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The 42nd Gecko said
"Steel will fix their flaws, they will rise above human laws. All will drop to worship at your feet. I will make you forget the shame of defeat."Well played, Viktor... Well played...


Pffft. I don't know what you're talking about.
I do agree with Empath, in keeping it simple. Perhaps, in addition to making Raiments, Elemental crystals could be used to craft weapons and the like, in a system where more advanced weapons would cost more crystals to forge. (ex., A plasma caster would cost four crystals, but a handgun would cost just one.)
I dunno. In hindsight, this might be more complicated than need be, and probably not the feel you were going for.
Supposing this idea is as off as it sounds to me now, I would suggest keep it simple, much like your first post on the matter, Gisk. Perhaps 30 crystals for Knights and Monks, and 15-20 for Ascendants? (Those numbers just came from the top of my head, actual numbers would warrant a bit more discussion. The crystals would, in turn, let you make your Raiments in some varying degree of badassery. Then perhaps leftover crystals could be converted into hypothetical 'skill points, to be put into skill trees. (Which I would be more than happy to help make.)
I am very interested in this. So far everything sounds wonderful, especially the skill tree idea.
I suppose there's no actual rules or reason to not speak in present tense, it just seemed a bit off, and different to me, considering this is actually the first time I've seen anyone use present tense, at least here. Although on another website, there was an arguement on that subject that got three RP threads shut down, and one person banned. Good times.
That's quite the assumption to make. I have been too busy too work on this, else I would've had something up earlier.
Also, am I the only one bothered by the fact that Bweoti is speaking in a present tense?
Though no one outright said anything, Terry could feel stares of disgust on his back as he trudged through the filth of Freeside. He always had hated this place. For the filth that lined the streets, of course, not for the prejudice. He faced prejudice everywhere, but he had seen Powder Ganger camps that were cleaner than this dump. Still, most of the people here were bearable. Anyways, he was in town, and it was the best place to get supplies, and sell some wares without a day long walk, packing almost a hundred pounds worth of gear.

His first stop in the town would be the Silver Rush, somewhere that his reputation was rather good, in comparison to the rest of the town. As he approached the double doors, he was stopped by a man he was unfamiliar with. They must've been hiring a new guard. The guard could clearly see plenty of weapons, mostly energy guns, sticking out from his bag. "Woah, buddy. I'm going to need to take those off of your hands before you go in. You understand." He said, voice sweet as syrup.

Terry chuckled a bit. "Business must be pretty bad, if they can't even hire someone with a little bit of intimidation factor? Where's Simon?" He asked, not moving to give up his weapons. The guard was clearly uncomfortable, and slightly raised his laser rifle. "Anyways, I'm here to sell these to Gloria. Can't do much salesmanship without the wares, get it?"

"Listen, I don't want any trouble. This is my first day, just humor me." The guard said, not budging a bit. The rifle made a slight whirring noise, and lit up as the safety was turned off.

"Fine, fine, fine." Terry said, giving up all of his weapons. At least all but his switchblade. "I'm going to have a long chat with Gloria about this, though." Terry said, snarling as he walked in. His eyes took a moment to adjust to the relatively dim place, accompanied by the clicks and beeps of about a dozen energy weapons being pointed at his head. Unusually; however, they were not lowered, instead kept level with his marred visage.

"Hey, guys. What's wrong? It's your old pal Terry, I'm just here to do some business." Terry said, rather confused. He looked at Gloria, a mix of fear and confusion on his face.
The two stared at each other for a moment, before Gloria waved her hand to Jean-Baptiste, who had the guards lower their guns. "Alright, that was... weird. Anyways, I got some more energy weapons for you. You... might want to clean the blood off of them, after your new rookie lets me bring them in. Where the hell is Simon, anyways?" He asked, only to be met with angry stares. "What's wrong? Talk to me, Gloria." He said, nervously wringing his hands.

Gloria took a deep breath before responding. "You've been stealing too much from the Gun Runners. They thought that we were sending you, so they had their men come, and..." She said, trailing off. She glanced around the room. All of the guards were looking down, a sober look on their faces. Jean-Baptiste spoke up, anger tainting his already gruff voice. "Simon is dead. They shot him in the gut, so he could take his time, and bleed out. We're done doing business with you." He said, raising his plasma caster.

Terry looked up, surprise filling his glowing eyes. "No... I-I'm so sorry... I know he's been with you for quite some time now..." He stammered, a bit shaken himself. He had gotten fairly close to Simon in his time of working with the Van Graff family. "I'll get out of here, now. Please, take the weapons, no charge, as a sign of respect. I'll leave them with your new guard." Terry said, taking the course of action least likely to get him disintigrated. He hurried out, leaving most of the weapons there. He took inventory of his normal weapons, making sure the new guard hadn't done anything to them.

