Ok, you're CS is rly shaping up, so there are just a fue more tweaks. The number if members in you're gang seems pretty low and specific. Naming a fue leaders and top members would be good, but as far as goons go you need to bolster your numbers. Your trying to run the city, you can't do that with 7 guys! Other than that, sorry to be a bit repetitive but you nead to fix your spelling. Particularly the run on sentence. Commas and periods are your freinds!