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Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

I thought the fact that Aiko and Kota were Jinchuriki was a secret?

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

I am fine developing the techniques later. Also, the Weapon Reversal was supposed to be a spatial manipulation technique, thus transporting a weapon in hand. Can do with out.

There we go.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

Ok. Tell me if this is alright, Prince:

Name: Taiho Suzuna
Age|Gender: 14 | Male
Alliance: Konohagakure
Rank: Current generation Genin.
Clan: N/A
Kekkei Genkai: Magnet Release [Lightning and Earth]

Traits:

• Spatial Reasoning - Keen skill to geometrically analyze a specific space and make split-second deductions in order to process and predict information. Naturally, the eye can perceive information and naturally makes 10 second deductions on, based on space, direction, movement and sensation what will naturally happen. Taiho has a higher capacity for this completely natural ability and can greatly predict direction, position, and movement. As long as it is not beyond his ability to perceive, he is more capable of deducing an outcome of something moving through a spatial field and projecting where its path will take it. With this unique ability, it is far easier for Taiho to predict the path of a Kunai, even with their fast rate of movement, or to analyze the oncoming strike of an opponent. It is due to making complex, nano-second calculations constantly to produce valid information quicker that his ability to analyze motion is far superior to an ordinary human.

Appearance: Link

History:

The Suzuna Linage

The recovery from the war was a heavy toll on Taiho’s entire family. It started first with Taiho’s grandfather, Seriyu Suzuna, whom was a devout warrior for the great Daiymo Sai. He was such a proud man that he even offered up his first born, Seriyaku, to be a willful instrument for Sai and his glorious innovations for the future. Seriyu was a gifted ninja with origins that dated back to the great Sand Village long ago. He held a nature release that was unique to himself and rare upon the battlefield and, with his great power, he killed many all for the glorious and righteous Sai!

It wasn’t a surprised that, in the great battle in Amegakure, that Seriyu, quite aged, was present. He lasted quite a while, however he was actually bested due the collateral destruction of one of Sai’s attacks. It was said that, before the attack, Seriyu conjured up a monstrous, devastating Iron Dragon that tore through the ranks of the enemy and consumed just about every attack that was tossed at it. After that battle he was known by the survivors as the Iron Dragon.

Seriyaku, a man that did not hold such an affinity for ninjutsu, was also there in that battle. However, when the numbers of his allies fell, despite Sai’s strength remaining, he fled for his life. He had a woman and child and he was sure to bring them with him. Seriyaku regretted that action for the entirety of his life. He was one of the men that was unlucky enough to be branded with Sai’s curse mark. Although it gave him strength, it was a permanent mark, which he had no ability to hide, that inevitably caused him trouble every place he went. It wasn’t long before, in hiding, the hunters tracked him down and killed him and his woman in front of the child. They, out of some act of sympathy, spared the child.

Taiho only vaguely remembers his grandfather and the few times he did meet that man they were typically violent and abusive. Seiyu was violent towards his son, Taiho’s mother, and Taiho all the same. His father was not. His father was stern and hardly affectionate, but he never hit Taiho or Taiho’s mother. He did care for them both, even if he was terrible at showing it. Taiho’s mother, whom was constantly busy, hardly had time for the boy too and when the three of them all went on the run there was hardly anytime for rearing the kid at all.

Taiho’s personality, or lack thereof, demonstrated itself early and, as he matured some, he became a boy that was unfettered by most things. When his father or mother had to kill someone that had been tracking them Taiho wouldn’t flinch. He didn’t even cry with both his parents were killed right before his eyes. He was left with nothing and was taken to some foreign land in which he was added to the orphan population. He didn’t associate with anyone there, nor did he think that he was anything like them. He hardly would speak, would always do as he was told, and spent almost all his free time staring out the nearest window. Not many cared for Taiho. Although he was spared, many constantly questioned why. Why was he allowed to live when Sai and his men killed so many? Taiho’s linage wasn’t hidden. Most shun him or disrespect him or outright detest him, however he’d maintained his neutral persona as to not let it bother him, no matter how aggravated his harassers can be. Even those scorned enough to physically attack him aren't’ enough to really incite malice out of the boy. He always picks himself up and just continues on with his day as if it were the most normal thing in the world.

It was recently, when he became of age, that he decided that he would be a ninja. He saw Genin from out his window and realized that they had wages and some independence. They also had a little respect and maybe, just maybe, deep down in himself, to which he was unaware, he yearned for that respect too.

However, he looked at becoming a ninja as some means that he could use in order to stand on his own two legs and he was unafraid of any dangerous associated with the position. It was a stable pay, so long as you didn’t die, and the work wasn’t always strenuous and one could learn a great deal of useful skills in training. He held experience in the area from his upbringing with his father and grandfather. He’d never been taught the techniques by them, and hardly even knew his grandfather enough to say he learned anything about ninjutsu from the man. Being on the run, watching others die, predicting enemy movements and seeing brutal fight after brutal fight was his everyday life as a child.

