Cultural Titan

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@Crimson Raven

I knew this would come up. So your character had things a little easier because the lore as it was when you submitted it did not put the same restrictions on demonic and celestial beings. That said, even with the new opening blurb, the connection between this plane and the demonic void is facilitated already by Nyarlathotep, so you still don't need to worry about that.

Beyond that I have no question of what your character is like, nothing in your sheet seems to contradict any other part, your heritage affects your character's backstory, personality and abilities in an easily understandable way and the quality of your sheet makes it much easier to accept on the spot.

Hopefully that helps and does not sound too hypocritical.

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@Cubix

I was originally hoping that one of them would show up at the meeting and tell of dangers in the north, but that won't be happening. At least not on this in game day. Still perfectly fine with it happening later though. On a similar note there no reason for the hunt for my mcguffin to take you out of the city, but I suppose Sariel's information could be imperfect or it could be moved so I could maybe move you anywhere I wanted.

@jordy0403

I appreciate, that you explained your powers, but I was hopping you would address some of my questions about the bio and particularly make it matter that he is half angel. I know the lore for the rp is currently limited (I hope to work with Leslie on fixing that today), but what little there is makes such a character kinda a big deal. I won't be accepting this character. Generally I would like to have seen a longer sheet, though this is not required. What really puts me off personally, and I guess that's all the matters, is that the bio leaves me confused about the character and that his ancestry is virtually irrelevant to the character.

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That took forever and it wasn't even very much. Oh and if anyone wants some sort of divine interaction to make things interesting let me know. it will come eventually anyway to put people on trail of plot things, but if you think you need it now, that's fine.

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Sariel's mouth was held open wide as he starred at his youngest child. He knew that his initial rage was the wrong course of action for dealing with this and Lucinda's great grace in addressing Rida was proof enough of that, but now before him Lethonel was trying to put it off not only as nothing to worry about, but a good thing. Clearly there was something wrong with the king's world. Maybe it was him.

Sariel rested his elbow on the table and met his cheek to his fist. He looked down to the table and then up at Lethonel again, this time both smiling and shaking his head in disbelief at what he was about to say. "I suppose this will be one of very few breaks from the seriousness of running the kingdom." Turning to address Rida he continued. Young Lady. I suppose tomorrow you will be permitted to skip your classes. on the condition that you aid Lethonel in Finding the Deiran for me. It is very important.

It was then that the doors burst open and servants with carts of food came into the dinning hall. They went around to every member of the Royal family and placed before them a plate of... well nothing fancy at all. Just some sausage, rolls, bits of fruit and eggs. "I thought I wanted something more of a commoner's breakfast today" Sariel announced before chuckling to himself.

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@Cubix

oh that makes sense. I interpreted it as a library in the castle, which is not what I wanted, but you actually combined both things into the same thing in a clever enough way I just failed to realize. oops

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@Cubix

You didn't mention the task Sariel gave Lethonel. Which is kinda what I was hoping for. Its fine though. I'll just work around it... when I'm done procrastinating and do some projects. Hurrah sloth.

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@Cubix

Thanks. I mean making things easier for me is totes the only thing that matters right?

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@Cubix

The other things is though for the sake of Sariel, Lethonel having a response would be helpful... I guess I can just try and work around it, and just describe the food coming in or something.

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@jordy0403

More improved strength with no context for what that strength can accomplish. I cannot hold this against you as I still even after bringing it up before still have not defined what my two characters can do with their super strength. Its just pretty prevalent across all the characters and undefined i every case. Again not actually something I can hold against the character. It says healing. Is this the ability to cast something like healing spells or a healing factor kind of thing to let him recover from his own wounds faster?

The backstory leaves me a little confused. Why is what his mother said on her deathbed important? Why did he run away from his foster family exactly? I mean there's plenty of reasons one can come up with, but as it is I am just left to assume that it vaguely has to do with not being loved enough by them or something. Why the second closest village and not the first closest village? His personality makes it seem like Jinx is actually a pretty okay guy. Why did he have such trouble accepting goodness especially given his angel blood? Finally I am not sure the significance of Jinx being half angel besides that it gives him cool powers. And I guess that's fine. I mean why does anyone choose any inspiration for a character? Cool powers is probably up there. That said an angel, a being of pure light, making it into this world and inseminating a woman is kinda a big deal to this world as it kinda breaks the rules. They aren't supposed to be here. Doesn't mean they can't. Demons have done far worse to the balance of the world. Or at least Nyarlathotep has. And because its a big deal to the world I would kinda hope that it would be important to their son as well.

You don't need to address everything, but these are the questions I have after reading the bio.

@Legion02

I need to bug Avanhelsing. I assume that's what was hold Leslie up before this weekend.

@Cubix

Forgot to answer your question about breakfast. I want to have at least one go around again and probably dole out a sort of punishment to Rida. We can probably hand wave the rest after that. Since permission has been given to use Lucinda for now I might get a post in for the king and queen later, but I am worried about doing Lucinda justice.

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@jordy0403

Tired. Will sleep on it. Probably will have questions in the morning.