'Great job, Terry. That's one more bridge burnt...' He thought to himself, as he made his way to the Mormon Fort, with some RadX and RadAway to give them. The Followers of the Apocalypse were a group of people he was in very high respects with, but if he wasn't careful, he would fuck that up, too. It was a quick business, as he went in and out. The Followers were glad to have some of that on hand, and Terry surely didn't need it. They offered no pay in exchange, and though Terry was a greedy bastard, he wouldn't dare ask them to give him any.

Feeling good about himself, which he rarely did, Terry made his way over to Mick and Ralph's. He took a look around as he walked in, taking note of the only other two customers, eavesdropping a bit on their conversation. Something about traveling out into the wastes? Not unusual. People only ever really stopped here to get into The Strip, or gear up for trips out to the Mojave. Terry made a beeline to talk to Mick, wasting no time. "Hey, Mick. It's me, Terry. Listen, I know you hate my guts, but I have the caps right here, now could you help me out, and fix up my axe a bit? It's getting hard to protect myself out there with such a dull weapon." He said, the string of words escaping far quicker than he meant them to.

"Get it fixed elsewhere, creep. I saw what you did to that man from the Gun Runners." Mick replied, not even bothering to look at Terry. It was clear that he wasn't wanted there, so Terry showed himself out. Not really sure where to go next, he decided to wait for awhile, crossing the street to wait in front of the ruined building just across from Mick and Ralph's. He pulled out a bottle of Nuka Cola he had just bought from the Atomic Wrangler, and began sipping it slowly, as he mulled over his options. He didn't want to stay in Freeside too much longer, not with his reputation, but he couldn't think of anywhere to go, that would actually be productive.
After multiple computer crashes, dying devices, and a rather sudden trip to a ranch with an unsurprising lack of WiFi, I finally managed to get a post up... Sorry about taking so long. But y'know, I did a thing. Yaaaaaay.
As Ifrit made his way deeper into the forest, claws tearing trees from the path with a brutal savagery, he came crashing to a stop as he rammed into a much larger and sturdier tree, towering high above the canopy. With a growl, he looked up at the tree, a hunger for death in his eyes before he realized that the tree could feel no pain. Still, the mass of bark and leaves would make itself useful to him. With a rather unsurprising lack of agility, Ifrit dug his claws into the tree as he clambered up the side. As his claws scrabbled for a grip upon the rough bark, he peered out over the trees. Though very little could be seen out of the ordinary, he managed to see a small clearing.

Certainly, if there were to be war patrols nearby, he would find them at this clearing. Though a sneak attack would certainly benefit Ifrit, his massive stature and tendency to produce smoke removed that option. Surely, as he neared the clearing, any inside would know of his presence. Hopefully, they would stand their ground like good little morsels, rather than fleeing. But then, it was always much more fun to chase them down.

With an unearthly roar, Ifrit began slowly walking towards the clearing, his speed slowly increasing to a gallop. Trees splintered beneath his obsidian claws, making a rumbling noise echo all around the small clearing. Before he burst through the final line of trees, he paused, lowering his torso to the ground, ready to pounce. He let a silence fall over the forest, as smoke began to settle over the surrounding area, greatly lowering the visibility for all but Ifrit, a beast born into the harsh embrace of the smoke and smog.

Releasing yet another roar of monstrous proportion, Ifrit sprung forward, his massive hind legs propelling him up over the small line of trees. As he crashed down, he spun in a quick circle, his tail knocking down yet more of the trees in its wild flailing. Ifrit's amethyst eyes pierced through the smoke, allowing him to see a few figures silhouetted, wading through the heavy smoke with their weapons drawn. The scent of sweat and fear ran heavy through the air, mingling with the smoke to make a malady of smell to fill Ifrit's nose with pleasure. With a quick lunge, Ifrit closed his jaws around around the head of the first victim, making good use of the chaos that he had brought with him.

Ifrit swallowed, banishing the severed head to rest within the smoke filled cavern of a stomach deep within his Ifrit's flesh. He turned slowly to the next, disappointed that there were only four left to dispatch of. He lashed out to feast upon the closest man, his teeth sinking deep into the flesh, tearing away more body mass than he had hoped for. A sharp pain blossomed from his neck as a brave spearman managed to stab his weapon in between the hard obsidian shards that protected him from blunt attacks. Though nothing vital was pierced, an oily fluid began freely leaking out of the wound, clearly accompanied by pain.