It was simply going to be a job for him.
As such, he started training. He was favored by one of the academy teachers who helped him with extra lessons. His name was Tataki Shurimi and he claimed up and down that Taiho was a spitting image of Tataki’s dead little brother. As such, he taught Taiho about some ninjutsu beyond the D-Rank techniques, though Taiho still has a long way to go.

Taiho recently graduated from the academy. As a definite Genin he’s prepared to do whatever it is that he is told to do because this is his life now.

Personality: He is a fairly detached sort of guy. Despite his young age, Taiho is completely emotionless. He is not the sort of guy that expresses emotion in the same way as others do. Where one would become frightened or excited he is unperturbed. He is a difficult, if not impossible, boy to stirr and typically is a non-associate to most of anything. He doesn’t align himself to any cause or group unless he believes it is something that he has to do or is responsible for.

He carries himself as a neutral guy. He looks at his allies and his enemies in the same sort of light and to the same standards. He is never biased or prejudice and is able to judge someone without any sort of favoritism. He looks at all individuals as they are, people, no matter their status or rank. He would tell anyone person the same exact thing, no matter who or what they were, should the conditions of his statement be the same. He is fair and doesn’t judge others based on what they have, how capable they are, their capacity or their strength.

Despite having some whims, such as what drove him to become a ninja, he is fairly neutral and unmotivated. He doesn’t do things for pride, pleasure, or to make himself feel better or worse, thus he is a boy without much conviction. He’s somewhat stagnant and would be the individual that does the exact same thing each and everyday simply because that is all that he needs to do. He isn’t driven by curiosity, desire for revenge or thirst for power. He is not drawn to much to the point that it would drive him to any cause or mission, thus he takes information as it is and does what he has to do in order to survive. He doesn’t think about justice or tyranny, nor does he enforce it, however he could commit acts of justice and tyranny, without care or thought, should it mean he would survive. Being unattached and without any major drive means that he is easy to manipulate, due to his lack of care for himself and interest in others, and he could kill a child without remorse or save one with little personal desire, though he’d only be driven so far if it were deemed absolutely necessary. He is a child of necessity, as in he wouldn’t do anything that wasn’t related to his own survival and what he absolutely has no choice in. He is also a child of detachment, as in no matter what choices he makes he looks back at them with disinterest.

One could look at his disinterest and call him emotionless or impassive, but he does truly have emotions. He just doesn’t have the motivation to express them. He doesn’t care for life in such a way that he would be driven to cry when someone dies or to celebrate when someone is cured. He is simply a boy that quietly exists, in nature, but doesn’t really have any real impact. Though, he is hardly emotionless. He is more of a wall, built up to filter seemingly everything non-necessary about the world. He’s been like this almost his entire life.

Combat Style: Weapons Master Technician, Long ranged

Taiho is a Genin with a keen eye and a talent for marksmanship. He favors a simple weapon such as the kunai. Although he is a long ranged specialist and can hit targets of a great distance away, he is also proficient with close quarters armed combat. Taiho is incredibly skilled with throwing weapons and possesses the aim of a ninja of a greater rank than himself. He has focused a great deal of his training on close quarters kunai combat and his throwing skills as to further refine himself as a ninja.

Nature Release: Lightning and Earth
Jutsu List:

• Generic Sealing Technique - Ability to seal a weapon in a specialized tattoo, marking, scroll or upon another weapon. Taiho actually has two tattoos seals of this nature. There's one his right palm and one on his left palm, infused with chakra, that house exactly 20 kunai in them each. These specialized seals are created to act as a dimensional medium to allow the user to summon the kunai in hand for easy, ready use.

Weaponry: 50 Kunai [20 In each hand and 10 in pack]

Miscellaneous: Has an untapped gift for Magnet Release

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Oh no. Isai is more interested in Zombies that can transform into puddles of water :0

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Don't worry gais.
Isai is on his way. :0

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Insomnia could totally post now!

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

~Saiyaka~

Honestly...Busting in like that was honestly disappointing. All respect Saiyaka had for the Raikage was gone the moment he decided to throw himself through a perfectly good wall. Did he think that being a chauvinist was appealing? That he'd get all the assembly to be awed and befriend him because he was the strong and amazing Raikage? Really. That wasn't thought through. Saiyaka had a curious eye on the man that was sitting where the Hokage was supposed to be. He was weird....Something was unnatural about him. He was the only one in the room that really made her feel uneasy. For some reason, despite clearly seeing him there, Saiyaka felt as if he wasn't there at all.

Saiyaka's attention wouldn't remain on Marashi for long. Saiyaka would go to sit on the table in the center of the room, literally sitting on the table. The table was cold on her bare legs, but she'd become tired of standing already. She placed one hand on the table, carefully watching as the Land of Iron representative pulled out a letter, which looked as if it were in the hands of a very frustrated man, and he read it. There was some bias in his voice, but the words that followed were also unsurprising. There was one part that did bother her, however. One, key part.

