Cultural Titan

Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

@Urbanliner

Better on abilities.

Nothing really changed on the personality side, but that wording makes me hate it a lot less.

"As he joined, his rivals dropped out one by one as hard infantry training went on" seems at first to suggest that his rivals left because he joined and then that it was because of his training.

I take it English isn't your first language? its not a problem, but it may affect how I judge things.

Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

@Urbanliner

You don't need to tell me where you got the picture. I can tell.

Is that to say that he was given infantry style training as part of his pilot training? If not there is no military really, just private security firms that act somewhere between cops and counter terrorists. This could really use some cleaning up.

Are their any common threads stringing the otherwise disparate parts of his personality together. As it is it just reads that he is quite different in three separate situations.

Is their anything to know about Brian other than his training with the suit?

Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

sounds good

Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

@Urbanliner

Basing it on the stuff on the front is fine, hell using them flat out is fine.

The extra security things doesn't really address my concerns. The idea of the complaint is that there is nothing stopping literally anyone from using it and I'm not sure I want in the future for all mechs to be controlled this way from a flavor perspective. Again I'll need to get back to you on that, but for now its fine and won't affect whether or not its accepted.

The assault rifle is fine. I think the armor is going to have to be of just "average" quality since your mech has no drawbacks.

If the pop-up blade is a sword then I have no further requests in that regard. I just saw blade and assumed it was more of a knife.

Add a character to go with it and it should be fine to be accepted.

Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

Can you be more specific?

Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

@Urbanliner

Having it based on an existing mech is fine. Hell, mine is based on the Guren Mk.2 from Code Geass. That said I am unfamiliar enough with apparently a lot of mecha media so it is possible to slip past me some very exact things like the Kell Hounds mercenary group from battle tech. That happened. With that I hope you understand that I don't actually know what you are copying off hand. Probably Gundam unicorn, but i still find reasons to not watch that yet so I don't know like anything about it.

Anyway nitpicking time. The DNI system's drawback is weird. Not that it doesn't make sense or anything. I may come back to it with some suggested changes to reduce its seeming accessibility and ease of use or something though. As it is it'll be really easy for anyone to use when it hits the market and I'm not entirely sure I'm okay with that. I suppose similar arguments could be made against the system in the Luna Fighter, but I assure you I am now thinking about that too. Sorry GreenGoat if I make you change things this close to starting.

Do you intend for the assault rifle to be better than a theoretical standard and if so in what way? Is its armor supposed to be better than average and if so does it have a drawback for this?

Doesn't include a lap dance sword. Greengoat wanted another mech to have a sword fight with and another mech with perfect articulation is the perfect candidate to deliver on that fantasy. This is not a required change, but if you are willing, help a guy out.

As a side note I appreciate that you went through my example mechs and used all my terrible existing systems =P

Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

Well you won't be fighting each other early on except by mutual request so hopefully godmoding won't be too much of an issue. But then I suppose you'll all be fighting npc's controlled by me so...

Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

So does anyone have feelings one way or the other on having 1 or alternatively 2 or more rounds before teams? Maybe teams is a bad idea?

Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

@GreenGoat

Yes.

Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

@ArenaSnow

YAY! I hope to weave in things for those either out of the tourny or who just aren't in a match at the moment, but being eliminated shouldn't really happen till later for players unless decision making is that bad or they want to lose as most of the participants will be npc's. but yeah at the end when people are fighting each other we will need to be on the lookout for people trying to game the system.