, back and forth: pain and dreading pain. The whole village played to the tune of misery besides the king, and the druid whispering in his ear.

A horse clopped into the village, accompanied by dozens of marching men and the beat of a drum. The people of the village halted. In the open, grassy cove, in the center of the village, a man in red robes and golden trim sat upon a horse with an ornate garland on his head. The people circled round him, following the drum beat. On his back was his symbol: a red staff with a gold sun at its head. Farmers and woodworkers, sick and healthy, men and women, young and old halted to observe. The rider and his men marched by the stares of on looking peasants and into the great, shapely rotunda.
Red torches lit up the grassy cove, as the village gathered around the swiftly made stage in a half circle. The night had cast its darkness all around, but the torches lit the village in a blaze of red. A biting chill filled the air, except in the village, where the torches spread warmth. Behind the stage, a wicker man loomed over the congregation, golden and thirty feet tall, given an eerie glow by the torches on the stage.

The rabble began to chatter as the king and druid waited patiently on the stage, fidgeting on the stools, frequently looking over their shoulders. The stage and people were surrounded in darkness on all sides, and the king and druid muttered between themselves in a hushed tone.

The chattering and muttering was made silent by a beating drum. It seemed to come from nowhere when the drummer and his sizable drum marched out of the rotunda. He took his place at the far end of the stage as another man arrived behind him. He bore a megaphone, and he solemnly took his place at the center of the stage. The crowd and even the king and druid were instantly silent as he shouted, "Surrender your ears, comrades, as the leader approaches. All recognize Vercingetorix, King of Great Warriors, True Leader of the Gauls, and Herald of the Dawn."

The man's stomps on the wooden stage were heard by everyone on the crowd. His gaunt face was illuminated by the glow of firelight, and he seemed to stand taller than the wicker man. His herald offered his megaphone, a simple wooden horn, and Vercingetorix denied it. He smacked the bottom of his staff against the planks of the stage, and all were attentive, if they weren't already.

"You toil in the dirt for your families and your tribe," he proclaimed, "and you surrender yourselves for everything that you love. I look into all of your eyes, and I do not see your suffering; I feel it. It fills my heart with more sorrow than blood, blood that we share, comrades."

The people's eyes widened, their arms at their sides, as they heard him shout to the them and to the sky. Vercingetorix's motioned to the surrounding village, "I see the work that you do, and I know you feel that it isn't enough, not enough to keep you safe, to keep you warm, or to keep your beloved. Nay, I do not see it; I feel it."

Tears filled the eyes of many as they listened. Vercingetorix continued, "But every winter, nay, every day, it seems that all is taken away! All that you work for, all that you were given, slips between sweaty fingers, and in that moment, one knows the emptiness of misery." Vercingetorix grew louder as he went on, pacing from end to end, looking everyone on in the eyes as he spoke. With every moment he spoke, the people stood straighter, their jaws hanging loose and eyes wide.

Vercingetorix beat his chest as he continued, "And I work too, comrades. I work for you, for you have all worked for me." He looked down, motioning to his robes and staff, "I did not make these; you made these. You have made what is mine, so I seek to make what is yours. But what is yours cannot be made, for what is yours has been taken from you."

Vercingetorix swiped his staff pointing it accusingly to the south, "In the South, they do not make or earn; they take. In the South, there are no winters, no masses of white gravestones. The South steals, and from you and each other they have stolen all that they have." As Vercingetorix spoke, the crowd began to stir. "While you toil, my comrades, my beloved, scraping together what you little you can find with sweat slicked hands, the pigs of the South dig into their wealth with hands oiled with grease!"
The crowd grew louder, many of them starting to shout, though none of them could overpower the voice of Vercingetorix. The king began to rise, but the druid held him back. Vercingetorix motioned behind him towards the wicker man, "And for the crimes of the South, I hereby sentence the South for thievery!" The lit torch was brought almost instantly not by the king, the druid, or any of Vercingetorix's men, but by a woman in the crowd. She reached up to him with her thin hands, and Vercingetorix took the torch and her hand in his hands. After thanking the woman, he tossed the torch into the wicker man, setting it alight with a reddish glow.

"Their sentence will not be death, comrades." He cried, as the crowd jeered and booed. He continued, "Instead, their sentence shall be loss! When their gold and food slip through their greasy fingers, when they shiver in the winter nights with not a scrap to warm them, and when they weep over the plots of their loved ones, they will have paid their penance!" The wicker man was now almost instantly covered in red fire, tinting the crowd and the surrounding village with a red glow.

"And all of you, my comrades, will be compensated! You, my beloveds, shall carry out the sentence!" He declared, his staff swiping at the crowd, his booming voice filling the air. Vercingetorix's men tossed the people's tools to the crowd, and as the wicker man burned, the drummer began to drum again. The people clanged their hammers and sickles together with the beat of the drum.

"You shall dig into the wealth of the South, holding it in your hands! You shall feel the warmth of their hearths! War shall be waged against the South, and you shall wield your tools against them, and they will fall!" Vercingetorix's voice climbed higher and higher, still overpowering the beat of the drum and the clanging of metal.

Vercingetorix virtually danced along the edge of the stage. Some have been reputed to rouse fire or wind with their staves; Vercingetorix roused people. With every swing of his stick, people reached for him, throwing their souls to him, and Vercingetorix looked them in the eye and brought them into his heart. "Everything shall belong to you, my beloveds! When the Red Sun rises, nothing shall be taken or lost anymore! Just as you have given everything for your families, your tribes, and for me, to you everything shall return when the Red Sun rises, and with it so will all those you have lost!"

As he said this, the crowd lit up. With all of their cheers, still none of them could match Vercingetorix's voice. "The dead shall be brought to life! The cold shall turn to warmth! The sick will dance and the shivering will step into the sunlight! The worker shall wear a crown, and the North shall take the South, while everything they have slips through their greasy fingers!"

The wicker man crackled in its blaze, the drum beat was lost to the euphoric rhythm of clanging hammers and sickles, and the darkness was lost in the heart of the red fire. Vercingetorix was now conducting an orchestra, controlling the music of adoration with every word and swipe of his staff. He raised his arms to the sky in his thunderous crescendo, "Brandish your tools, my comrades! You will have all that you have longed for, for I love you, comrades! In this cold and awful world, where thieves are kings and kings must thieve, I love you! Oh, please, won't you sing for me, my nightingales! Sing until the Red Dawn rises!"

The crowd began to chant what sounded like "wicker man" into the sky. The embers danced as the tiny village of only a few hundred became the brightest, reddest star in the night sky, filling it with the clanging of hammers and sickles until the sun rose.












They made a second one?


This song, this performance.

I'm a 60's and 70's guy, and I'm very familiar with 80's rock, so I could name hundreds.
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