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Well, there's a lot about me. I guess the really quick and dirty guide is that I'm a 21 year old transgirl college student with a lot of interests, mostly video game and media related. I'm kind of all over the place when it comes to RPing and usually prefer fantasy stuff. Really if you want to get to know me, just have a chat with me! Over some random OOC thread or just PM me to talk, I don't mind.
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Actually I just chose Ken out of thin air.
Mostly took it cause I recently watched the Street Fighter fan movie so the names Ken and Ryu were on my mind. Completely forgot about him in P3. Wasn't a fan of him to begin with in that game.
Mostly took it cause I recently watched the Street Fighter fan movie so the names Ken and Ryu were on my mind. Completely forgot about him in P3. Wasn't a fan of him to begin with in that game.
Yeah CS done. I guess. Done until I'm told to change it anyway.
*shuts up his usual loud mouth for fear of igniting a powder keg*
I think my CS is about done. It's a bit dramatic, I know.
I think my CS is about done. It's a bit dramatic, I know.
Also shit, did not realize that was not simply something you did consciously. Sorry for assuming Noel.
chukklehed said
I said I wasn't criticizing, I'm just giving advice.see the difference is that my intent is to help, not to make feel bad.
Criticism doesn't mean to insult, it just means to note flaws. And I never said you intended anything negative
chukklehed said
Also not to criticize, but your third person could use some work. Not much, it's actually pretty good, but just a little tweaking.Like when you were giving feedback, instead of "She'd say it would benifit" You should have said "Noel would say". You should always indicate who is talking first, both because you might be talking about somebody else anyway and because it adds more to the effect than just replacing "I" with "She". Hope that helps.
I don't think I've ever seen anybody criticize another persons outside-RP habits. This is a first.
Wow, I bet you would have a field day with me.
Noel said
Alrighty, feedback time again. So, chukklehed, the basic ideas look fine... but could use more detail. She'd say it would benifit from some lengthening and fleshing out, the background in particular. You also missed the age section. And thats fair enough Lionheart, but the tv world does play a pretty big part in it as she sees it. Namely look at persona 4 arena, the p3 characters can summon a persona without need of their evokers while in the tv world too and they didn't have a shadow to accept ever. So at the end of the day she thinks the cards are just an element of the tv world. Heh, though these kind of debates around the intricacies are part of the reason she'd think just using evoker like things is the better bet. They for a fact are known to work in the real world. Also just like to keep players having the same general set of capabilities, not having just one character have something unique no one else does.
Oh Oh do me again! Not done with history yet, which is admittedly a massive part, but the rest is pretty much final.
Wow shit... Just realized I'm writing a really dark character. He may even come across as a Gary Stu kinda. Not done yet though.
EDIT: Questions. Persona evolution, will it happen/how will it work. Because I have it planned out as part of my character's arc.
What about having our character's facing their shadow be the requirement for evolution? rather than just the summoning at all.
EDIT: Questions. Persona evolution, will it happen/how will it work. Because I have it planned out as part of my character's arc.
What about having our character's facing their shadow be the requirement for evolution? rather than just the summoning at all.
I'll think about stuff then
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