Thank you for the Jinchuriki!
Saiyaka remained sitting a moment as everyone seemed to fall silent and the samurai asked for the opinion of everyone in the office. Apparently, this was going to be a meeting about Konoha, go figure. Saiyaka stood up a moment before, in an instant, she lost her balance. Saiyaka would feel a rush that'd make her head spin. She'd stumble a moment before her back would find the nearest wall of the room. She'd be at a loss for breath for a moment, as if someone had knocked the wind from her.

"Daisuke...The Ichibi...Has been forcibly extracted..." Saiyaka would say, between breaths, tears streaming down her usually steeled eyes. They weren't just emotional tears either. What she'd just experienced had been fairly painful, but it allowed her to know just what had happened even such a distance away. She hadn't said it to anyone in particular and wouldn't be in the mood to really elaborate on the implications of what she'd just said...But from her emotional response and how distant she'd become it would be easy for anyone in the room to realize that she was not lying. Yume would now have the problem of just having one of her ninja, a child, murdered by the hands of the Hokage who now held the Ichibi hostage in some way.

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Too bad. I could have saved Daisuke.
Saiyaka did place a seal on Daisuke earlier in the Rp to prevent what just happened, but, well, Nero is leaving so there'd be no point. Guess that'll be a gimmie. lol

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~Isai Kyouko~

As usual, Isai won. Shadow conceded with Isai's promise, which was legitimate, and gave the information regarding the mission. Here Isai was, thinking it was going to be something like chores or hunting down a missing pet or refurnishing some rich guy's house...When it was a serious, real mission. Isai couldn't help but grin, a devious little grin, as the details of the mission spilled from Shadow's shadowy lips. This guy was finally realizing just how incredible Isai was. Sneaking into Konoha? Capturing the second most powerful Bijuu? Raping kunoichi? Oh wait. That last part wasn't in the mission credentials, but the first two were! Isai was so excited. His immature started to spill out as his eyes glistened and his interest expressed itself as an eager expression.

He couldn't wait. Oh! All the things he wanted to try! Isai wanted to try and stockpile some Konoha ninja! They had Sharingan, Byakugan, Bug Clans, Dog Clans, and people with all sorts of neat, rare, difficult to acquire ninjutsu techniques that Isai was just craving to get his hands on! Oh! Just thinking about it brought Isai back. How long had it been since he felt the wonderful feeling of human organ's wriggling between his fingers? The smell of dead, rotting tissue and the glorious melody of when he cut it or stitched it together! Oh! He was probably so out of practice! He couldn't remember the last time he'd gotten to play with a real dead body, other than his select 5, which were in need of serious upgrades anyway. They'd been dead so long that their blood dried up and their organs were as hard as chalk. They were more like the dummies he used them as. No. They weren't the same as fresh, warm celluar systems all interconnected by muscles and tissues. Isai yearned to have that at hand yet again.

"Yes!" Isai would exclaim, "Definintely!" He added right behind, really wanting to do this mission. He'd get to kill and killing was what he loved to do because killing meant new toys! Isai was going to get his hands on something spectacular...Even if it were some weakling Uchiha or Hyuuga he could bring out its abilities to the fullest and make a deadly weapon out it. He was practically about to drool over the idea of having something fresh from Konoha on his chopping block. He'd be sure to add some cool attachments to whatever he'd catch, like a nifty extra arm or maybe replacing the ribs with rubber for durability or maybe...Maybe-The ideas were endless.

"Even if I have to go with the Monkey, I will get this mission done!" Isai would say, clearly referring to Hatsu. "Hurry up! Lets go now!" No preparation, no supplies, and no planning. There would be none of that. Isai wanted to go now and now was the best time to go! The faster the left the sooner they'd get there and the quicker Isai could start shopping for new playthings!

~Kii~

The waterballoons crashed into Taiho. They were quick and carried enough force to knock him down. As Ryou swooped in and grabbed Kii the boy initially resisted. He wanted to destroy Taiho! He trusted Taiho and knew Taiho from so long...Yet all that was a trap. Taiho tricked them and then set a trap for them. The entire time had all been a trap! They had been friends and Kii once looked up to Taiho as a senpai. Now, all he was an enemy that wronged him in the worst way.

Taiho hurt Kii's friends.
Growling, Kii would grab Ryou's arm. Ryou was right. They couldn't stay. As much as Kii wanted to fight, as much as he wanted to vent all his hateful emotions on Taiho, they needed to get out of here. They needed to run away and find out where Shira was. If they didn't find Shira then...Kii didn't even want to think about what could happen. What this would mean on them, the village, the mission, and how he'd feel about himself if anything terrible happened to her. He'd never forgive himself. As much as he hated Taiho right now...If anything happened to Shira or Ryou right now Kii would hate himself a dozen times more.

Kii would notice some Kikaichu. That meant Shira was at least still alive, they were supporting her and it looked like they were somewhat leading the way.
"Kikaichu-" Kii would observe, wanting Ryou to follow what he was looking at. If they could just follow those bugs they could find her.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

*clears throat*

So, I was wondering if I absolutely had to use the exact same format for custom techniques?
I was kinda wanting to just make them paragraph style instead of list style...If that is at all alright? I made sure to hit all the required information in it. I just feel it looks a little better in my specific profile.