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Pheonix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP)

Joshua Tamashii said
Still waiting for my app to be judged

im getting there, im going check all the unjudged and changed apps tonight. check back tomorow morning and there will definitely be something. or wait around for it but it may be a bit. sorry about the wait, we have a lot to manage. Ive actually hade yours open for a while on another tab, haha, I need to do a bit more other stuff before I get to the reviews so ill go over yours first.

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Scythe Scythe Baby said
Ok I made a few slight changes, and I made it so that the original was once a human if that can somehow bypass the "no non-humans allowed" rule. If not I'll figure something else, but feel free to critique the other aspects of my character.

I am going through all the bios tonight and ill get a review up by tomorrow.

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Rune_Alchemist said
A bad guy I take it?*whispers back* I think so. Though where are we going to get the shrimp from?
Also, I'm exhausted xDNighty night guys.

All right, night, sleep well

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Gravislayer said
How about 3 posts space before your next post? It does not seem that hard and it would work against speed posting and so 100 of post only being few paragraphs long~

what do you guys think about this

Pheonix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP)

And Also, have this:

Name: Melinor
Age: Unknown
Magic: Unknown
Magic Level: Rumored to be very high
History: Unknown
Personality: Unknown
Team Members: None
Three Strengths:
1. Unknown
2. Unknown
3. Unknown
Three Weaknesses:
1. Unknown
2. Unknown
3. Unknown
Greatest Love: Unknown
Motivation: Unknown
Appearance: He is rumored to wear a large black cloak and carry a sword, some people say he has two swords
Additional Details: Very little is known about Melinor other than that people say they have caught glimpses of him talking with the master. When asked about him the master generally laughs and calls them silly.

Pheonix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP)

Did you say Shrimp!!! Where do I sign? haha, sure, ill have to check over your bios, Im slowly working my way through all of them but ill get there eventually (some time tonight)

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lordmidget said
It looks good, but can you add a description of your magic please?

So, I looked over the change and my god, that is some powerfull magic...... like high s-class...... please change it.

He can make a blizzard, a hurricane out of thin air, (magic type #1 weather magic)
He can change the wind's velocity and can ride with the air enabling him to fly and dash with the breeze. (magic type #1.5 could be an extension of the above.)
He can make blades of wind which can kill with a slash. (Magic type #1.9 could also be an extension. But instadeath. is not allowed)
He can suck out the air from a confined space making it a total vacuum. (magic type #2 Also, almost certain death.)
Due to the advancement of his skills he can contour the light waves travelling through air enabling him to make illusions. (magic type #3 not even air related. it would be light, heat (mirage) or illusion magic.)

Also, just so you know, in Fiore, bloodline has almost nothing to do with magic power other than a father might teach a child the same magic they had. The child does not have it inherently.

Pheonix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP)

Sorry ive been gone today, in honor of my last day of school my family decided I had to go sit in the living room and listen to them talk, whoopdie doo. I finally got away. When the midget is done with his cs and if people are still up for it we can start. Also, would you guys mind making an account for lucidchart. It is a free flowchart program that I want to use for the request board so it can be somewhat interactive. If you guys dont want to deal with that then I can just use image files and such.

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KiltmanBagz said
For the most part suggest you have some critiques (which I would love to hear, this character is a work in progress, if this is the case feel free to PM me with details if you feel inclined :D )It is a little colum A little colum B, those who practice Banshe Roar get acute voice control and understanding of sound. This gives him perfect pitch when singing and such, imitating voices is more of a practices skill that comes from that foundation.

haha, to be completely honest, I just use "for the most part" as a habit, when I say it I usually mean that I have no problems with it. Sorry about that, ill take another look though and see if I can find anything I would recomend

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The midget is working on his character for now but once he is done we can start, as long as you guys dont mind waiting till tomorow or later tonight for us to post the job request board.