A shriller roar was loosed from his throat, his glare turning to the man, who quickly cowered in fear. A quick swipe of the claw ripped a jagged tear through the mans flesh, spilling blood and organs across the once pure forest floor. Two men left- both armed with swords and small bucklers. Surely they could've made this a challenge? Not even a single spellcaster, nor a magically enhanced soldier. Still, given time, they would be forced to send stronger troops, in larger numbers. Shaige was a strong leader, one with great magical prowess, and he warranted a greater bounty.

For now, Ifrit would be content with dispatching of these smaller scraps. With little thought, he stepped forward, pinning one swordsman down. He shifted his weight to that foot, crushing the man. The crack of brittle bones filled the air, breaking the short silence. The lone scout screamed in terror, staring death itself in the face. Ifrit chuckled as he advanced slowly, flashing his razor sharp teeth, stained with blood. With a bloodcurdling screech, a jet of smog was blasted into the mans terrified face, choking him. Clearly surprised, the swordsman stumbled, dropping his weapons to cover his eyes. With the man thoroughly distracted, he brought down his claws with brutal force, just clipping the mans knees enough to cripple him. Though most smoke rises, Ifrit's magical smoke was heavier, clinging to the ground. When the swordsman fell, no longer able to make use of his legs, he quickly realized that he had been sentenced to a slow death, inhaling the deadly smog.

Proud of his work, Ifrit took a deep breath, drawing in the scent of the death and destruction he had spread. However, hidden deep beneath the scent of blood, he caught a whiff of something that he didn't like one bit. Someone was still alive. Head quickly twisting from side to side, he inhaled in small short breaths through his nose, the scent slowly becoming clearer as he took slow steps, nearing the source. He had hoped that this wouldn't happen. He could only imagine how he would be punished if any escaped on his watch. Ifrit looked around furtively. More smoke fumed from his pores as he got more frustrated with this game of cat and mouse. Despite his power, and how proud he was of it, a doubt lingered in the back of his mind that he might disappoint his master.
Having a freshly delivered pile of corpses from Stamrad, Viktor got to work, but was surprised to see that Stamrad had taken some alive, as prisoners. Without a thought, he turned them into Husks, removing their free will and ability to disobey orders. Though truly unnecessary, it would speed up his progress greatly. Thanks to his literal connection to the dungeon, he was able to keep track of, and speak with anyone in his dominion with ease. Speaking with the Husks as he worked away, creating more Broken Beasts, he ordered them to begin digging out the floor beneath him, to create a rather intimidating pit, as well as mine for minerals. By his design, a narrow path was to be left, leading to his worktable, as well as a pedestal for the glowing red rock to rest upon. He would prefer to keep it where he could work with it, and test it's capabilities without having to move it back and forth. Though he had not yet tried, he had a feeling the destructive aura of the foreign object would make it very difficult to move.

Viktor took a brief look down at his work, metal arms whirring as they quickly worked. Thanks to the corruption of the blueprint, he would be unable to restore his Broken Beasts to their former glory, but these weaker creatures were still rather valuable in battle, with all of their capabilities that had survived. So, he crafted quickly the sad creatures shrieking at their hideous bodies as he imbued them with life. After churning out about fifteen of these, he took two of the Husks, and had them leave to continue the work, and to not stop until they had another ten, at the least.

He then turned his attention to the destruction of his beautiful fort caused by the destructive rock. Though the angle had made the destruction centered in the ceiling, which shouldn't cause many problems, it had ruined the structural integrity of one wall, which would need repairs. He sent off four of the remaining seven to work on that, but ordering them to rebuild the wall anew, and deliver the old bricks to him, for his work. Already, his mind was working, clockwork gears quite literally turning as he began plotting a nefarious plot to prevent attacks from more onslaughts of magic, as his army would encounter great problems in this aspect of war. "Weaklings, relying on magic to kill their enemies. True might needs not such theatrics." Viktor muttered to himself, before beginning his work.

Alright, I'm working on an app right now, for a couple of things, but as I have hit some roadblocks, I figure it'll probably take awhile. I figure before I put too much work into it, I would run an idea past you, see if I'm wasting my time on this.

My main idea would be a security corporation, I kind of private organization to provide security to developing towns, cargo transports, etc. The corporation would have been founded by a group of military survivors, but later taken over by greedy big-Whigs, who turn the business into a corrupt corporation, squeezing pennies out from those foolish enough to turn to them.
I would have a separate character, an individual. My idea is having her being one of the founding members, attempting to overthrow the corporation for it's corrupt beliefs.

I've been playing around with this idea since I saw the Interest Check, but my main problem would it being too self centered. It would still be fairly easy for other individual characters to worm their way into this, but there appears to be a lack of that... Suggestions? Should I give that up?
Fixed up just as much as I feel I'm ever going to, unless you have something wrong with it. Bringing the racial diversity!
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